Highly Possessive Lovers#5 last part pg 132 11/07 - Page 61

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Posted: 12 years ago
why did maan slap geet?!? 😡😲
wat happened??😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting teaser...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

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why maan slapped geet?????
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Why maan slapped geet???
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superb
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aawww what's happeng in teaser
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so sorry for delay, updating today. Anyone waiting???
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Part 49



Why her life is so complicated, she can't live normally like others without any tension and any hatred. The person whom she hated till today is innocent, she should be happy that her father didn't cheat her or should hate him for making her childhood a hell without anyone. Geet want to shout and scream why this is happening to her. when she was about to breakdown, her 2 saviours held her tightly telling they are with her. They are none other than maan and Vicky. Geet looked at them with blank expression, but there is a volcano erupting inside and anytime it may burst.

These many days she thought her father killed her mother but today all of a sudden when she came to know its all lie, how she should react. And after knowing that he did everything for her sake made her weak, she cant hate him and at the same time she cant forgive him. She smiled at her own plight. Why she is living this life, instead of living this life its better to end this. Even before too she tried to end her life but the thought of maan stopped her. That time they were just friends but now he is going to become her life partner. A person who will share her happy moments and sad moments but why she has to make his life a living hell is it not enough that she is suffering and now why maan? thought geet.

She want maan to be happy, she don't want him to suffer because of her ill fate. She looked at maan and Vicky who stood like a pillars to save her from every evil thing. Seeing them she got some strength to face her dad. "Dad" called geet coming inside, hearing geet's voice he got up and looked at her. His child has grown up is the first thing which came in his mind. Still he remembers he use to hold her hand and play with her, fulfill her every demand. But life is not same always, everything has changed along with his daughter and himself. Unwanted things happened in the middle which no one expected not even mohinder.

"Geet" whispered mohinder thinking it should be real but not a dream. Did she listen what he told to everyone. How will she react, will she forgive him or hate him? so many questions are there in his mind but no answer. He even not able to read her face as it is expressionless. Other side maan is thinking hope he will erase all the pain in her life and she don't need to face this situation. Maan held geet's hand not to go anywhere, he cant see her like this. Geet looked at maan, the one who understood what she is going through. The pain in his eyes for her, why he has to suffer for her. Geet freed her hand from his grip which shocked maan.

"Don't worry maan, nothing will happen to me" told geet and is walking towards mohinder. "Dad" geet again called him. She bent down to take his blessings, how much she hate him he is her father afterall. Mohinder is overwhelmed seeing geet and hugged her dearly but geet didn't reciprocate the hug. She stood like a rock, still her face is expressionless. Maan's heart is bleeding seeing her. he knows she can burst out at any time. How cum he not know about his geet but the main problem is how to control her. He is not able to understand anything. Now only one person can control her, maan fished his mobile from his pocket and dialed a number.

Mohinder cupped geet's face "How are you geet?" asked mohinder. Geet smiled at him, a painful smile, a bitter smile. "I am alive dad" told geet coldly, mohinder looked at her in guilt. "Geet" called dadimaa. "Please dadimaa, you please don't talk. Aapse yeh ummed nahi thi dadi. Kyun kiya aapne aisa, kyun dadi" cried geet. Dadi has no words to speak, she knows she is wrong. "Aapko pata tha na dadi meri haalat, phir bhi aapne mujhse itni badi baat chupayi. Atleast you could have understood me dadi. Even once you didn't think about me, how am i? am I dead or alive? Where I am? Bas sab log apne diye hue waadein niba rahe the aur mere bare mein socha bhi nahi" shouted geet, her angry voice, pain and rage in her eyes. For the first time maan too is angry on dadi for hiding such a big thing from everyone.

"Geet once listen to me" tried mohinder to talk with her but geet didn't give chance to him to talk. "Why dad am I that bad that everyone left me, first the women who gave me birth left me, then rano maa, phir aap, dadimaa bhi mere saath chod di" told geet dejectedly. "Have I became burden to everyone?" asked geet painfully. "Dad, aapne mere liye itna sab kuch kiya, for my safety, for my well being, to save me from that women but even once you didn't think of me. how will I live alone? Even once you didn't think to come to me and tell me the truth. If you have told me the truth atleast i would be happy thinking my dad doesnt hate me. But no you made me hate you dad and all of a sudden you came here telling i did everything for you. How can i believe you dad??" asked geet.

