MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed]

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

this is really a painful and best story ...means one of the best sad ss i have ever read ...👏 well done.

this ss is an eye opener for every girl ..jo pyaar me physical hone ko lightly leti he par ye nahi sochti k agar kuch bhi prob hui to kya hoga ...

is dss me har emotions ko bahut hi beautifully potray kiya he he kajal aur geet ka maan k liye pyar selfless tha ...both were ready to give in for other ...

maan aur kajal loved each other but sirf one month k relationship me both have crossed thei limits ...:they should not '

kajal ne maan pe itna trust kiya aur sab kuxxch usko de diya aur isi trust ki wajah se wo maan ko dundti hui delhi aagai ...but here maan already moved on with geet .

may b agar kajal ko geet ne acceot kar liya becoz of the child .but koi bhi even maan bhi nahi samajh sakta k geet kajal aur maan ao ek hi roof k neeche saath dekh k kis dadr se gujri hogi ...

isliye kisi ko bhi pyaar me apni limits cross nahi karni hahiye jo bhi ho after marriage ...kajal ka character lesson he for every unmarried girls who trust their love blindly and accepts physical demand without thinking

PLZ DONT REMOVE THIS STORY FROM IF >>>>>>
I WANT TO READ IT AGAIN AFTER SOME DAYS

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

awesome updates

both geet and kajal ready to sacrifice their love

maan not able to decide anything

beautifully written👏

waiting for epilogue

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storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

awesome

loved it

such me adhoori dastan hi hai

maan's and kajal's adoori dastan

just speechless

i mean ye adhoori dastan bhi kahin na kahin puri lagti hai

a heart touching lovely ff

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mounacuty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

just read in one go its beautiful emotional story waiting for the epilogue

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ashmaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

lovely emotional update

aww both geet n kajal love maan selflessly

ohhh noo kajal in hospital n fighting for her life

kajal gave her baby to geet before dying

geet gave birth to a baby girl

happy ending 😊 bt will miss this story 😭

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

part 7
last part
nice one...
poor Kajal...
but hope they all will be happy...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab emotional updates! Kajal dies n gives the baby to Geet! Geet has a baby girl! Well written! Y no pm>? waiting 4 epilogue

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monika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

amazing love it they blessed with kids love the way you show all emotions and love care and pain together

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

awesome update

don't know what to say. both d girls had love maan unconditionally

Edited by impoojaverma - 12 years ago

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

epilogue

[😛my first ever epilogue😛 ]

Krish is now 5 yr old and study in 1st class while sargam is 4 yr old, after kajal death geet gave birth to baby girl and named her as sargam, she is beautiful but in reality she is monster and when 4 of them means maan, krish, dev and that means all km in on fire, nainatara had a small 1 yr boy ayan but he is too small to be join this devil team.

sargam

All 4 made run both girl on their toes nd holiday means toughest day for them, as their ia always a plan ready for their new mischievous. Today there is cricket match in km so geet and naina have to prepare their snakes as 4 of them made face a too see food made by servants so they preferred to make everything themselves.

This part is available at blog

Active Reader got access if they needed but wait for a month after sending pm

Really thanks to 9n9i9s9h9u9 for this beautiful poem and understanding this ff

mohabat ki dastan

adhoori

hai ya ,

hai poori !

yeh batane

ke liye ,

do logo ka saath hona ,

saachi mohabat main ,

nahi hai zaroori !

pyaar RADHA ka bhi

sach tha

pyaar RUKMANI ka bhi sach tha

woh allag baat hai

ik zindagi main saath thi

ik saanso ke chane ki aas thi !

mohabat main ,

sabko ,sab kuch ho haasil

to woh mohabat hi kya

gar n mille judaai

toh millne ki khushi hi kya

I want to specially thanks to some of my lovely friend who helped me always in everything

1. Kiran dii thanks to understand this story so beautifully and with depth this story is dedicate to you.

2. Valli dii nalni dii who are always my support.

3. Prachi and sumiya both are devil but without them, I not even feel like to comehere.

4. Ruby I know after ur marriage u read this or haa mujhe gaaliya bhi degi.

5. Sam111 and ashmaneet: you both are supab are your comment made me so happy

6. Preeti, gmskasrkmadhu, shri12, DONA (I FORGET UR NEW NAME) , Chriesh mandy15,Audiwalia, ar_rt,tamanna1391,monikaseth,idunno, tiakashyap, Neeju, sandymg, Ash1991,nostalgicmoon, preeti555, zaidi98, divya22, yappingduck, spvd, dhakdhak22, Dumas, cutie teju, angelic_cute, alamelu. Harshithaaa thanks you so much guys you all always comment no matter if send pm or not.

7. I am sorry if I forget any name but believe me I am thanking you all from bottom of my heart.

Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago