MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed]

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Lovely epilogue
loved it
maaneet happy with their kids
krish and sargam are just superb love them
I know for you its very difficult to pm first you write stories for us even in your busy life so hats off to you for writing such a beautiful story and dont worry I will never ask for pms

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

oh very sweet of u Bulbul...

but this story is ur hardwork not mine so credit goes to u not me...

wonderful epilogue...

kya sach mein yeh tumhara pehle epilogue hai...

they are all happy family...Krish is so naughty...Geet never differentiated between children...baby Sargam is also so naughty...

I really wany to dedicate my every story to someone special here
This is for u
And yup I never do complete any of my work before only os
😆

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sri91

@sri91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

nice ending di..
Finally happy ending...
Super...
Congrates...
Maan and his children r truly devils...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

nice part..

full of masti

maan geet dev naina..dadi n 3 kids

making the present colourful

loved the swimming pool scene..

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

beautiful story dear
liked it very much

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

nice epilogue

cute family

loved their family moments

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drashtimeetu

@drashtimeetu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Awsome epilogue

Geet maan nd their kids

Full nastiness on Sunday

Finally maan come out from his past

Nd enjoying life with his family

Geet accepted Krishna whole heartedly

Bless them...

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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Nice one,through d wndrful epi.u removed all sadness frm our heart.jst like d title its an adhoori daastan bt nt a sad one,bt really filled wit full of luv

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Aftr an emotional story happy to read a fun filled epilogue...
Loved it alot...sargam,krish,maan n dev troubling geet n naina...
Enjoying sunday n maan being all naughty with geet...
Superb update...