MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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teaser
nice...
what did Maan see?
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I read ur story in one go loved it plxx do continue soon waiting...

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awesome teaser...plz add me...😃

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interesting teaser 😉
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plz cont. soon😳
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sobia4maaneet

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hi all,

missed me ..??

guess not ...😛

but chalo since i got my net connection back last night thought to update this one ..😃

enjoy the update n silent readers u r simply not helping me update soon so better start expressing urself or the updates will get even more delayed ..😛

all my dear friends who were at least waiting for this story to be updated ..i am v.sorry but my schedule n my net sucks big time ..so bear the torture ..

thank u so much for all the likes n lovely comments on the previous parts ..🤗

some asked me about geet's approach towards this dangerous act of hiding the usb ...i hope u get ur answers in this one n hopefully geet's POV will be cleared in this one ...😊

any1 who is having objections with geet's character turning negative then i would say every1 of us have the tendency to be a little selfish n trust me when u r the one taking care of ur ownself throughout ur life n suddenly some1 goes so protective of u ...its one feeling u never want to loose ...doesn't every1 of us wants to be taken care of ...??

n here geet is exactly wanting tht only n if u call it being negative then sorry but u will have to see geet negative throughout the story ...a girl of 17 or even 18 (ill clear her age dispute in next few updates i promise) that too an orphan takes time to understand the world n get out of her teenage wishes n use her freedom in a positive way ...and since u know this story is running in past please be patient n let the story reveal every character ...coz a span of 8 years do change a person n his character n this what will happen n u urself will see that happening to every single charater of this story ..😉

now hoping that after 3000+ words of double update will fetch me a some constructive comments ..😳

here i go ...😉

n yes my dear family waloon ...mujhe laging sab bhool gaye mujhe ...😭

chalo now ill stop my bak bak ..u all enjoy the updates ..😊

luv ya

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sobia4maaneet

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MG SS :

DASTAAN -e- WAFA

PART 14

Maan just finished asking gaurav for something as she understood n offered him water ...n he said so suddenly ...

I am staying here for tonight ...

What ...??

Geet simple english hai french nahi ...I am staying here tonight ..

Nhi ...I mean its ok ...u can ...u can stay here ... I don't hv any issues par wohh ...

What do u mean ...iss situation mien bhi u can hv any issues with me here ...??

Y will I hv having u here in any situation maan ...its just ..wohh...I mean ..

Kya ...?? ..

Geet looked towards the bed n said ever so innocently) : bed tou ek hi hai ...aap soge kahan ...??

Maan shrugged n said casually ...thts not an issue ..

Geet stood thr confused but happy ...more than happy actually what more she would want than having him so close n concerned for her ...

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Geet was sleeping on her bed cuddled up in the comfy quilt turning occasionally adjusting it ...maan was sitting on the small couch with his laptop in his lap working when he noticed the window partially open .. Then saw geet uncomfortable with the chilly winter breeze ...his eyes stuck to her for a moment in was lost in those memories again ...

YEARS BACK it was the same winter night n a ajar window like this n ..HER.. his whole life ..

A very similar fragile figure ..a girl in her teens.. on a huge queen size bed ..in a button down pyjama ..was twisting n turning over the whole bed ...n he came in the room shaking his head ...seeing that kiddo girl n covered her with the duvet she just kicked off herself in sleep ..n she smiled with her eyes closed ..

Thank u

Y do u always kick off ur duvet in ur sleep when u have to eventually end up waking up girl ..

Umm ..(Cuddled in the duvet n murmured in a sleepy voice).. Coz I knw some1 will fix it ..

Yeah ...right ..(Tucked the duvet close to her n sat by her side niharofying her).. u r such a kid even at the age of 14 ..

Umm ..(She turned n tucked his hand under her chin) .. Lemme sleep na maan ...

Maan smiled n sat thr for a while until she was in a deep slumber ...than freed his hand n left pecking her cheeks lightly ..

The sound from his lappy indicating a new email broke his trace n he saw geet ..she was now better with her duvet covered around her ..but the window was still open ...he firstly muted the volume of his lappy n moved to close the window ...

The half moon slightly visible under the dark clouds surrounded by so many stars made the sky look so beautiful that maan couldn't help but to stop n glance at it from the slits of the window ..n the shinning moon hide behind the dark clouds again ..he would have teared his gaze but ..

Then thr was the similar laughing face of that very girl in front of him on the now dark sky ..her dramatic expressions ..those jut black deep eyes ...he will never be able to forget .. Another image appeared but to his surprise it was of his n geet's when he hugged her for the very first time ...n than that eyes started to fade ...like a melting wax it disappeared leaving geet n his image prominent making him restless ...n the moment it fade a panicked shout echoed from his mouth ..

NEHA ..

SANAYA AS NEHA ..😉

His eyes blinked n a water drop slid from his eyes for staring continuously so long ..n the moment he looked back at the sky thr was nothing but darkness... He stood thr confused ... with all that happened ..he could understand none ..with a sigh he wiped the wetness off his cheeks n looked back to have the moon shinning at him ..

Maan : Neha y do u have to leave me alone jaan .. Kaise sambhaloon mien sab ..tum tu humesha se jaanti thi na ..I am idiot than y do u have to leave me on my own ..

dekho yeh sab kya hu raha hai ...

Meri waja se geet iss sab mien phas gayi ...pata nahi kaise mene usse apne itne kareeb aane diya ..

(He smiled a torn one).. Pata hai she is just like u ..

but kabhi kabhi mien uss se samajh nahi pata magar jab bhi uske saath hota hoon aisa lagta hai tum mere paas hu ...

Uski baatien ..uski zid ..ghusse mien tu bilkul tumhari tarha laal hujati hai ...par ziada muskurati nahi hai ..ya shayad mene hi usse kabhi koi waja nahi di ..

