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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



both r looking damn cute!


Our MSK is in full mood...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHERE'S OUR DAILY DOSE ?????

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 39

When the first morning ray fell on her eyes Geet opened it. She joints hand for little pray and removed the cover from above. Stood up from bed she was to go for getting fresh when saw a red rose on table together with a paper. She came and picked it up. She knew who had kept it and smiled in return. Then lifted paper and read those words which were carved on it in beautiful cursive handwriting. She guessed it was of the man of her life. Before reading those words she stared the name had written at end and kissed it.

"Maan!!'' she said softly and then let her eyes move on the very first words.

"Good morning Geet!''


Geet- Good morning Maan

Maan (letter)- did you sleep well!'

Geet nodded.

Maan (letter)- Good! I knew you would. Now tell me did you dream about me?

She shook head smiling.

Maan (letter)- Don't hide Geet I know you did. After all you did have twofold slumber last night

Geet- Hwww!! How dare you!

Maan (letter)- now don't make faces okay! And close your mouth you looking funny like this..'

Geet looked around thinking if Maan was there but no.. he was not.

Maan (letter)- Geet I'm not there but can see you from anywhere!

She smiled thinking how exactly he started to know her every act.

Maan (letter)- You look beautiful when smiles Geet. Now come on, let me tell important thing first..

Geet frowned 'what!'

Maan (letter)- Geet look on table. Something for you is kept there!

She looked and found a gift pack. She opened it and found a beautiful red color saree inside. "Now what is this for!!'' she thought

Maan (letter)- Don't be surprise Geet because this is for my next reward. Now you have to wear this and come to the place where my driver will take you in next hour. I want you to come there, where we had started the first journey of our love.

She looked dress, caressed it lovingly. Letter had ended. Her curiosity increased thinking "Where does he want me to take?''. "Where we had started the journey of our love!! what does it mean?'' she was highly confused.

"Why are you thinking so much Geet when I told you not to hm!!''


she heard the voice of Maan which made her tickled. She turned and found him standing near door, resting one leg on back wall and with crossing arms on chest, giving her mist look.

"Maan when did you come here!!!'' she was flighty more than shocked.

"When your feather curls were swaying, dancing over the rhythm of morning wind and was kissing your cheeks without asking you!!'

He husked and slowly moved to her.

"When the color of you cheeks were reflecting the shade of morning scarlet sun, because your ears heard my name, from your lips"

His eyes were keeping charismatic glance for hers. She was moving back in instinctively.

''When your lips were cherishing the touch of my name on this paper and when your heart was wishing me to come and see you"

His broad frame over-covered her fragile one. "That moment I came Geet!'' He whispered near her ear.


Geet found no space behind, for moving more and her breathing made gasps in certainly. The fresh glow of her skin was enough for Maan to be lost completely in her. He held her from waist and brought closer. She was not sure what to react and how! She let him take every further move and he took those lips in him in liberty.

They parted after few minutes and Maan whispered in her ears "Be ready Geet. I will send car in one hour'' he left leaving her completely aflame in her own desire.

##

Maan was hell busy today. After leaving Mansion he did not go office but a place where he was to meet with Geet. The place was filled with people running here n there. Everyone was busy in redoing it, decorating it, preparing it for to be visited by its owner. Maan wanted everything to look just perfect as it was the special gift for his Geet.

"And I will not leave anything on turn!! Geet I am eager to see you when you, will see this place,'' he smiled in thrill.

Every minute his phone would have rung by the decorators or from those people who were doing this place and every time Madhva call could not be connected. Whenever Maan tried to re-call him, someone or other would appear with his side of questions about this preparation. Today he did not want to any interference in his day with Geet and so he kept phone on silence finally when the time came for coming hers..

##

Geet was ready for leaving. She was looking breathtaking wrapped in Maans gift. Her heart was beating in fastest speed thinking where and what, Maan has planned. She told Dadi that Maan has called her but she doesn't know where they will meet. Thinking that Maan must have prepared for date, Dadi did not inquire further and let her go giving some teasing comments which made Geet more nervous and she left with driver.

##

After few unsuccessful try Madhav called to Mansion and talked Dadi, asked her about Maan whereabouts. Dadi told that Maan had important meeting today and she doesn't know where it was to be happened. She did not want any disturbance between Maan and Geet's day today and so hides things whatever she knew.

##

So finally, Geet arrived where she had to. Driver let her go inside and left as Maan had ordered. The building which was stood in front of her, was already in her seen "But why Maan called me here?'' she was thinking with every steps.

When she entered, everything was silent and dimmed but as her first step rested on entrance carpet, everything showered in artificial yet majestic lights. She was shocked to see the place was looking totally different today. Some old memories started coming in her mind when saw the same person, coming toward her who had once, insulted her and threw her out from there. The manager, the same man who once had laughed on her innocence, came and bowed his head down, in front of her and said

"Welcome Geet madam!!''

She shocked, could not understand anything. Every person presented there was welcoming her and showing that she, was the most important woman here "But why!!!'' her mind echoed. She curiously wanted to see Maan, meet him because her heart and mind were not able to understand anything and finally, she saw him, stood right before her. The lost smile came back on her face and she rushed to him.

"Welcome Geet!!'' Maan held her hands and spoke.

"Maan ye sab..''


"Yes I know Geet. This is the same hotel and now, it's yours. You are the sole owner of this place Geet!!''

She looked him stunned'

##

Brij reached Delhi. He was not sure would it be good to call Dev or not. "I know he is not in Mansion and I heard, that person was saying that they would talk to Maan"

" Brij! You don't have much time. If they meet Maan , think everything will come at end!!! But I will not let it be happening!!! Not at all!! I will do something but what!!!'' he was going insane in muddle.

"Kuch na kuch toh karna parega!! Something where they could not meet that Maan !!!! '' and finally, he came on the final plan..

Precap : " I will not let anyone see that Maan, again!!!" He laughed and without wasting a minute he drove off for turning his plan into the perfect result..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
congo. loved maans surprise. precap is scary...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
loved this cute si update hayee full on Maaneet 😳 but precap is shocking hope sab accha ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome update loved it so sweet low she woke up and the letter and then maan teasing her awesome and then scumbag brig and the precap awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
lovely update
maaneet romance was awesome
love it
ohh ... maan didn't talked with madhav


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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Nice update

Maan giving surprise to geet by gifting her the same hotel where the manager had humiliated her

Brij is in Delhi n dev too is planning, maan n madahav can't speak to each other

Precap is scary
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Wat will happen now waiting to see
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40


Everything is fine ..But precap is scary...Super onion smiley 121
Babaji!!!!! plz save my Maaneet...Super onion smiley 007

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