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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

oh god amazing part..dev is living in guilt and love the way miri try to comfort maan...now dev will be comming out from the guilt trip soon and hope can walk..he got his confidence and slowly going to let go of his guilt because of geet..overwhelm with tis update yaar..pls pls cont soon..


Dev will come out of it one step at a time. He has lived with his guilt for 5 years and it will not let go of him so easily. But with Geet on his side he'll slowly but surely win.😊

Isn't Miri adorable. I absolutely love writing her scenes.

I'm glad you liked the update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Superb part

Dev is guilty that his parents died saving him
Miri so sweet
Geet told her story to dev ...to make dev mentally agree for the treatment
Precap...interesting


Thanks. Glad you liked it.😃



Thanks.😃

Originally posted by: anupm04

Painful update

Loved cutepie miri n maans gesture
Geet telling he truth to dev n encouraging him to get rid if that wheel hair
Interesting precap
Plz continue soon


Thanks. Glad you liked it.😃

Originally posted by: _lehar_

emotional update

loved it
maan's parents died in car accident and dev thinking that because of him their parents died
loved the cute moment between miri and maan
geet motivating dev to gain confidence
nice precaps
eagerly waiting for next part


Thanks and glad you liked it.
Let's see, how Dev and Geet win together.😃

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

awesome update...
emotional...n motivational too...
dev is in so much guilt...
geet talked with him n made him understand...
loved miri n maan's small gesture...


Thanks Dona(I got it right this time😉)
I am humbled to think that you found it motivating.
Miri is my adorable darling😳
Really glad to have you here as always Dona.😃



Thanks😃

Originally posted by: sona-rai

welcome back dear:)

Awesomly written amazing emotional update:)
loved it a lot:)


Thanks Sona. I'm glad to be back

I'm glad you liked the update.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Good question Punam. I went back to see if I had made a mistake and I had. I had mentioned her "dayina pair" as injured. Idiot that I am I thought dayina meant left.🤔

But, if you read the part where she picks up Miri when Maan comes home, I mentioned that she places her on her right hip. In my mind it has always been her left leg.

Chodo na Punam.

Badi badi kahaniyon mein, aisi choti choti baatein, hoti rehti hain.😉😆


CHOD DUNGI BUT UPDATE CHAHIYE😉😉
KAB SE WAIT KAR RAHE THE - IT IS A WONDERFUL STORY

I JUST POINTED BECAUSE I GOT CONFUSED WHETHER IT WAS RIGHT FOOT OR LEFT
ALSO IF MAAN FELL ON HER, THEN HIS LEFT HAND WOULD FALL ON HER RIGHT THIGH
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712


CHOD DUNGI BUT UPDATE CHAHIYE😉😉
KAB SE WAIT KAR RAHE THE - IT IS A WONDERFUL STORY

I JUST POINTED BECAUSE I GOT CONFUSED WHETHER IT WAS RIGHT FOOT OR LEFT
ALSO IF MAAN FELL ON HER, THEN HIS LEFT HAND WOULD FALL ON HER RIGHT THIGH


Nope. It is his left hand on her left thigh. When you fall, you fall awkwardly right? And try to grab the first thing, that's available.
If I close my eyes, he is slightly cross ways to Geet, with his body twisted as he's looking up at her.
He definitely felt something under his hand, when he touched her leg, I'll tell you that much.

Too much analysis?😆
Sometime, it is so difficult to imagine the exact scenario.🤔

As for the next update, hmm let's see when I can update it😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

It was awesome but painful yoo
I was crying reading it. Felt so bad for maan. He has been trying to protect his little brother but didnt know what is hoing in devs mind. Dev is feeling himself responsible for his parents death and thinkung being handicapped ishis punishment but geet made him realize that he is wasting the sacrifice his parents made for him by not trying to overcome his problem
loved the way miri consoled maan. Looking forward to see a sweet bond between maan and miri 😊


Tears are the highest compliment a reader can give to the writer. So, thank you.😊
I'm glad you could see, not only Dev's pain but all the pain that Maan has gone through.
You will see a bit more on this and what Geet feels in the next chapter.😃
I am definitely going to write more on Miri and Maan. Abhi toh dosti k shuruat hui hai, sheru aur uski trainer mein😆
I am really happy that you enjoyed this chapter.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks😃


Thanks, but why is that smiley winking at me so suggestively?😆😆
He is too adorable😛

Originally posted by: preethia

Loved it

sad to know dev' story
but alas all ends well
eagerly waiting for maaneet moments


Thanks😃

You said it right.
Everything will surely have a happy ending.😃
Maaneet moments bhi aayenge, don't worry.😉

Originally posted by: prerna1

awesome update dear

liked it...


Thanks😃

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Nyc part,cont soon.
Waiting.


Thanks😃

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

such a beautiful and emotional part...

loved it...
am waiting for the next part already!!!!!!


Thank you.😳


Thanks


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

awesommme come bk diii...loved every bit of both the updates... lovvvd geets convo with Dev,,...lovvvdd what lil Mira did with Dev and so so so happy that even maan noticed it and liked it to an extent that he smiled😃😃😃 woow...😃 cant wait to read more😃 do continue soon diii


Thanks Purvi and I am glad to be back and writing the story.😃

You'll definitely seemore of Maan and Miri. When they are together, they are adorable. Maan is no longer arrogant and he's cute, coz he doesn't know how to handle her😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

This chapter was absolutely wonderful... It has reopened old wounds and trying to force me into my shell I hold strong :)

I would never want you to be dragged down coz of my story Madhu, but if the experience is cathartic, then I'd say it has served it's purpose.😊

Pain and death seems inevitable. When a devotee came running to Ramana Maharishi asking to revive her dead child, he replied he would revive the child if she could find a family that hadn't experienced death.

Punarapi jananam punarapi maranam
Punarapi jananijaTarae shayanam
Iha samsaarae bahudhusthaarae
Krupayaaparae paahi murarae

This shloka from Bhaja Govindam perfectly states our life cycle. Continuous birth and death is all we experience in this world yet cry endlessly when one out of the million other births is gone in front of us. Grief, guilt, anger clouds our mind and blinds our ability to see the big picture. But the question is will we be sane enough to take in the big picture if given a chance? I highly doubt because the human mind is fickle and weak. We cannot even take the "harsh realities" of life thus, its a far-fetched thought to even embrace the Truth of life.

Beautifully put Madhu and so very true. That is why it is called 'the circle of life'
When it comes to our grief, we cocoon it, so very closely. We can't let go that easily. Perhaps, it's becaus,e letting go of the grief, feels like we are abandoning the person who is no longer with us. Don't know what the 'Truth of Life' is, but I am happy on days, I feel I have lived to the fullest and not wasted it.😊

I am going to stop here with my nonsensical talks and get back to your update...

I see absolutely no nonsense anywhere. When did sharing your viewpoint of life become nonsense huh?😕

Guilt always tags along when we lose something big. That nagging "if" and "then" feeling ruins our peace of mind and overtakes your life to the point where it begins to control your physical body. Mind has that power to make or break a person and guilt is the icing on the cake to break a person. Aptly portrayed here with Dev's case.

We all tend to feel guilty to varying extents, given different situations, but it's especaillty true with kids. They suffer from what is called 'omnipotent guilt' the everything that happened, happened coz of me- syndrome. That is exactly what I am trying to show, Dev is going through.



I am not going to lie and tell you I found this chapter much more romantic than any of the "aww" moments I have read about Maaneet. The tender moment between Miri and Maan had just the right emotions. I am hoping for more screen space for Miri and Maan in the future (*HINT HINT)

The romance has not even begun yet. Un dono ko thoda samajhne, samjhane ke liye waqt dijiye, huzoor.😉

As for Maan and Miri they are the easiest for me to write, along with Pari, so you'll see a lot more of those two😃

Thank you Nishaji for turning me into a puddle of goo at the end of this chapter.

I will make sure to give you lot more heart pounding moments from now on, how about that?😉

Thanks Madhu for such an awesome, awesome comment. Makes me feel absolutely humble and in awe.

Thanks Madhu, you izz the best.
🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

this was an emotional update

it was dev's guilt which was not letting him heal
but now that the wound is out in the open, it will stop festering and heal
dev has got a new will to get better

and the most emotional part was when miri consoled maan and he accepted her little touch
it bought tears to my eyes


Thanks Punam.
Yes, now the healing process, finally begins for Dev.😃

I love writing Miri-Maan scenes. More coming up in the future😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Aww.. miri is so sweet she was consoling Maan.. despite she was scared of him earlier.. Geet happy seeing both.. Loved the way Geet made Dev understand... Amazing part..👏


Isn't she a darling? Kids are so honest in their expression of every emotion they fee. Be it joy , or sadness, or showing compassion or throwing tantrums. They give freely of themselves.😊
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Fantastic update..

it was really nice.. very emotional.

looking forward to more..


Thanks.😃

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

wonderful update... continue soon...

Thanks😃

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it😃

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




wonderful update...

Dev was ridden with guilt that his parents died because of him...Geet said right parents don't think they just react to the situation when their child is in danger...

now as Dev understood he will surely try to get better...

waiting for next part...



Thanks😃

Yep. Parents animal instinct is to protect their young ones and when you are reacting to instincts, you don't have much time to think.

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_


Superb update !!

precap is very tempting ..

waiting for nxt update ..


Thanks.
Hmm, lets see how the precap comes together.😉

Originally posted by: priya111111

its very painful past for maan and dev. dev is feeling responsible for his parents death and that guilt is not making him to recover and geet very lovingly made dev to understand about what his parents did by giving her own example. hope now dev comes out of his guilt


Dev will slowly, but surely, find his way back😊

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Quite an emotional update..
Loved it...


Thanks. I'm glad.😃

Originally posted by: priya111111

its very painful past for maan and dev. dev is feeling responsible for his parents death and that guilt is not making him to recover and geet very lovingly made dev to understand about what his parents did by giving her own example. hope now dev comes out of his guilt


You summarized the chapter perfectly.😃
Dev is a wonderful boy and he will surely find his way out of this situation.

Originally posted by: Alpha01

A fabulous and emotional update.

Poor Dev has been living with the guilt of being the cause of his parents death not understanding that its the love and duty of his parents towards him that made them take the actions that they did.😭
Geet has made him realise this by telling him about her incident and has given him hope.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I'm glad you got the essence of the chapter.😃

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

damn emotional...loved how geet talked to dev to build up his self confidence...continue sooon


Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Dev will surely begin healing now.



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