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Posted: 12 years ago
😊I loved it ... I know I always say this but can't help it, that's what I feel after reading the part. All the revealations in this part was so great. Finally the suspense is over. Its Naintara... 😃 *Yes me grinning form ear-ear* I always knew That you would never Let M-G be with someone else, You're an optimist & believe in happy endings, just like me... 😉
Anyways before I waver again, let me talk about the update. - firstly it was such a treat with the part starting with HR... , he is my first crush... Hayee. Loved the whole dream sequence, & the song was just like cherry on the cake. 'Tere ore chale' is so soothing & romantic. Why don't I get such dreams, I most of the times don't even remember my dreams... 😔.
Naintara... After reading it I was like Haila... nice one. Her personality description in Chapter 1 has made me a admirer of hers. Then this part I was like I am liking this girl too much. Who the hell is that person who treated her in the past this badly. And what is her past that haunts her, & has made her leave behind all her family & just be on her own. I think she loves Dev, but she feels she isn't worthy of him. Also I'm guessing when he proposes her she does back out but Dev will win her over eventually. Now this is all my assumptions but will leave it to you to reveal it all...
The whole bus ride & the whole bashing scene was so great & well executed. 👏 Woman power woohoo !!. I love Naintara's guts & courage here. Very few of them can carry out the things she did in the bus to that pervert, jerk, shame on mankind person. It usually is that we girls just keep shut & keep boiling within ourselves & never give it back deservingly. Her answer to That aunty hit the nail. I admire her power & nature here... 👏 I could have never have done it, though I have answered them back in my very own style, but not this way which will shut them off as well as the others are awakened. The guts of the man to complain against her. I love her. Kudos to her & to you too for presenting her so well... 👏
Dev ko slap ke saath welcome kiya... interesting... Waiting for more... 😃
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tu aa gayi...
Kaisa laga update?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tu aa gayi...
Kaisa laga update?



Abhi Update nahi parha
Kal wid a Longg Comment 😉
Plomish 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Chal lalwala 😡waapis aur yeh yellowwala lele😃


Phew that was quite a relief
though last wale update mein thoda relax ho gayi thi
par tune Maan ko rulaya iss liye main gussa ho gayi😳
Sowwiee


That was an awesome update
truly mean it😉
Someone dreaming of Hrithik 😆 and then reality check🤢

But really liked the way you brought out her past in glimpses
Her spirit to make it on her own niche
and the bus encounter was superb and much needed seriously😒
The day we all stand up against these creeps it will bring the much needed breakthrough

Dev bechara muft mein maara gaya
😆 😆 😆

Waiting for Maaneet
Thank you for clearing the air
My lord😃

Lal wala kyun?
Chalo at least you liked the rest of it...
Abhi two more characters stories baki hai...
Adi/Pinky will highlight Maan's life and
Yash/Meera will bring out Geet's life...
then Geet (present)
then Maan (past).
Thanks for all the support Heytal...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



Abhi Update nahi parha
Kal wid a Longg Comment 😉
Plomish 😳

Okies...
me waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update...

loved the Mis Naintara kapoor ka introduction...
the problem of taking a public transport...in delhi things are so bad that I think any girl will avoid these buses like a plague. But then not everybody can avoid them, can they...even autos are not that safe and in general I wonder how most male population is grown up but heir mothers to turn out t be such leechees...
pehle din boss ko thapad maar dala...well...I would be wondering how Dev must be feeling...totally mortified and NT will now ahve to work with him...it will be an interesting tlak after that
"Ahem...I didn't mean it"
"Sorry...there was no way to differentiate"
mast tha...but now waiitng for Maan and Geet or rather craving for them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..
but a lil confused...
ill ve to wait for few updates I think...
nwzzz update soon..lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved NT entry ...public transport are helll ..arghhh
wah boss ko hi chappat gr8
waiting for maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Lal wala kyun?
Chalo at least you liked the rest of it...
Abhi two more characters stories baki hai...
Adi/Pinky will highlight Maan's life and
Yash/Meera will bring out Geet's life...
then Geet (present)
then Maan (past).
Thanks for all the support Heytal...🤗




Last update mein lal wala diya tha na aaj waapas le liya re
Maan ko rote dekh ke mujhe bahot rona aaya tha
😳

No thanks in friendship 😛
Loved the update yaara it was superb
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome update...

loved the Mis Naintara kapoor ka introduction...
the problem of taking a public transport...in delhi things are so bad that I think any girl will avoid these buses like a plague. But then not everybody can avoid them, can they...even autos are not that safe and in general I wonder how most male population is grown up but heir mothers to turn out t be such leechees...
pehle din boss ko thapad maar dala...well...I would be wondering how Dev must be feeling...totally mortified and NT will now ahve to work with him...it will be an interesting tlak after that
"Ahem...I didn't mean it"
"Sorry...there was no way to differentiate"
mast tha...but now waiitng for Maan and Geet or rather craving for them...

Next update Adi/Pinky will be the characters and they will give a full view of Maan and what's wrong now...
I have a need to make negative positive so NT/Dev will have the tikhi mirchi love story...
Thanks for the support Ritzy...
It feels good to have you here...🤗

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