O.S.-Holiday in K.M. (COMPLETED) -Part 2,3 - page 4,6

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Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome ...Fantastic

could not control my laughter

please continue...waiting for the next update

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG!!!!!! Its so funny of Geet to drench Maan with colours. 😆

And to add fuel to the fire there is dadi with handicam to shoot the massacare.Fabulous buddy.

Do you even need to ask that you shud cont. or not.Of couse

YEEESSS !!!!!!!!!

LOVED D START.

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice start... definitely will love more if u continue it...

geet dadi duo was gr8... now will we be getting the payback by maan???

btw HAPPY HOLI...

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HansaN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome start pls continue dear thx

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hell yes do continue with this
man that was so funny how they got him
poor maan was like no way is he gonna let others make fun of him when they see his snap and video

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AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
<font color="#CC0033" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">nice start... definitely will love more if u continue it...

geet dadi duo was gr8... now will we be getting the payback by maan???

btw HAPPY HOLI...

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About payback we will see that in next update .

And Happy holi to you too.

Edited by amks - 12 years ago

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AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

part 2

Catching geet's hand maan stopped her and pulled her hand to make her fall on his chest. Geet looked up in maan's eyes.

"Ab bataiye Mrs khurana, rang diya jaye ya chhod diya jaye"-Maan smirked and picked her up in his arms.

Daadi said from little distance-"Geet ko chodiye maan nahi toh hum ye vedio youtube pe upload kar denge."- She showed the camcorder in hand and a smile played on her lips.

Maan moved toward daadi few steps and said-"daadi please iss vedio ko youtube pe mat upload kijiyega. Main geet ko chhod raha hoon" - saying this maan leaved geet and she fell down in tub full of colours which daadi and geet had kept for maan earlier.

Colours from the tub spreaded all around and Geet was fully drenched with colours and was lying in tub motionless due to shock.

Maan walked toward daadi now-"daadi aapke kahe anusar maine geet ko chhod diya. Ab camcorder mujhe dijiye."

Daadi was stepping back slowly-slowly-"Maan, humne geet ko chhodne ko kaha tha, na ki geet ko rang me daalne ke liye issliye ab to hum wahi karenge jo humne kaha tha"

"Daadi kam se kam mujhe wo vedio to ek baar dekhne dijiye"Maan said trying his best to act.

"hum aapke kisi bhi chaal me nahi phasenge maan"-Daadi said moving back to maintain distance between herself and maan.

SPLASH

This time daadi was prey of Maan and dev's plan. Dev who was all ready with colours standing on 1st floor was just waiting for daadi to come beneath him. Dev had already signalled maan to send daadi beneath him and maan was just trying to keep her mind busy by talking and sending her back.

Daadi was not at all ready for the sudden downpour of colours and was just staring her sari and hand which was completely coloured in green. Maan picking up opprtunity took the camcorder from daadi's hand and ran away.

Maan was knowing that he could not hide camcorder for too long. So, he decided to play bluff. He ran to his room and changed full recorded cd with new cd and kept the cd in his pocket.

Now he decided to go back in hall because game is not over yet. Daadi and geet will certainly try to drench him and dev . Beside that he also have to record their coloured faces.

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Thanks for all the comments and likes. More to come in next update.

Important notice-
Sorry, but i will not be able to pm from today. As i update from my mobile. It is giving problem to me to send pm to every buddy. Whoever want can remove me from buddy list because there will be no pm from next time.

Edited by amks - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

good one maan and dev too
wow things are getting more and more fun here right
ahhh now its geet and dadi time again to get them

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Full on badlaa by Maan.

Poor Geet and Dadi,fell prey to Dev and Maan.

Very funny and happy update.

And about the PM, dont worry I'll book mark the thread.

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

lovely update... i too wish a cool family like this... but most of them dn't play holi😡... according to them its a wastage... me baccha loves it and had to wait till noon 4 my frnds to come... 😭

atlst here i cn imagine wht a scene would be wd geet & dadima in one team and dev & maan in another one.. gr8 update👍🏼...

i'll check for updates... but if u hv a page 4 updates here on IF or in fb thn plz post the link

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