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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Ok, I know I have reserved a dabba somewhere, but I just felt like booking a new reservation, just for the heck of it.
Koi gal nahi ji... Aap ne comment kiya wohi bahut hai mere liye Nisha ji!!! 🤗
Part 1

"The seven year hitch." The name itself had me intrigued. I knew for sure that it had nothing to do with a "itch."
I just was waiting to see what was the hitch was. Hitch is also a hiccup namely, a temporary thing. So, I am hoping that whatever folly Maan has made, will have a happy resolution eventually. As I started reading the first chapter, the crisp descriptions drew a clear picture and brought the whole scene alive in front of my eyes.The dark miasma that has spread over his life is affecting everything around him.
All the word plays that you're talking about here are something about which I have already have thought & there's something that is on these lines in the coming parts... you were the one who actually digged in for it... I have on purpose put it as 'Hitch' You will knwo soon... Hope I can do justice to it... 😊
You will know it in further parts on whi is it that he feels so & reason for it all...
"I never intended to hurt you but I guess I can't take those words back, as once spoken they hold their own existence, own meaning and power..."

No truer words were ever written.Supposedly, the tongue is the strongest muscle of our body and the way we wield it sometimes, it is the sharpest weapon we possess.
Yup very true... Tongue is a double edged sword... can cut you badly... it is the only muscle in the body not attached to any bone... boneless but has a lot of power...
But one thing I am glad about is that they are communicating. I loved how Geet took the first step forward and without any ego, apologized. To her it was not about playing the blame game. Her relationship was far more important than who was right. It does not mean that she is not hurt or their problems are resolved, as Maaan clearly notices this, but at least the first step to resolution has been taken. I loved this mature Geet very much.
I love this Geet too... & her strength is what I want to show in here... also Maan will shine out too 😊 ... I'm not as good as you guys in putting it all together but hoping I can rightfully convey what I have perceived... 😊
I am so very glad you decided to write a story Onir. We really would have missed out on an awesome story if not.
This has been possible only beacuse of you guys... I only hope I don't disaapoint you guys... and it will be worth at least one read for you all... 😊 Thanks for the support & encouraging words... they mean a lot seriously. 😊
Now on to the next part to see what is this "Hitch" Mr. Midas has created.

Mr. Midas' creation ... 😆

Thanks so much...🤗
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

superb update

how could maan just say all tat..

does he even think before saying everything

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mishu-

awesome!!!
i'm loving this story so much!!

Thanks... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj


mumma says i eat sauce like sabji.! 😳


Koi na Sweety, Mumma ko bol de, sacue is also one serving of vegetable. Agar fries ke ssath khaayegi to two servings.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

This is the only funny thing I found after reading Palin's epilogue...🤣
Oops, sorry Onir... I know you haven't read Palin's Life Partner yet...😆 You seriously need to...😊😊


He! He! He!😆
Uske baad maine tute hue chashme se hot, hot Gerald Butler ko theater mein jaake dekha. Wore my broken glasses after the theater darkened and took them off as soon as the movie ended😛
LP nahi padha😲
REad Onir read. You can take a break from reading all the FF's especially mine and read LP. It is that good.
Major warning though. Do not read it in public places and do not drink anything while reading. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

kya kahegi... she'll shake her head at Veerji's and my badmashi 🤣


Uske daant tod doongi or better yet, drool over Gerald Butler excessively and praise all his hotnees through my broken glasses and keep praising him after the movie is over and irritate the hell out of my husband😈
Oh wait I already did that🤣
Man really are dogs I tell you, if they were allowed, they would pee around a woman and mark their territory🤣

Tum mujhpe ek baar haansi ho Madhu, issliye jao tumhe maaf kiya.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Thanks so much...🤗

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Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

okay before you get any kind of sympathy let me laugh my arse off 🤣(since there is no emoticon for LMAO using ROFL)

okay you just made my day. nahi now i am not laughing at you like Veerji does every single time he sees you but the message itself. i have come to absolutely adore the way you seriously address such hilarious issues no wonder you have people hypnotized with your story (in a good way 😳)


PS: 🤣 how do you slam the door so hard that your glasses break 🤣

well isi baat pe arz kiya hai

winter mein piyo adrak-wali chai aur summer mein piyo Frooti Frooti
aur skunk se bhaag ke Nishaji gaining chasma tooti phooti


I was shit scared the skunk was going to spray me. We were both startled looking at each other. But that striped innocent looking animal raised it's tail, and I freaked out, and ran inside screaming. I am sure that little fellow was more scared of me then I was of him I wonder what he broke?
As for how the glasses broke, why don't you try behaving normally, when you have an encounter with Mr. Skunk. Look at the thing below and fear it. and then let's see how you write thande sher.😆
Sher mast hain lekin.😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

🤣 🤣
Oh my that must be hilarious for jiju... I can't stop grinning (as I can't laugh loudly as travelling in a crowded bus)Imaging the scene ... As if it is some comedy central series 😆 I won't blame jij ... But yes my sympathies with you.. 😆 😉


It's like you are pointing a finger at me while laughing uproariously and saying I am sorry at the same time. Are you really sorry. I wonder?.🤔

Haan Haan, comedy central indeed. Whenever I do stupid things like this, he will remind me of all my past stupidities . Tumhe woh time yaad hain, you did this, haa haa haa, and so on and on till he drives me crazy and then I have my own sweet revenge. 😈

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nisha ji ... 🤗

I have started reading LP... Well and I'm loving it... 😆

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