THE LOCKET (1) - Page 29

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Huh...so i need to stalk few more threads from now on!!!

Wowww...its amazing!!! 😊

I love the prologue...and its simply superb!!! Just few words...and my thoughts are all over the place!! Just like H you have done!!! Not comparison...but the intriguing part...u just did it in same way 😛 ..U cornered me now!! 😆

Part 1 - Dev...hmm i wanna know whom should i picturize him as??? Maan and Dev twins?? 😲😊 That was unexpected!!!

Why do i get this feeling that,...Dev's girl friend or whom he proposed is not Geet?? err 🤔 well i might be wrong...

Im Koonnnphhuuussseeddd 😕😆

back to square ONE!!! 😆

waiting for other part...and wants to know whose monologue i might come across😊

I guess my description did not do justice

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Oops...im bad at pleasantries!!

Hey Hi Avi 😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi Kittu!

Glad you found this and liked it..

No way can you compare me with H... I don't have 0.01% of her skills...

Basically writing stories so that I have a thread to chat on 😆

Dev for me is Abhinav ... that's the one I pictured...

I guess my description did not do justice😕

Do come back for the next one..

Originally posted by: dqno1

Koi baat nahi...

I haven't done PhD in it either...😆

Firstly a mumbaiker and then a NYer so basically you can say that there is no scope for improvement😆

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Why do u ppl always compare with H?? She is like Ulti ...she is too good to words!!!

jut like H means..the intriguing part...suspense part...how she leaves us with cliffhangers...and we tail along 😆

Im saying again...H is different...once u read her story its imprinted.

Onir is one gal...who notices everything and describes beautifully...the minute things...the inner emotions... very few..and rare ppl have this kind of quality...

And u...hahaha ..u use simple words..but still u r amazing with it!!!

Each and every one have their own skills!!! No comparison...

But u too leaving cliffhangers...and i cant make head or tail of abt this PROPOSED gal frnd of Dev!!! 😆

Comparison is about the updates..not the Writing!!! 😊

Yeshhh im glad!!! 😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

I totally get what you are saying.

BTW I always forget to tell you that I like your signature..

Onir and Mari (mayyo13) have amazing analytical skills. I notice but am not able to express myself like they can. Lacking in communication skills..

The first few updates are like this so that you will see a lot of he/she in them as the characters are introduced and the basic storyline is laid out.

I don't possess the skills for a long story so it will end when I stop falling in love with the leads...😆 or my work takes over my life...

Do hang around... I am shooting for at least two updates a week..

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

My Signature?? Oh Thanks...😳

MAyyo13?? If only you saw me is her thread right?? 😕

Yea...Onir is very good at words...mee too...i just cannot express much!!!

Have you ever wondered which hurts the most:
saying something and wishing you had not,
or saying nothing, and wishing you had?

This quote always disturbs me a lot!!! i will bein dilemma by the time i wanna express

@bold...dont fall out of love!!! its very difficult!!

Yeshhh Boss...ill stalk...as my co partner in Crime Grape is with me!! 😆

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Nah...neither me...😆

NYer??ohh nice!!! that's y u love NYT!!! 😆😳