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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting so eagerly for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites





mujhe dhamki .. ye loo




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Posted: 12 years ago


hey babaji dev aur bri jahaa jahaa jaaye wahaa bijli aur aandhi bhej dena
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Posted: 12 years ago


Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



Part 43

"Omg!! He is Maan Singh Khurana!!!'' One's eyes widen when he recognized the man, who way lying unconscious in accident.

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About twenty minutes passed. Dadi was walking restlessly in hall, thinking on everything which had happened lately. She was so much worried for Geet, blaming herself that why she let it be happened. "Why didn't I stop her!! Geet toh pagal ho gayi thi but I should have thought before sending her. I'm afaird what would Maan do if he comes knowing about Geet's departure!!!

At same time mansion phone rang. Nakul took it. His eyes widen when heard someone telling Maan had met with an accident. He dropped phone in shock and straight away runs shouting

"Dadima!! Dadimaa!!!! '' till he reachs to Dadi, whole news had been come out from his mouth in full loud "Maan sir is in hospital he has met with an accident Dadima!!!!!''

And when he stopped to Dadi, she had been numb, stood frozen with left opened eyes.

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Geet was in running car with all glasses were off of all windows. She was unable to see out and on one could see her through. She was restless. She was scared. It was unknown fear. It was not related to her mother and that, was making her more agitated. Her restless heart was saying something anonymous. It wanted to think about something else but Geet, forcefully made it think about Rano.

"What is happeneing you Geet! Why you cannot think about Maa? Maa is ill, she is suffereing, waiting for you but why I'm not restless for her!! Why I'm feeling that I'm doing wrong!! It's not right, No Geet!! Control your stubborn heart. You can't think about anything else when Maa needs you'' she was chiding herself, hating herself for this change, for this deceives! With closing her eyes, clutching her heart she tried to calm awkward noises of her heart but after sometime it again started beating with fear of strange.

They reached HP. Geet slowly opened door and come out. She took promise from herself that, she will not think anything other than Maa. With an emphatic decision she let herself move toward the giant door of Haveli and till reaching there her mind had won over her heart-noise, completely. Now she was thinking only about Rano. Brij knocked door and after few minutes it had been opened. Geet was standing behind Brij with bent head. She did not see who was stood there for her welcome. Brij went inside first and then Geet kept her foot on enterance when she heard her mother crispy voice due to happiness to see her daughter and this, made Geet startle like death..

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"Dadima!!!' Nakul scared, he runs to her and hearing his scream more servents came running. They somehow made her sit on couch and sprinkled water on her face. Slowly Dadi opened her eyes she looked around as why everyone was circling her. And then the news got re-appeared in her mind..

"How is Maan where is he?'' she cried.

Nakul narrated everything he had been called. Dadi somehow gathered her composure and left for hospital with Nakul. In mid way she called Dev but his phone came switched off so she dialed Madhav.

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Madhav was in Khurana Construction had been waiting for Maan. He had been called by Maan later and told to wait there only. In Maan cabin his entire attention was on Dev and Brij plan when he got call from Dadi. He was hell shocked hearing about Maan accident and without any delay left for hospital.

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He reached hospital. The sight was very wretched as he could not see Dadi in this pitiful state. She was breaking down in front of doctors, was begging for her grandson life. She was so alone that was unable to handle any procedure of hospital rule but as it was MSK case, doctors had already started doing their treatment without any holdup. He rushed to her and supported.

"savitriji you sit here I come to meet doctors'' he made her sit on bench and left, after telling Nakul to take care of her. He talked doctors. Doctor said Maan condition was crucial but stable. It will take time to say anything certain.

He came back to her "Savitriji you don't worry. I have talked doctors and Maan will be healed very soon. You just control yourself'' He lied, tried his best to make the old lady some calm.

"How BhaiSahab kase karu control. Don't know why it happening why God doing this to my children!!!'' she cried. "One side Maan is here fighting for his life and there Geet…Don't know where is Dev also'' her voice chocked.

Geet name alerted Madhav mind. He searched for her around instantly but she was not there but why! He became attentive. "Savitriji don't think about Dev, I know where he is but Geet!! Where is she?''

Dadi explained what had happened. Madhav was shocked that how did it happen!! "It means Dev did contact Brij!!!!! But how it can be possible!!!'' his mind started solving puzzle. He excused himself and went to an isolated corner, called his home and said his wife to send Dev in hospital, immediately without telling the reason.

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After an hour, Dev appeared in hospital. He was not sure why uncle called him here. From far he saw, someone looked like Dadi was sitting on bench but brushed off thinking why she will be here. He directly went where Madhav had told him to. He knocked the door and entered.

"Uncle!' he said where Madhav was standing facing his back to him, was hell busy on phone. He was instructing his officers for searching Geet when heard Dev calling him. Madhav anger rose on highest. He fumed in rage, turned and slapped him hard, without giving him any clue.

"Where is Geet Dev!!!!!!! '' He roared, clutched his collar

"Now you are happy to send Maan in this condition!!!!'' his eyes were spitting fire. He was in tantrum, in aggression, seemed like he was feeling the suffering of his own children. The very first time anyone could watch his this state of mind and one, was presented there who was witnessing this agitation of him being paralysed..

Precap : "Geet how are you Beta?'' Rano hugged her delightfully. "Geet bolna puttar!!'' She was waiting for the same hug from her but Geet had become motionless...


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Posted: 12 years ago
me first


now i will read the update and comment on my second post... ok? yes dear second too MEEE


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was nice but chutku update tha,...

maanu ka accident ho gaya??? hope he gets well soon as now he has to go and bring his geet back too na?

geets intrusion is so rite... koi tho use bataaye its not her maa but maaannn...

madhav slapped dev... wow pehla instalment mil gaya usse... aisse bahut saare aane baaki hai bachoo...

ab kya hoga? as geet has reached hoshiyarpur am sure brij wont allow her to make a call or to go out...

ab kya hoga??? me waitinggg monaji for the next part now itself

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...waiting for more to come
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg u updated i have to read nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Much awaited update.
Maan is serious.
While Geet is restless unknown to wat happened to Maan.
So pity on dadi has to stand through all these.
Thank god atleast madhav is here.
And Dev also not let free yet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part..geet was having premonitions n dere dadi ma is breaking..madhwa uncle slapped dev ..loved it

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