THE LOCKET (1) - Page 59

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

do i need to say Avi mam?? I cant give long comments like onir nor i cn explain how good and unique u r in story. its gripping..but yet feels soo good

Prologue se...dadimaa kaa pov tak..i loved it.

U ppl are completely mesmerizing me...i dont know how many more threads i have to stalk...😆

Im all geared up gal . U rock,,,,,its simple but have an impact!!! 😳

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Yo yo yooo! Me lurved it. But I still have confusion as in is this Nainatara the girl in Prologue, Dev's mangetar? Then why did Geet's name opo up in prev chapter. I have to run and read again I guess😕

I love love loved the bus scene pata hain. A very common scene we experience each day and her reaction had me cheer for her. More than her reaction to him, I want to salute the girl for what she said to the woman. We have such spotlight snatchers everywhere, and they snatch the spotlight for all the wrong reasons, and that jerk of a guy, how dare he bloody have the guts to badmouth her, despite of his deeds. Asshole.

You know the dream had me grinning stupidly. Hritik is the only man who can look good even in a garbage bin. Damn it that yellow shirt and white pants..hayyee I can so imagine him in that attire, and no one else could look good in it I tell you. Hritik Hritik Hritik. My heart just went pitter patter😆

Me likey likey the slap😆 Hud had thappad😆🤣 You know the name Dev is my undoing. No matter how saint he is, his name irks me, courtesy the serial. So me loving thappadon ka baarish.😆😆😆😆

Me loving loving the ishtory, and me running to re read the previous parts. I was so damned confident about Dev's fiance being Geet and Maan being uneasy because of this alliance something like that. Seems that I got it all wrong after all😕

PS: Did I tell you me lurveess you for my first gift😳 *breath choking hug*
PPS: Re read previous chapters now I am more confident about it and got a lot of information. Me slaps my head for being isshhtupid.
Avi, you are doing a great job so go with the flow, your story which will unfold slowly and interestingly will answer all the questions we have, I have faith in you.🤗
PPPS: Last but no the least, I loved my B'day gift😃

My gift was the 1st I feel good about that.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you Shika🤗

Dosti ka ek asool hain Madam..No sorry no thank you 😳

Wishing you every happiness and joy on your birthday and in your life... May you engineer some marvels for me...😊

He he I can engineer dhamkis, kicks and Nautanki and if Onir is reading this, she would say yes😆

My gift was the 1st😳 I feel good about that.

*Grins*😃

Thanks for the encouragement and although I have told you this before I will say this again that for a writer like you to speak positively about my efforts adds so much fuel to the engine or ink to the pen or power to the fingers😆 I should say... Dekha theek se thanks bhi nahi bol sakti.

One more time you use that Writer word, I am going to jump off a cliff. You know it is said that Lord Hanuman doesn't know his strength. The same goes with you. You don't know how beautifully you write.😳

The next two chapters will open up the character sketch completely and also the story, phir toh sirf pyar, pyar, pyar... and a little MUs for fun...

Whoppiiee! Me gonna enjoy this story through out😃

🤗Enjoy your birthday...

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Originally posted by: krati5

naintara😲... all d way it ws NT... nd SHE HATES DEV...😲😲... oh wow... now i m loving it😆... 👍🏼 gr8 gng avi... so the gal dev introduced to dadi in first chap is nt NT... nd i love d banner😳

She doesn't hate him, she hates the asar he has on her...