The Seven Year 'Hitch' - Thread 2 link pg 1 - Page 51

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update

there is something a miss from their relation which geet wants it to be back

Originally posted by: sweetkj

aaj toh uchal uchal ke hug karring.!! 😆🤗

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

amazing updates.👏

plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: dqno1

For SWEETY's FREEDOM!

Originally posted by: sweetkj

maar daalaaa alaaah.!!

Originally posted by: punam2712

what else has upset geet

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Updated comment in 67

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

How much it might have had hurt her while she was removing her jewelry piece by piece, those she might have worn sitting in front of the mirror with hopes in heart about the evening to come and a smile on her face.
Every preparation of hers which otherwise might have been a witness to a beautiful night and wondeful memories but which now were ruined remanants of a mistake made...the contrast you showed had painted a clear picture taking the reader to their world making her feel the depth of the emotions the character is feeling.I'm glad that I was able to convey it the way I had percieved it all. Also good that it came out such that the person reading it coulod feel the emotions. Especially it coming from a writer like you it means a lot. 😊
You know at a point I should stop and remind myself that this isn't my anniversary which was forgotten by the Gadha that am being so morose over it 😆

Gadha... 😆 One more name added to the list of names for Maan here...

i think that conveys enough what a beautiful job you did in transporting us to the setting you painted before us,Thanks. 😊
Maan reminds me of myself to certain extent. We both get hurt after hurting people close to us but we both end up Wallowing in self pity and cursing ourselves than actually acting on it and trying to do the damage control.
I tell you I will punch him on his nose if he doesn't make it up to her. By the way I can always learn how to make it up from what he does since I am as clueless as him when it comes to making up😆

Ha! Here features the real intentions of Maggie... the violent revenge. 😆 Hmm... hopefully I will be able to bring out the ways he uses to manofy her in a better manner (most nervous about it)... otherwise instead of learning form him you will end up killing me for teaching you the most wrong ways to correct things. 😆

Dad's words are really pearls of wisdom. It isn't wrong to plan for a better tomorrow of your family and thus working hard. However with an uncertainity lurking over our heads ready to strike us...when we don't know if we would live to see a new dawn, it isn't right to take things for granted.

Hmm.. true. Dad's words will be very important & a reference for future parts.

Everyone has the same twenty four hours a day. When your own wife can manage them so well incorporating her professional and personal life so well in them why can't you?

Yes that's what this Maan has to realise & correct everything that has gone wrong.

You stopped at an interesting point Doc. It gets tough to wait for the next one now.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Aaj mausam hai suhaana

Me waiting for update... yeh hai bahana...

what the what the what the...😆

Aaja aaja

leke update aaja