"I am sorry beta, i…." before mohinder speak geet stopped him. "How simple na dad, ek sorry bolu aur sab kuch thik hojayega. Will your damn sorry will bring back my childhood, will your simple sorry will erase all my pain, tell me dad. can you give me back those days, if yes then I will happily accept your sorry" told geet. Mohinder is speechless, he don't know what to tell and how to apologize her. Geet pointed towards the entrance.

"See these two people dad, I have spoiled their childhood too alone with mine. Pagal hain yeh dono hamesha mere baare mein sochte hain, every second they will be worried about me. its all because I am their friend. I have become a burden to everyone dad. For you, maan, Vicky, abay, mom and dad for everyone. You know what dad because of me abay lost his love. Why this life is for? Its better I die so that everyone will be happy" cried geet.

Geet felt a hand on her shoulder, she turned to see who it is? "Enough geet you have spoken too much. If you think that you are burden to us then its all wrong geet. you didn't understand anyone mishty. Yes its true that we all are worried about you because you are alone in this unknown place. We are worried for you because you are in out heart. You are my soul geet, how can you think all this crap" told maan cupping her face. geet smiled at him, she don't know what to tell.

"Dekha dad, these all are mad. I didn't give them other than pain but still he loves me" she turned to maan "Why maan? why you love me so much? Leave me maan, I cant give you anything other than pain" geet told dejectedly. "You are my life geet, i am ready to share every pain of yours geet. Its my right geet" told maan proudly looking at her lovingly. "Dont love me too much, who knows what happens next. May be you may hate me or i may leave you" told geet coldly. "Maan hating his geet will never happen geet and i wont let you go anywhere geet. I am there with you geet, i will fight with every evil which harms you" told maan not knowing his every word is making her weak. She dont want maan to suffer anymore.

She collapsed on the ground not able to bear the pain. "I am tired maan, I am tired dad I cant fight anymore. I really cant. Maan i wont allow you to fight for me because i am not worth of it" cried geet. "Yes geet you really don't need to fight anymore, now everyone is with you" came a voice from the entrance. Geet looked at the person and shock is written allover her face. "PIya" gasped geet. piya came running and hugged geet tight. "I am sorry geet, I am sorry for everything. I am fool that I didn't understand you and see what friend I am? I didn't understand what my friend is going throught and accused you for coming between me and abay. But I was wrong and I am sorry geet. please hosake tho mujhe maaf karna" cried piya.

Geet got up so as piya, "Main kaun hu tumko maaf karne wali. Go piya, go to abay he needs you" told geet. "I want my sister too geet" told abay who has come with rajni. Maan knows rajni can control geet in this situations, she is the one who cured geet with all her love. Geet looked at abay and then rajni, she closed her eyes in pain. she knows she suffered and also made rajni suffer because of her. She hates herself for giving pain to everyone.

Geet ran to her room and closed the door. "Aunty, please go and talk with geet" requested maan to rajni as he is scared of what will geet do now and how will she react. Rajni smiled at maan and told "Maan, more than mom she needs her life partner" maan is confused and scared of talking with geet. for the first time he don't want to see his geet, he knows she will be out of control today. But he made his mind, its his jaan whom he is handling. When she is in pain how can he be silent. He once glared at mohinder, who is the reason for all the things happening today and even glared at dadi. "Even I didn't expect this from you dadi, you know about geet even then you did this" asked maan shockingly. He still cant believe but he silently went to their room and opened the door. He didn't find geet in the room, for a second his heart stopped beating but composed himself listening the water sound from the washroom.

He went and sat on the bed waiting for geet to come out. Its been 15 minutes still geet didn't come out, now he is worried. He knocked the door but there is no response from geet but still the shower is on as he can hear the sound of water. He is in a fix what to do now?

Precap: What will maan do now? what happened to geet? will she be able to come out of her depression? Will her pain over power or love? Will geet leaves maan??



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Posted: 12 years ago
her pain was unbearable

though they wanted her to be safe but in this they broke her to such an extent tat she cant come back

will this pain make her leave maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous and emotional part geet's years emotional came out of her and it was more painful for maan to see her like that ab waiting for next

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