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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Maan shot her with taser gun...😲

what did he saw on her stomach when he lift her top ?...

now where is he taking her after making her unconscious ?...

and what about Geet's baby ?...

wonderful update...

waiting for next part...

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Oh god
What he saw on her stomach
And she fainted
Hope mk take care of amira

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Love2read

@Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Awesome story...

It sends a chill in the spine while reading...

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

amaaazing story simi...finished reading all parts in one go...you make maan really cruel in your stories...😳 but one doubt., how come that gun dint affect maan? and what is he gonna do with her after sedating her worried for her and he saw somethng on her body and he was shocked ryt?? kya hua...hope he doesnt harm her...contniue sooon...

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Part 7

Yash introduce her wrong time poor boy , calling her witch tit for tat , but i have doubt that he is maan man ,geet disturbed with maan visit in her house she scare for her daughter , she is confused that , that is true or dream but yesh talk help her for this confusion wow

part 8
poor girl what type of father she had , now say sorry her suffer ruining her life , so he kill maan parant in front of maan that why maan mad in revenge but he have to think properly because of geet father deed he lost his childhood , now what he will get after finishing geet and baby ,but geet bold reaction start to effect on maan ,that's interesting

part 9

geet trick maan with kiss that was bonus for us , but poor boy get pain in his ... for kiss , and he really lost in her kiss and touch , but he playing mind game , but geet also to good yes mother can do anything for her baby , condition of maan only this maan give this condition wow beautiful update

part 10

when reading this part my breath stop and my mind saying me take breath mahi take breath what update yaar ,
geet what a strong girl smoking in front of his pointed gun , but maan use that gun on her poor girl going thru this for her baby and because of her so called father , maan so cures to why she have full sleeve cloth , and in end what he saw ,cant wait for next update please update soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

hi dear! Interestin update! Geet confronts him! Geet tricks him n Maan playing with her! Geet is brave! Wt did Maan c??? update soon, well written

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

i just hate maan for wht he is doing...thn whts difference between geet;s father and him...???

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Nice parts

What maan ius trying to do

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Maangeetlove7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Maan is such a devil! Where is he taking her!? I hope their dushmani finishes! Poor little baby has to go through these because of maan. Beautiful updatenn