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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing hot update..maaneet are such a lovely couple..cant wait for more mondblowing updates.. tks yaar..pls cont soon..
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superb job!
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continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank U for PM.. During my exam times I have left reading from part 38 So read all of them.. Hope Angad would get to know abt real truth... BTW Sam with angad...?? Veer will be there always to protect Maneet... Nice parts..
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RECAP

Maan said,"Jaan u r sore'u cant walk i will bring medicine for ur soreness'!"Geet cut his words & said,"And urs too'or else am not gonna talk to u ever!"Maan's eyes popped up but said cutely making puppy face,"Ok!"Maan gently made her to lie on the bed where the bed was messy giving the indication of their passionate night.The bed was messy with sheets crumpled & several bangles were broken.Maan saw the messy bed & blushing Geet taking the sight of it & teased,"Hmm!Its a bit less messy jaan..let's mess it more!"Geet saw him with wide eyes while Maan gave a lopsided grin at her expression.Geet cutely pouted & threw the pillow at him.Maan caught it grinning from ear to ear & gently placed it beside her & softly pecked her lips & said ever so softly,"I love u sooo much jaan!"And he went from there to get medicines.On that time Geet turned around her & saw the one 4th pt of the book dangling outside from the bedside drawyer.Geet opened it & tok the book.It was the very same book which had the collection of the important people which Maan's life saw.

Geet turned some random page & got a picture of a group which had Maan & Veer too.She dint know the remaining other two men.Geet saw under the photo which quoted as-Me,Veer,Angad,Karan.

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PART 42



It was raining outside at about 4am or so when Angad was drinking & here Maaneet were having their passionate night.For Maaneet the time was moving in fast pace while for Angad the time was moving in slow pace.Angad sat on the couch & having drinks waiting for something..someone to call & inform him that his work has been done & for the first time Mr.Angad Khanna was afraid of his plan'scared of his time which had favoured towards Maan.This time he wanted to win over Maan.On that time,in Mumbai mental Asylum,a man started running injuring his fellow occupant of his room.
















The downpour was somewhat thick & no one cant able to see the road ahead.That man had wore a scarf & had closed his hospital dress from one of the ward boy's civil dress.That poor guy was abt to go home when he had become victim of this man.This man had slit his throat from the scissors nearby & had hid his body under his bed.He hid behind a large banyan tree & saw that the watchmen were distracted by something & he slipped outside the gate of the mental asylum climbing it carefully.Becoz current wires were attached to it.One who tries to climb that can get shock & can become unconscious.Luckily the electricity wasnt there & whole hospital was working in inverter which was helping in the purpose of lightening.But there was no light near the gate & the luck of the man who was escaping from the hospital made the gate part dark with no light & guard less too.



















That man climbed the gate & immediately fell out of the gate outside.In a few minutes that man was inside a black Chevrolet car which had hid itself behind the big tree.Its dense leaves were perfect for camouflage.The occupant of the car asked,"Are u Mr.Bohra?"That man who had occupied the car now answered meekly,"Yes!"His voice quivered as he was scared of something.The driver nodded & started his car & before the gate became guard plus he moved faster.On that time Angad was seeing the time having his pegs of brandy repeatedly.Th driver dialled to Angad who lifted it by first ring only & driver said politely,"Sir,he's with me!"Angad was happy & said,"Excellent..bring him to my home.Am waiting for him!"The driver said politely,"Yes sir!"And he moved on & the man who had occupied the car saw around him trying to know that someone is watching or not.













The driver drove towards Khanna Mansion stopped near the porch.The servant who stood dear the porch came towards the driver & driver opened the car door.That man got down from the car & the servant said politely,"Come with me sir!"That man walked with the servant & servant showed him to an rich elegant master bed room which was dimly lit with candles.That man took the clothes which was kept to wear & went inside the washroom attached to the bed room.That man changed into the blue color shirt & denim jeans freshening up & came outside 7 turned to see the huge portrait of Maan,Angad,him & Veer.He went towards it & slowly moved his palm on Veer's face as if he's missing him.On that time a voice came from behind which was a matter of fact,"Miss him?"That man turned & saw it was Angad & said,"Very much!"Angad said,"Me too & we'll get him back,destroying the life of Maan's!"That man said in disgust,"I hope so!I never liked Maan'he always showed his ego & attitude & most importantly anger!Veer was always the puppet of Maan..always pampering him leaving we both!Today also i feel disgust feeling that i was the friend of Maan's,after all what he did to Anjali'.!And he stopped abruptly seeing Angad's expression.Angad's face was white & that man smirked inwardly.Angad said with disgust,"Me too!"













Angad came & kept his left hand on his right shoulder & asked with concern,"How are u Karan?"Karan turned & said,"Am fine Angad..how are u?"Angad said sadly,"Still living!"Karan asked,"Hey y r u saying like that?"Angad said frustrated,"Then what do i say Karan'in front of me that Maan is leading his life happily with his wife & family'& i cant do anything.For the first time in my life am feeling helpless!"Karan said,"Dont worry Angad'now am here..i will help u with ur goal'let's discuss abt this having dinner..am famished & i want real banquet as the hospital's food made me so weak!"Angad nodded & said,"Come let's have dinner!"












On that time in Mumbai Mental Asylum,the news had spread like a fire that Karan is not there & they were searching for him.Here Karan started to eat eh banquet which was served by Sameera who was taking care of Karan as Angad had ordered him.Karan was a Sadist & his most of the Sadism was always appealed to Sex..the physical relation.Karan observed Sameera with lustful eyes which made Sameera uncomfortable.But she was mum due to Angad & Angad showed the pics of both Maaneet & seeing Geet's pics Karan's balls started to stand erect.His imaginations hasnt had any bounds or limits.But Angad was unaware of this & he never believed Veer.He thought that Veer is trying to save Maan by blaming Kran.Karan was the b*****d who always saw the girls in that way.It was his obsession that he would use girls for their virginity & after having that he would kill them.But till now he never got caught due to his brain which always worked how to wiggle out of the trouble & on that time when Anjali committed suicide on that time also he had turned his plate towards Maan.



Precap-Same!



Note-Here is the update as u all wished but i want 180+ likes & 20 pages of comments which will be spam free & silent readers please please like it & comment to this..if i dint get that as i will be monitoring this FF then on that time am gonna summarize this FF & am gonna end it seeing the amount of likes & comment too!


PART 43






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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

karan escape frm asylum n angad help hm😲

maan n veer do nt knw ths😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
iss karan the bas***d ki toh
larki ko doll samjhata h kya
i want in future maan veer n angad sab milke issko dhoye
aache se dhoye bina surf saboon ke
😡
angad is gahtiya admi ki baat me aake maaneet ki
life kharab kar raha h
n yeh sam ku nahi karti kuch
apni behan ki life kharab kar rahi h 😡
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 part,,
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
thanxx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
angad without realizing about karan released the devil not knowing about the consequences
ab waiting for next

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