THE LOCKET (1) - Page 26

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I went back and re-read the prologue when I read this chapter. One thing just came into my mind. I've probably been thinking the wrong way. The girl in Dev's arms has nothing to do with Maan, rather it's the environment of joy of being together with the love of his life, that has him feeling suffocated, I think. Has the girl who Maan loves, left him? What happened between them to make him feel suffocated in his memories? Okay, this was about the prologue. I should talk about this chapter! 😆

Phir se soch lo, your honor... girl in Dev's arms has everything to do with Maan...

Dev and Maan seem to share a very deep bond, where Dev wants to share his happiness with him... I wonder what has Maan a little into his shell that he didn't stay to be a part of his brother's happiness.

Devdas ban gaya bichara...😆

The girl here - you haven't named her yet so I'm not going to call her Geet - is a very strong one. I know you're all for strong females and that is what shows in your characters. Even though she hasn't made her appearance, as in we haven't had a chance to read her view, I still loved her personality. The no-nonsense girl who can show everyone their place, highlight the line that they shouldn't cross. I'm curious to know how she agreed to be with Dev. Though with his hand on his cheek, I can figure out what happened when he proposed her! 😆

Glad you caught up to that last line... main likhte waqt has rahi thi... mera badla for serial wala Dev

Dev is the normal, guy-next-door, though not with his looks an money, but his jovial attitude. I can't say if I like him yet but I don't dislike him. He feels like a person who wouldn't mean harm to people.

Something confused me a bit. Dev did his grad abroad and came back to shoulder the responsibilities at KC so Maan could be relieved for his post-grad. This means Maan didn't go abroad for his grad..?Coming soon... in the chapter for Savitriji

Thanks for updating Avi! I like this approach as it gives the story a fuller view. 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Okie Bye C ya Later 😉

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Will tell U later thoda mushkil hai 😳

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I love this new way of writing. I like Dev. He seems to be close to Maan. Dev's cute. I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update, Avi.

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so its not geet you are on about
but someone else interesting
and dev is smitten by her
well she is different from all those girls he came across in london
and she has an independent streak in hers that he didnt see before
awww she sure gave him a run for his money
and why not right
but who is she then
hope we know more about her from dev pov i hope

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Yup my approach is different and if you see the updates of WOL, the ones without a music accompaniment I am not satisfied with them. I feel the soul is lacking. I need a song to think, sketch scenes and finally write. He he I'm used to choreograph the songs and add scenes instead of moves. Disadvantages of being a dancer😆
Oh wow, another story from you. I lub lub lub to read that, anything form you, I am always there. Oh yeah it's gonna be fun to read about a character like her.😆