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Part 3


She stood out side K Construction talking to her self

Geet : Babaji bachalena suna hai K Construction ka MD bohat hi karus hai or aap ko to pata hai na ke mujhe K Construction me hi karna he mera internship kyu ke yeh company one of the top construction company hai India mein agar mujhe yeh internship mil jaye to kitna acha hoga mere resume ke liye or phir mujhe kayi bhi nakrey mil jaye gi internship ke bad.

After she praying to her Babaji she entered the elegant office of K Construction went to the receptionist who was busy munching on her food

Geet : excuse me

Pinky : yes how can I help u

Geet : mein yah ha interview ke liye ayi hun internship ke liye

Pinky : hayeee tumhara interview to dd khe sath hai na?

Geet : dd? lekin mera interview to yaha ke MD ke satha hai (giving a innocent and confused look)

Pinky : ha dd hi yaha ke MD hai

Geet : dd yeh kesa naam hai

Pinky: are unka naam tho Maan Singh Khurana hai

Geet : tho phir dd kon hai? (Looking at pinky with her big eyes giveing a confused expresion)

Pinky : are yaar unko dd hum sab bolate hai iska matlab hai dhak dhak lekin unke samne nahi or tumhe pata hai hum une dd kyu bolate hai?

Geet :nah... ( before she completes her sentence)

Pinky: are tumhe kese pata hoga? hum unko dd is liye bolate hai kyu ki jab bhi voh hamare samne ate hai to dil zor zor se dhak dhak karta hai hayeee

Adi : hehehe... pinky tum apna kam karo verna agar maan sir ko pate chala ke tum kam kame aur gape zayada karti ho toh samjho tumhari naukri gayi or ha kya koy be interview ke liye aya hai?

Pinky : sorry adi sir or ha ayai hai na geet yeh hai adi sir or adi sir yeh geet hai woh yaha interview ke liye ayi hai

Geet : hello adi sir

Adi sir : hello geet chalo interview us taraf hai

Geet : ji

They reach the sitting area

Adi sir : Geet tum yaha beto kuch der me tumhe koi bolane ayega interview ke liye

Geet : thik hai

*Back At College*

A hand appears on khushis shoulder, with a scared yet confused look she turns around n sees a young good looking guy with spiked up hair, denim blue jeans n tight red top which has graffiti all over it

Hii im nk short for... *Ahem* (slowly whispers) nade kishor buh please mujhe nk kehkar bhukar na

Khushi: bhukar??

Nk: ha bhukar.. Uno call

Khushi: ohh u mean pukar

Nk: ya ya same thing hehe or name kya hai

Khushi: khushi. khushi singh shekhawat

Nk: khushi ji friends

Khushi: ji ... (yeh kitna ajeeb sa banda hai) ... Umm lekin mein aap ko janti bhi nahin hu or nahin aap mujhe

Nk: arre khushi ji jan pehchan tho hojayegi ab chale class ke liye dar hojayegi

Khushi: thek hai chalo

*Common Room*

Nupur: By god talent pared? Mein toh is meh zaroor hisa loongi (giggles)

She walks towards a table full of entery forms nad imidialy fills one in

Nupur: yeh form ko tho meine bhardiya hai lekin meni ise kisko doon (her eyes scan through the whole room)

A soft and suttel voise aperres behind her

Tum kuch dhoond rahi ho?

Nupur: mein? Ha voh meine yeh form fill in kar liya hai lekin meh yh kisko doon kya tum janti ho ke is talent parad ka in charge kone hai

Mein

Nupur: ha tum kya tum mujhe bata sakti ho ke is talent pared ke in charge kon hai?

(with a smile) mera matlab hai ke meh hi is parad ki in charge hoon im tamana

Nupur: oh sorry voh kya hai na ki tum mera matbal hai app ek teacher kum student ziyada lagti ho isiliye sorry

Tam mam: acha koi baat nahi . . . . Form?

Nupur : form? Oh ha ha ligiye

*Class Room*

Mr shukla: ria... Yes sir viren... Yes sir nand kishore ... Nand kishore

(nk n khushi entered the room)Nk sir mera name nk hai

Mr shukla: maha shee app ne ithni der se prastan kyun kiya

Khushi: nanhe ji yeh tel ki dukan ne kya kaha

Nk: patanahi tum silf apna saar hilate rehna meh sab handle karlonga ... Sir voh ... Yeh dekho maine ek nayi student ko pakra... mera matlab hai leaya

Mr shukla: nayi student...humer principal sahab na kahata ke koi nayi vidyarthi ane vali hai kya voh app hai?

