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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Im excited to read ...wanna know whose Monologue u will update!!!!😳

Kittu you did not even tell me if you liked anything so far...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
😎
Naintara *whistling* 😃
Avi, very less ppl show Naintara in a nyc n positive character, confessing li'l of my likes, I wud say, I've never disliked the lady, apart from her particular character in GHSP .. Otherwise I've alwyz loved her character whenever any writer has portrayed her in a positive light... N believe me when I say that Avi, I simply loved the character yew presented her in 👏
Now comes the starting, Hrithik Man I even loved him in that blue shirt wid red pants 😆 Some ppl may find it funny but Hrithik did look charming then too 😳
Song's soft n melodious .. Hrithik-Song combo , mast 😉
Hoooh ! bus The harshest of the reality of our society ! I grinned wid Naintara's reaction... Hit hai bandi 😃 N then that auntie, dil to kr rha tha k Naintara unke bhi ek lagaye, but khair wo to nhi hosakta tha, but dil garden garden hogya wid her words to that auntie 😆 👏 Dialogues were very powerful n I love the strength each word portrayed 👏
Dev bechara 😆
The Khurana himself got slapped on very first day wid no mistake of his , poor Dev 😆 I can imagine Abhinav putting his hand on his cheek having most innocent expression n thinking wat did he actually do to deserve such 'warmed' welcome, oopsie, I mean slap 😆 😆 😆
Prologue n Dev's thought were definitely about Naintara, I got that 😉
In love wid the story Avi 👏 Dun take this from ur friend take it from a reader 😃
Dev-Naintara ki spicy love story k lye em more than waiting 😳
But hamaraa seedha sadha lover boy is also awaited 😉
When I read Geet's name there, instantly a thought crossed my otherwise useless top floor k she isn't the one wid Dev, but I never said that 😳
Khair, lastly Dun ever think k this isn't appealing enough , yew r doing absolutely fab job, n I mean that jaani 🤗
Edited by Koolsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kittu you did not even tell me if you liked anything so far...😕


do i need to say Avi mam?? I cant give long comments like onir nor i cn explain how good and unique u r in story. its gripping..but yet feels soo good

Prologue se...dadimaa kaa pov tak..i loved it.

U ppl are completely mesmerizing me...i dont know how many more threads i have to stalk...😆

Im all geared up gal . U rock,,,,,its simple but have an impact!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yo yo yooo! Me lurved it. But I still have confusion as in is this Nainatara the girl in Prologue, Dev's mangetar? Then why did Geet's name opo up in prev chapter. I have to run and read again I guess😕

I love love loved the bus scene pata hain. A very common scene we experience each day and her reaction had me cheer for her. More than her reaction to him, I want to salute the girl for what she said to the woman. We have such spotlight snatchers everywhere, and they snatch the spotlight for all the wrong reasons, and that jerk of a guy, how dare he bloody have the guts to badmouth her, despite of his deeds. Asshole.

You know the dream had me grinning stupidly. Hritik is the only man who can look good even in a garbage bin. Damn it that yellow shirt and white pants..hayyee I can so imagine him in that attire, and no one else could look good in it I tell you. Hritik Hritik Hritik. My heart just went pitter patter😆

Me likey likey the slap😆 Hud had thappad😆🤣 You know the name Dev is my undoing. No matter how saint he is, his name irks me, courtesy the serial. So me loving thappadon ka baarish.😆😆😆😆

Me loving loving the ishtory, and me running to re read the previous parts. I was so damned confident about Dev's fiance being Geet and Maan being uneasy because of this alliance something like that. Seems that I got it all wrong after all😕

PS: Did I tell you me lurveess you for my first gift😳 *breath choking hug*
PPS: Re read previous chapters now I am more confident about it and got a lot of information. Me slaps my head for being isshhtupid.
Avi, you are doing a great job so go with the flow, your story which will unfold slowly and interestingly will answer all the questions we have, I have faith in you.🤗
PPPS: Last but no the least, I loved my B'day gift😃
Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Didnt i say it was Nt 😎 Aash is always right

The dialogues seemed disjointed...were they uttered by different people? her parents...some obsessive lover?😕

All ic an saw is i admire teh strong woman u have portrayed her as👏

The bus scene🤢 True horror story🤢

Sadly, the only scenes i have created is verbaly absuing the guy n asking him to get lost. The people around HAVE supported me, and asked the men to move on. But as u say, till someone raises their voice, its all quite🤢🤢

Waiting for maaneet😃
Edited by Loquacious_Aash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*Punches Bratty*

Muferring BHB..

le liya na badla 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DPBXN6Zah-A[/YOUTUBE]

🤔

*PHOOT PHOOT KE ROING*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DPBXN6Zah-A[/YOUTUBE]


🤔

*PHOOT PHOOT KE ROING*

Mere dabbe ko kachre ke dabba mein dala tha, tab toh maine aisa taunt nahi mara tha...
Chal koi nahi... main teri BHB hoon toh yeh bhi seh loongi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mere dabbe ko kachre ke dabba mein dala tha, tab toh maine aisa taunt nahi mara tha...
Chal koi nahi... main teri BHB hoon toh yeh bhi seh loongi...

nahi dala tha😒

bas sambhaal ke kaha rakha tha wo bhool gayee thi😛

Anyways this isnt about me..its about U😡😭

Brattyyy...stop enjoying from sidelines *kicks bratty*
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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