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Posted: 12 years ago


DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

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Part -8

Maan was feeling contented and his heart was at peace.he was feeling himself so calm.though he knew Geet well but he didn't knew what was in her heart. As Ramu kaka said,Maan found it as tough as to break a solid rock in to small pieces. But Maan was determined to break that rock solid wall of Geet's heart no matter how much time it would take

Ram got a call from his mother.She was alone at home n was missing Ram n Priya.Ram assured her to come back as soon as possible He informed Maan and Priya about the same.Maan was little bit sad but dadi was alone at home at d mercy of servants or say servants on mercy of his dadi as she was a real devil.

Priya-Ram before going back i want to see Sameera once.We havn't met Geet yet.Can we go to their house for some time?

Priya saw Ram with a high hope

Ram-ok as you wish

Pyiya was happy and she called Pammi to inform their visit.

Pammi was happy to hear this.In her heart she thought of this apportunity to convert their children's friendship in a relation.She liked Maan and his parents too.They were down to earth n very gentle.according to her they will perfectly handle her not so practical n not so gentle daughter.One big plus point with them was that Maan was a single child so no comptetion 4 her daughter. she knew that Sam didn't like Geet n was very rude to her even she could't see Vicky with love of a sister. Maan n Sameera were Not so mature n it will be too early to talk about an alliance so it's better that both family should start with a friendship.

Pammi happily invited them and Priya inform her to see her at 5 in d evening.Already it was 4 so Pammi informed Sam about Khurna's visit n ask her to b ready on time.Sam went to get ready.Geet n Vicky were out so they were unaware of it.

It was 5 in d evening and a car entered Khanna house.Maan was on driving seat with Ram on passenger seat n priye on d back seat.

Maan parked d car n ram n Priya got out of d car.Suddenly Ram whinced,some thing hit on his shoulder.It was a tennis ball so nothing was serious. A boy came running n asked Ram to give d ball.

Ram-You kow how hard it hit me on my shoulder?

Boy-sorry uncle we are playing in next vacant plot. We didn't do it intentionally.I m sorry for that on behalf of our batsman.

That boy was scared now and dreaming himself beaten by his parents. but Ram was enjoying his expressions.He wanted to tease him.

Boy-uncle I didn't do anything. it is our batsman who hit a six on my ball

Maan came between them n said-Papa leave it na.they were playing n it happened unknowingly.

Ram blinked at Maan n maan understood.Ram loved to play cricket but responsibility at early age made him to miss this enjoyment.Ram played with that boy's feelings n said-Let me see ur batsman who hit me.He took that boy's hand n went to play ground.Maan n Priya went behind them n watched d drama from some distance

Ram went near that batsman.

Ram- So you are the one who hit me with this ball.

Batsman-Sorry uncle

Ram-What sorry.Agar mera sir phat jata toh.

Hearing this batsman took the helmet out n Ram saw that it was a girl

Ram-Arrey! tum to ladki ho.insab ke saath kya kar rahi ho

Girl- playing cricket or else.Is there any rule which says that girls can't play cricket?

Hearing the voice Maan knew who she was but kept quite. She was our multi talented Geet.He and Priya were facing her back so she couldn't see them.Maan saw Vicky approaching Geet to stop her but Maan signalled him to be quite.Now they were watching d drama

Ram- girls r weak and cricket is a game of men.

Geet-I can prove u wrong

Ram smiled on his victory as his plan to play few balls was successful.

Ram -ok I will threw one over,If u hit me for runs u will win but if I got u out then I will win

Geet-I agree

All were ready to play.Ram threw his over.First two balls met with the boundry,third one was a miss.on fourth ball she hit a six.On fifth ball she ran for two runs but on d last ball she was bowled.All claped.

ram-You played very well. U win

Geet-But you got me out.u too played very well other wise no one here can get me out so easily .U r d winner.

Ram- actually I wanted to play few balls so I said all that crap to challenge u.I didn't mean that.

Geet laughed n said- not to worry uncle.I can understand.but don't take girls lightly.

Now Maan n Vicky were all prepared to watch a live show after going in to the house.He wanted to see shocked expressions on some faces.Priya called Ram to go n Geet turned to them but Maan too quickly turned his face so that she couldn't see him.

Ram Priya n maan went from there n entered in to the house.Pammi n Sam welcomed them and escorted them to their drawing room.