Khushi reapetedly nodded her head

Mr shukla: thek hai aap apni stha grehan kare

They both take a seat.

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Edited by cutestar12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update dear
geet in KC😊
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awesome update...👍🏼
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Part 4


After 5 mins

Peon : Geet Singh Shekhawat

Geet : ji

Peon : aap ka turn hai aap us cabin chale jaye

Geet : ji shukriya

Geet goes towards the MD's cabin

Geet : (Knocks on the door) can i come in

Maan : come in take a sit

As Geet enters she sees the back of the chair where the MD is sitting

She takes a sit

Geet: good morning sir

Maan: (while Turning) good morning

Geet: AAP!!!!!! (she stands up)

Maan: TUM!!!!!

*** Flashback Start ***

After she finished her everyday prayers geet nervously turns around and bumps on to something twirls and was ready to hit on the hard floor but after a while when she didn't felt the ground she opened her eyes slowly only to meet a pair of dark chocolate brown eyes and strong hands wrapped around her waist. lost in her hazel eyes not realizing there in a office and suddenly a phone ringed and braked there intense eye look

Geet: aap ko dikay nahi deta kya mere sare papers giradey (making a sad face)

Maan: dake ke to tum nahi chalray thi koyi bhi nomal insan upar dekh ek nahi chalta

Geet: aap ne mujhe abnormal kaha Dhusht danav

Maan: kya kaha tumne

Geet: k..kk.. kuch nahi

And maan goes away from there

*** Flashback End ***

Excel college

Mr shukla: Aarti

Yes sir

Mr shukla: Arnav . . . . . . . . (raises his head) arnav . . . . . . . Nandkishor? app ne apne preya mitra ko yaha vo kya kahte hai app longo ki bahsha meh... Collage meh ate huwe dekha hai?

Nk : ummm ha mein ne use collage meh dekha tho hai lekin mujhe nahi pata voh kaha hai

Mr Shukla: patanahi yaha log parne a the hai yah tehelne huh!

Khushi (slightly nudged nk) yeh arnav knon hai?

Nk: nanav mere bhai! Mera pyar hai

Khushi: KYA! Pyaar?...lek in voh toh ...

Nk: ha voh toh iss collage ka sabse hot or cool dude hai... His amazing or mujhe toh yakin nahi hota ke voh mera subse at cha pyaar hoga

Khushi: hai devi Mariya mujhe nahi pata ta app Aisa nahi vasa ho

Nk: Aisa nahi vasa? Men kasa hu?

Mr shukla: an app sub ek ek marks yeh handouts lelo

As khushi was about to get up

Nk: stop stop! Main lekar ati hun

He gets up and leaves while a slight giggle escapes her mouth she opens her text book when she feels someone's presence behind her and turns around to see above her left shoulder however sees nothing but a big open window just 1ft above the ground she sat back Wondering weather she really felt something or its just her nervousness
Edited by cutestar12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful part dear
oh no geet and maan had a clash and poor geet didnt know he is md of kc
and khusi is confused with nk and his language
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update! well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dono behen apne counter prt se mil gaye abb nupur ki badi...

beautiful update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

lost in her thoughts she felt someones presences next to her however ignored it as she had in mind that its probably nk only just a few seconds later she heard nks voice which cought her attention " hey nanav when did u come? "

NK: are nanav tum kab aye

Arnav: (while putting his hands behind his head) abhi window se (and signaled NK to khushi saying who is she)

NK: Oh.. Khushi ji, yeh hai nanav mene app ko bataya tha na

Khush: ohh... to yeh hai ARANV (while looking at him with a skeptical way) yeh asia to nahi dikta.)

arnav felt quiet uncomfortable with the way khushi was looking at him but still ignoring her

Arnav: hi i am Arnav Singh or aap

Khishi: hi Khushi Singh Shekhawat

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Khurana Construction

Maan: please have a sit miss

Geet: Geet... Geet Singh

Maan: yes please have a sit

Geet: thank you sir and sorry vo bahar jo kuch bhi hua usliye

Maan: it's alright

Maan asks her interview related questions and she answers them with full confidence and is really impressed with her knowledge and understanding

Maan: aap bahar ja ke bataaye adi aker bataye ga kaun select hua hai

Geet: ji sir thank you

She goes and sits outside and waits for adi to tell her if she is selected or not

After a few minutes later adi comes

Adi: Maan sir aap sub mein se 10 logo ko select kiya hai or unke name hai

Neha varma
megha sharma
shruti kapoor
anjali metha
geet singh shekhawat
prithvi malhotra
pratik grover
dhruv singh
sumit kumar
krish khanna

