Khamoshiyan FF (MG-MN-AK) Part 9 1/4/15 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 9

All three girls scream PAPA!!!!!!!
Neil puts all his force to control the car however seeing neil's car skidding on the road the opposite vehicle got imbalanced while trying to divert the collision and crashed into a tree while neil managed to stop the car on time
There was a moment of silence as the sudden event left everyone shocked

"Geet, nupur, khushi, ragini app sab thike hai kisi ko choth toh nahi ayi" asked neil in concern, all gave a nod or a yes in reply "papa vo... voh dusri gadhi..?? " Nupur stammered
"mein use dehke ke ata hoon" he replied. Neil rushed towards the car, since the windows are tinted he knocked on the window, the window slowly rolls down reviling a young men "tum thik ho???" Haan mein thiek"... "Tumhe toh chot laghi hai" neil iterupted "chota sa chot hai.. Im fine" he asured neil. He tried starting his car 3 times but failed "lagta hai gadhi internally dameged hai cholo main tumhe tumhare ghar chor de ta hoon" insisted neil, after much convincing he finally agreed.

"Uff yeh papa ko kitna waqt lag raha hai" nupur said aloud restless, "shayad uss gadi wale ko bohot zyada laga hoga" replied geet in consern, main ne suna hai ke kuch log acident hone ke bad jhoot bolte hai aur choti si chot ke bahane pesse nikalvate hai" khushi stated leaving nupur shocked and hyped up "kahi voh papa se paso ka demand toh nahi kara raha hai" " ufffo chup im sure papa aate honge todhi dare main" geet retorted. Just then the door next to where nupur was comfortably seated opened

As she saw the male figure in front of her she instantly scanned him with her eyes from top to bottom
He wore a casual pair of denim blue jeans, red shirt teamed with a bright white jumper
"Arrey ye.. yeh ghadhi ka darvaza kaise kholdiya, tumhe tohdi si bhi sharam nahi hai aur Tu..tu.. Tum kone ho huh??" Stammering, she managed to get all the words out bombarding him with questions
"Voh accident...(pointing at his car) Meri ghadhi start nahi ho rahi hai toh.." Interrupting him half way as well as keeping in mind khushi's con man statement " toh tum humari ghadi lena chathe ho pesse nahi toh gadhi.. Dekho mister meh tumhe yeh pehle se clear kardati hoon yeh accident tuharhi laparvahi ki vaje se huwa aur hum tumhe ek phuti kori nehi dongi"

Standing quietly looking at her crazy antics he finally replies in one word " hogaya?"

Mentally cheering at her victory she gives a him a 2 second smile "haan abb tum jao" and shuts the door right on his face

"Nupur yeh tumne kya kiya us bichare ko bolne toh deti" geet scolded are dii mein ne hum sabko uss chore se bachaya aur tum mujhe hi dant rahi ho"
Voh shakal se chore lag nahi raha tha khushi added
Shakal se toh tum kitni innocent lagti ho par ho nahi na nupur taunted with a cheeky smile

The door opened again without looking nupur assumed it was him again "tum phir agay ek bari samaj nahi atta... papa app voh meh yh admi" neil interpreted "isse chote lagi hai aur gadhi start nahi ho rahi hai tum zara andar shift kar sakti ho isse behtne ki jaga do"
"Lekin papa... "
"Nupur andar" neil demanded
She put on a angy scowl while cursing him silently as she shifted inside and the car ride began
"Meine ek mechenic ko phone kar diya hai voh tumhari gadhi ko thek kar ke tumhare ghar bhejdega... Geet tumhe mechenic ke nuber de deghi, tum use call kar ke address de dena" neil informed Him and passed his phone to geet

Geet gave him the number
"App please mujhe taxi stand tak chrodiyeh.. Yahan pass meh hai
" meh tumhe ghar chodunda" neil replied
" voh mujhe kahi our kame hai"
As he left no option for neil he drop him to the nearest taxi stand and after a long eventful day they decided to skip their picnic and head back home

Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
kaun hai yeh ladka...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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terrific update! Well written! who is this person??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

kaun hai yeh ladka...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



His a mystery hope u like it when his revealed ;)
Thank you!!
Sorry for the delay, I am working on the next part
Your comments really help!!
Thanx once again
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

terrific update! Well written! who is this person??


Thanx a lot!!
His a mystery hope you like it!! :D
Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
nice update...
thay all are safe...
who is this boy????
ye nupur to kisiko bolne ka mouka hi nahi deti 😆
loved it...

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