Originally posted by: Susegad
Ok, I know I have reserved a dabba somewhere, but I just felt like booking a new reservation, just for the heck of it.
Koi gal nahi ji... Aap ne comment kiya wohi bahut hai mere liye Nisha ji!!! 🤗
Part 1
"The seven year hitch." The name itself had me intrigued. I knew for sure that it had nothing to do with a "itch."
I just was waiting to see what was the hitch was. Hitch is also a hiccup namely, a temporary thing. So, I am hoping that whatever folly Maan has made, will have a happy resolution eventually. As I started reading the first chapter, the crisp descriptions drew a clear picture and brought the whole scene alive in front of my eyes.The dark miasma that has spread over his life is affecting everything around him.
All the word plays that you're talking about here are something about which I have already have thought & there's something that is on these lines in the coming parts... you were the one who actually digged in for it... I have on purpose put it as 'Hitch' You will knwo soon... Hope I can do justice to it... 😊
You will know it in further parts on whi is it that he feels so & reason for it all...
"I never intended to hurt you but I guess I can't take those words back, as once spoken they hold their own existence, own meaning and power..."
No truer words were ever written.Supposedly, the tongue is the strongest muscle of our body and the way we wield it sometimes, it is the sharpest weapon we possess.
Yup very true... Tongue is a double edged sword... can cut you badly... it is the only muscle in the body not attached to any bone... boneless but has a lot of power...
But one thing I am glad about is that they are communicating. I loved how Geet took the first step forward and without any ego, apologized. To her it was not about playing the blame game. Her relationship was far more important than who was right. It does not mean that she is not hurt or their problems are resolved, as Maaan clearly notices this, but at least the first step to resolution has been taken. I loved this mature Geet very much.
I love this Geet too... & her strength is what I want to show in here... also Maan will shine out too 😊 ... I'm not as good as you guys in putting it all together but hoping I can rightfully convey what I have perceived... 😊
I am so very glad you decided to write a story Onir. We really would have missed out on an awesome story if not.
This has been possible only beacuse of you guys... I only hope I don't disaapoint you guys... and it will be worth at least one read for you all... 😊 Thanks for the support & encouraging words... they mean a lot seriously. 😊
Now on to the next part to see what is this "Hitch" Mr. Midas has created.
Mr. Midas' creation ... 😆
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