Adi: next week se app a internship suru hoga

Geet leaves from there and goes to college to tell her sister that she has got the internship at Khurana Constructions

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Hallway

Nupur: Hash acha huwa atleast form submit kardiya ( suddenly her phone rings) di ka phone

She pick the phone up

Nupur: hello di kya huwa kesa raha apka interview

Geet: nupur chup or meri bat suno tum or khushi gate ke pass wait karo me abhi a rahi how ok

And she cut the phone

Nupur: hello di ...are phone kat diya by god ye di bhi

She goes to find khushi

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Khushi and Nupur waiting for Geet

Khushi: Nupur di kya bat hogi di esa kabhi nahi karti khy hua hoga

Nupur: pata nahi mujhe to bohat hi tension ho rahi he

Geet arrivers with a sad face

Khushi: di agayi di kya hua aap itni sad kyu hai

Nupur: ha di kya hua aap ka to interveiw tha kya aap ko wo nahi mila

Khushi: are agar aap ko nahi mila to koi bat nahi wo log nahi jante wo log ne kise miss kiya meri di is dunya ki best hai

Nupur: ha di aap fiker mat kigiye aap ko ki or company me miljayegi jo is se bhi best hogi

Geet: lekin mujhe to milgayi internship

Khushi: ha di aap fiker mate kijye

Both sisters got confused at what they heared

Geet: meri pyari behno mujhe Khurana Constructions me internship ka moka mil gaya

Nupur: sach di

Geet: ha

Khushi: lekin di aap ne to hum ko darr hi dia

Nupur: ha di aap ne to darra hi dia tha lekin isi khushi mein to celebration to banta hai kyu khushi

Khushi: ha lekin agar hum mumbai mein hote to hum celebrate kerne beach per jate or khub sari masti kerte

Geet: kya hua ke hum mumbai mein nahi baat to celebrate or masti ka hai who ti kahi bhi ker sakte hai

Nupur: ha yeh to he by god

Khushi: lekin hum jayeg kaha

All are thinking when suddenly geet gets an idea

Geet: mujhe pata hai

Khushi: kaha

Geet: chalo me batati hun

They all go with her. She takes them to a park which she saw while coming from Khurana Construction

Khushi: wow di it so beautiful

Nupur: ha kitna khubsurat hai

Geet: to chale

They all play and have fun at around 4pm they all go home

They reached home and rang the house bell

Mom: are agayee tum teno

They enter inside

Mom: are geet vo interview ka kya hua

Geet: mujhe Khurana construction mein internship milegaya hai or next week se jana hai

Mom: congrats beta

Geet: thank you maa

Mom: to aje dinner kya kahanaa hai

Geet: maa aje aap yaha behte javo or aje mein khana banaunji

Khush: nupur di aje to lagta hai hamein ambulance bolan hi parega

Nupur: ambulance vo kyu

Khushi: are aje di khana barahi hai too

Geet: maa dekho na tu ruk mein abhi batati hu (she runs after khushi)

Geet catchs khushi and she pulls her ear

Geet: kya kaha ta tumne mere banya hua kahana kake tum bimar per javoji (making a baby sad face) dekha Babaji

Khush: are me mazak keriy hu (holding her ears) sorry

Ting tong the door bell

Nupur opens the door

Nupur: papa aap agayee

Dad: nahi tumhare samne tumhare papa ka bhoot hai

Nupur: kya papa aap or khushi humesha hum ko cherte rete hai

Dad: acha abe batao kya hua

Khushi: papa di ko job mil gaye hai or who bhi Khurana Construction mein

Dad: are yeh to khushi ki bahte hai

Nupur: are papa khushi ki nahin di ki bahte hai

Mr Shekhawat just went towards his room shaking his head but stoped just outside his room and said

Dad: are geet aje khana mat banhana aje hum sub bahar jayenge dinner ke liye

All: sach papa

Dad : ha or phir hum sub ice cream ke liye bhi jayenge

all: yes thank you papa

All three run and hug Mr Shekhawat

Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! Pls pm wen u do update! Thanks! amazing update! superbly written! Khusi n Arnav meet! Geet does well in the interview! Maan impressed! she is selected n is happy! she leaves 2 meet Nupur n Khushi! They have fun! Geet;s parents r happy 4 her! update soon!
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! Pls pm wen u do update! Thanks! amazing update! superbly written! Khusi n Arnav meet! Geet does well in the interview! Maan impressed! she is selected n is happy! she leaves 2 meet Nupur n Khushi! They have fun! Geet;s parents r happy 4 her! update soon!


Thanks alot!! Dw ill surly pm u :)

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