Here Vicky too asked Geet to go as he knew that guests are at home.

Priya-I can't see Geet n Vicky. Aren't they at home?

Sam-Don't ask aunty.Geet can not sit quietly at a place.Always up to some thing. aati hi hogi.

Ramu kaka informed Geet about d arrival of khuranas so she went to her room saying that she will come after changing her dress.She suggested d same to Vicky as their clothes were dirty.

After changing clothes Geet went to drawing room.

Pammi-here is Geet,Geet meet Maan's parents.

Geet folded her hands to say namaste to them n shocked to see them

Geet-aap?

Ram n Priya were equally surprised to see her

Ram- you r Geet?

Pammi was surprised-You know each other?

Geet couldn't utter a world as she was scared 4 Pammi's reaction.

Ram-no. She was playing cricket outside with children n explained her what had happened.

Sam was fuming now.she saw Geet with anger n Geet was embarrassed

Geet- I m sorry uncle 4 every thing.i should have behaved nicely with you

sam-Geet what is d use of sorry now?

Ram-Don't be sorry Geet. Actually I enjoyed it like a teenager.I m feeling so lively after years .I must say thanks to u.

All were setteled in their seats. Pammi asked Geet to take care of Tea n snacks n ask sam too to go with he.

Sam saw her mom but she signaled her to do what she said

Both turned but Priya stopped them n handed over a gift to Them along with Vicky

Pammi- That was not needed Priya ji

Priya- hum pahli baar aaye hain to khaali haath kaise aate?these are very small gifts for them

Vicky opened his gift n found some Cds of latest video game. He jumped with excitement and thanked them.Sam opened her gift. It was a beautiful white chooridaar suit she smiled n said-Thank u aunty

Priya-It's Maan's favorite color.

At last Geet opened her gift and it was a pink chooridaar suit with blue contrast.

Geet-It's too beautiful aunty. Thank u very much.

Sam was watching Geet's suit.She found it more pretty than her dress.

Sam- Geet can we exchange our dresses. I like pink more

Geet-but Sam This is Maan's favorite color.

Sam-But pink is my favorite.

Geet saw every one's face n understood d situation so she said-No problem Sam. You can have this as I like White color too.

Maan saw Geet n smiled said -thanks Geet(he was happy for that exchange offer)

Suddenly Geet remembered some thing and said-ek minute i want to ask some thing

Now Maan n Vicky knew what was coming

Geet- Maan you were there with aunty n Vicky you too have mat them before. Why didn't u stop me then

Vicky-Maan bhaiya stopped me from telling u

Geet-Maan why did u do this?

maan-Agar bata deta to introduction itna adventurous kaise hota?

Now Geet was angry(all fake) n said-I hate u Maan aur dekhna main chodoongi nahin tumhen.

Maan-any time Geet.I m ready


Khuranas laughed at this. Pammi didn't react but Sam was fuming
with anger on Geet

Sam(ST) I hate u Geet. U always snatch my happiness. I will not forgive u for this.(she was angry on d attention Geet was getting)

Pammi ordered Geet n Sam to serve d Tea and snacks.They went from there n after half n hour tea was served.

It was two hours they were here so they asked 4 leave.

Priya-Geet U r so sweet. tomorrow we are leaving. when we will come To Delhi next time tum bhi Sam aur Vicky ke saath hamaare ghar aana.We will have a good time.

Ram- and we will play cricket too.

Geet was sharam se pani pani.She said-Uncle main toh Bachhon ke saath kabi kabhi khel leti hoon. i m not a player

Ram laughed at it n said-It was a nice meeting with u all n took leave.


In d car Ram was feeling very happy. Maan saw this and said

Maan-what's d matter Papa looking very happy?

Ram-When they came to our house, I didn't connect them too well.But something was different today.I can't guess it

Maan- There is a difference between both days

Ram -What is that?

Maan-Name of that difference is GEET.

Ram saw his son with surprise n asked-Geet?

Maan-Yes papa. Geet makes everything around her different

Ram saw Maan.Se saw a sweet smile on his face talking about Geet.He too smiled n said- May be U r right Maan


today Maan knew that he was successful to move ahead towards Geet's friendship.and his father played a major role without knowing anything.

they reached home and Priya asked them for dinner but both said they were full n don't need dinner

In bedroom Ram was remembering the evening.

