THE LOCKET (1) - Page 38

nice update.

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Am i late ?? 😲

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nahi toh...

You are not on my buddy list yet...so I guess u did not get the PM Kittu... sowie..

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow dear...loved the update.

I have so many thoughts in my mind that I need a moment to write all

First music - What a lovely song. By now, you know how much I love music and especially older songs. Main reason being that lyrics used to be very strong at that time and offcourse me being out of India for last couple of years had forced me to loose touch with the latest. But what a befitting song...I could imagine Maan sitting on the piano and almost felt that tear which his eye may have shed or not but was deniately there inside his eyelid.

I loved the way you used SD's POV to give a brief intro to history and nature of Khuarana clan in total. It was like reading a very interesting version of character sketch and I just loved the idea.

Geet seems to be someone who is part of SD's present and someone who brings smile to SD's face. Waiting for her to bring the same hapiness in Maan's life too. I am almost sure Dev married someone else reaosn being her character sketch seemd different from SD's Geet. If they are indeed one then not only will my heart break but also it will be like talking about two different people. Moreover, SD said two yesra ago. Well Maan was abroad then right...so why will he be sad about her? Keeping my fingers crossed but I think I am going to be right (hoping so)

And then the final part where you explored Maan's relationship with his mom, his introvert nature, his lonesliness at Kiran's death and finally his pain at loosing someone once again.

But show must go on - bequarar dil tu gaye jaa...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you so much Ritzy! - You are most welcome dear

You have no idea how anxious I was about this update and especially the music. I am so glad you liked this idea. I am trying to fit music after reading Winter Sonata especially trying to learn from the masters as they say.. - Yes I wanted to write a musical. Sometime song selection is inspired by update and sometime music inspires the update...

It's not a long story but I am trying to keep it alive with the mystery..😆 part.

Thanks for taking an interest in my story and am glad you liked it. There will be another update Fri and Sun (a very short one for a dear friend)... Do come back. - Offcourse Hun...I am usually not online on weekends but will try to read and comment...

Avi