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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

You dance too๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Have I told you how much I hate you!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
No other story yet... this is all I can handle right now.. although Dr. Khurana flits in and out of my brain till I write it down
I know what you mean about the songs, although I can't find any of your updates that I am dissatisified with... as my Dad says... you need a check up from the neck up... if you believe that...



I love to read about Dr. Khurana. The story is alive, if you know what I mean. It bubbles with liveliness and I love it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Yup I do attempt dancing๐Ÿ˜†
And frankly speaking there are only countable chapters where I was satisfied with what I wrote. There are few chapters where I do not even re-read because I know I would cringe and I wrote them because I know I can't write any better even If I try๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Okay I'm a bit confused between the prologue and chapter 1

Wohi toh try kar rahi hoo...๐Ÿ˜† sab ko confuse karna...๐Ÿ˜Š
Correct me if I'm wrong ๐Ÿ˜•

Prologue -Maan had witnessed Dadima blessing Dev and his love, he was standing outside their house and later entered the house ad rushed to his room as he couldn't bear the scene which had seen earlier.
Confusedaisa nahi bola hai maine..
Chapter 1 - Dev wanted to share his happiness with him but Maan feigned headache to avoid any awkwardness.
Banda jetlag bola tha... London se aaya tha.. ho sakta hai na..
Maan and that girl studied together in college so he knows her from 4 years.
I assume Dev was in London finishing his studies then..
Yup
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Dev I don't know what I feel for him still but loved the way he was dealt with๐Ÿ˜†, his attitude on being Khurana, most eligible bachelor tag all gown with the wind. Get serious man she means business
sab ko Dev se badla lena hai... GHSP wale se...
The best was reaction to his action(proposal)๐Ÿคฃ
Bechaara
Glad you liked that... I am enjoying writing a tikhi mirchi character...
๐Ÿ˜†
Fantastic update Avi
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Superb grip
Already waiting
๐Ÿ˜ณ





Thanks Heytal for all the support...
๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Heytal for all the support...
๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations for the new story! Do continue soon xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN NE BOLA HAI...
AGAR SWEETY AAYE TOH USSE KAS KE PAKKAD LENA
AISE...
๐Ÿค— AAJ EXAMS FINISH HONE KI BADHAIYA!!!!
MISSED YOU SO MUCH...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 1 PARA 1 PHIR SE PADHA JAAYE YOUR HONOR...
AAP MERE MOOH MEIN ALFAAZ THOOSING...
๐Ÿ˜‰
SACH MEIN LATE HO RAHI HOO
Will catch up with this later... TC Heytz...๐Ÿค—
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay... who is this mysterious girl? geet or someone else? suspense with first update... i m eagerly waiting for next. some new flavour... ff has started from dev's POV so its some diff from all others. waiting for next update avi. nice update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome start
hope it's not to much emotional n sad one

thanks for PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
great start dear waiting for update interesting story
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Posted: 12 years ago
great start - with suspense
maan was upset on coming home and seeing dev with a girl
was he in love with that girl
and dev from a flirty carefree man changed into a serious hard working business man all for her
and his proposal earned him a slap

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