Priya- Geet is so sweet na. I liked her.

Ram- so you have changed ur opinion and now you like Geet

Priya- Nahin Ram I didn't mean that.

Ram- If u ask my choice,I like Geet more than Sam. Tumhen pata nahin Sameera me Aisa kya nazar aata hai?

(Girls don't think that this discussion is not needed.D day from which parent's dream about their children marriage they have such discussions after meeting a girl or boy of d age of their own children.At least i have witnessed such debates at my home😆😆)

Priya-Ram I have a reason 4 this.I don't want Maan to face same situation after marriage that you have faced.

Ram-what are you talking about Priya.

priya-Ram aap Maa aur Baabuji ne mujhe aap ke liye pasand kiya tha aur aapne bina dekhe hi mujhse shaadi kar li thi.I wasn't as beautiful as U were.But U didn't care n accepted me from ur heart.But ur relatives Talked on ur back n that I was a mismatch for U.I felt bad n had an inferiority complex.By the time aap sab ke pyaar me main sab bhool gayi.Even today when I recall that I feel bad.Then I decided to choose a girl for Maan who complements
Maan in every aspects.

Ram- Tum abhi tak woh sab sochti ho.aaj ka zamaana badal gaya hai.and one more thing dont't think that Geet is not beautiful.For me she is more beautiful than Sam.Her beauty lies in her simplicity.

Priya-Ok Ram,there is a lot of time to think all this. They all are studying. Time will decide what is in their destiny.Aage chalkar maan jise pasand karega we will accept her

And they went to bed to sleep



Precap-A little leap and a window to Geet's past.

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Friends I hope u liked their first meeting.I did not want to show u Geet preparing all dishes for them n khuranas getting impressed by her cooking ability.So pls if u liked it, leave ur comments


thanks-Rashmi

Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love maan parents..they are sooo sweet. maan's father ram is such a wise person..love this update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh amazing update dear...:D:D
so maan take first step towards geet in order to gain her trust..ahemmm interesting..
N khuranas n geet first meeting omg it was hilarious..our geet was all sharam se paani paani when she comes to knw bout that..:)
n uff yeh makeup ki dukaan sameera c alwayz care fr herslf ..she didnt care bout others huh...:/:/
nw waiting fr next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipeee me first n that too first tym..;);)
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanx n hit d like pls
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

i love maan parents..they are sooo sweet. maan's father ram is such a wise person..love this update..pls cont soon..



thank u Hanisha for liking it
.though it is my first work so I will not make it complicated .It is a very simple story about friendship n love with very simple characters
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Originally posted by: PujaShree

Oh amazing update dear...:D:D
so maan take first step towards geet in order to gain her trust..ahemmm interesting..
N khuranas n geet first meeting omg it was hilarious..our geet was all sharam se paani paani when she comes to knw bout that..:)
n uff yeh makeup ki dukaan sameera c alwayz care fr herslf ..she didnt care bout others huh...:/:/
nw waiting fr next..


thank u Puja
In this update I tried to clear Priya's POV for liking Sameera. Hope u will understand her now
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Originally posted by: PujaShree

Yipeee me first n that too first tym..;);)


oops ! U missed it by two posts😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was an awesome update nd loong one too.
love it
iss pammi aur sam ka kuch na kuch toh karna hi padega
geet ne ram ko uska thoda sa bachpan wapas de diya
while playing cricket with him
so priya sam ko iss liye DIL banana cahti hai bcoz she think sam is more beautifool
nd will compliment maan
but i like rams choice
sam ka dimag bilkul bhi nahi chalta
sabke saamne maan ka fav. color reject karne ki kya zarurat thi
waise aacha hi hai uska asli chehra dhire dhire sabke saamne aa jayega
aww maaneet ka fav. color bhi ek hi hai

waiting to know geet past
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



update was wonderful...

it was a very different type of meeting between Geet and Ram...very natural meet...I really liked it...

Maan ke Mummy-Papa to abhi se din-raat uski shaadi ke hi baare mein soch rahe hain...yeh bhi to ho sakta hai ki with time he can choose a third person other than Geet and Sam...normally to yahi hota hai...yah this is Maaneet FF so concentration will be on Maan-Geet but real life mein to jaroori nahin hai ki woh Sam ya Geet mein se hi chune...

waiting to know about Geet's past...

thanx for pm...


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