Buhat kuch galat kiya mene usske saath ..aaj uski life mien jo bhi problem hai sab ki waja mien hu ...

17 ya shayad 18 saal ..bas yeh hi age hai ..iss age mien tou mujhe struggle "S" bhi nhi pata tha aur meri waja se woh itna struggle kar rahi hai ...aur aaj uski jaan jaa sakti thi ...

But sachi ..mene kuch jaan kar nahi kiya tha ..mien tu bas thori si khushi chahta tha ..uska ghussa ...uski zid ..woh dabi dabi muskaan ...mujhe tang karna ..sab bas tumhari hi yaad dilati thi mujhe ...mien jaanta hoon uske kareeb rehna theek nahi hai but kya karoon mien ...ek baar tum se door jaa chuka ..abb iss ehsaas ko nahi khona chahta tha ...but dekho yahan bhi mene geet ko takleef hi de di ...

Mien kabhi maaf nahi kar paonga apne aapko agar geet ko kuch bhi huya tou ..

But I don't wanna betray u jaan ..par uske saamne aatee hi Pata nhi mujhe kya hu jata hai ...

I can't handle ths anymore ...plss

Plss wapis aajao neha ...plsss ..

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Andheri raatoon mien ab saaya tumharaa pata hoon ..

Mien jaanta hoon yeh hu nahi sakta ..

Par phir bhi aaj kal ..

Kisi aur k chehre mien aks tumhara pata hoon ..

Tum woh haqeeqat hu jis ka zikr ..

Khayaaloon mien bhi mene kisi se kiya nahi ..

Par phir najaane kyun har pal ..

Tumhare paas ka abb mien ehsaas pata hoon ..

Woh masoom larki ..

Maano aasmaan ki paak pari hu jaise..

Uski muskaan mien ab mien ..

Tumahri hasee ki aawaaz sun pata hoon..

Aajao laut kar tum k abb..

Inn ulhajte jazbaatoon aur be-kabu halaaton mien..

Mien khud ko abb uska kasoor-waar pata hoon..

Kaise door jaon uss se abb ..

K har baar tumse dobara door hujaane ka

wohi dard pata hoon ..

Sambhaal lo aakar ek baar phir mujhe ..

K abb uski aankhoon ki gehrai mien..

Me khud ko dobta pata hoon ..

Woh nadaan samajh na payegi meri khud-garzi ..

Faqat ek kashish hai jo usko meri taraf kheenchti hai ..

Par abb bhi anjaan iss ehsaas se woh mujhe kuch iss tarha nihaarti hai ..

K mien abb uski masoomiat par ..

Apne aap ko kurbaan pata hoon ..

Uske husn ki madhoshi mien khu na jaaon mien ..

Kahin aane wale waqt mien..

Tumhara gunehgaar hu na jaoon mien ..

Sambhaalo aakar mujhe ..

Ke abb mien apne dil mien ..

Bewafa hu jane ka darr pata hoon ..

...A poem by me ...

Plss do not use it anywhr without my permi

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PRESENT

(just if u forgot tis story is running in past)

Aniee (shocked) : u ..u actually hid that device ..

Geet (looked down guilty) : hmm ..i did it ..

Meera (confused tone ..shocked expressions) : tujhe bilkul darr nahi laga geet ... ek baar bhi nahi socha kitna danger hai iss mien ..

Geet (with her dipped down rolling her wedding ring in a meek voice as if lost in that time) : janti thi ...har pal jaanti thi ...itni bhi nadaan nahi thi k apni taraf aate huye khatre ko na dekh paun ...but pata nahi kyun ..maan ke saamne humesha nadaan banna acha lagta tha ..(a small smile touched her face)..akele rehte rehte khud apna khayaal rakte rakhte life buhat boring si lagne lagi thi na ...(she tried to humour her but knew it was nt possible nt at ths moment at least)...zindagi mien pehli baar koi itna protective tha mere liye ...acha lagta tha ..maan ki attention ..unka mera yoon khayaal rakhna ...pata nahi kyun but yaqeen tha k maan k hute huye kuch bhi nahi huga mujhe ... mien jaanti thi k USB chupa kar galat kar rahi hoon ..har lamha iss baat ko jaanti thi but phir bhi ...life mien ek baar tou selfish hona banta tha mera .. 3 months ...meer 3 months whn he wasn't around I didn't knew wht I was feeling a-miss ...sab kuch theek tha meer ..sab ..

But phir bhi sab adhora tha ..aur yeh sirf ek mauqa tha mere paas ..uss ehsaas ko samajhne ka ...yeh jaane ka ke kyun ek ajnaabi jis se mujhe nafrat honi chahiye mujhe itna effect karta hai ..

Aniee : even at the cost of ur life ...??

Geet (looked up with a teary eyes smiled at her) : kuch bandhan zindagi aur maut se buhat upar hote hain ..right ..??

Arjun (angry) : how could u ..pagal hu kya tum ...sab jaane ke baad bhi u ..

Maan (circled his arms around her n held her in a supportive manner) : ok now stop it ..u all prayed for her a lot arjun ...n all u guys wanted was to know what exactly happened ...n that's the only reason I am having u all here ...doesn't mean any of u ..n I mean it any of u will accuse her of anything ...its not her fault n she is no whr guilty in any of this ..

Geet (still her head dipped down) : but it my mistake ... mene sirf apni khushi ka socha .. (looked at maan with her eyes full of tears).. apne bachpane mien kisi ka khayaal nahi aaya mujhe ... kya kar rahi hoon ...kyun kar rahi hoon ..sahi galat sab bhool gayi mien ...I am sorry maan ..

Maan (wiped her tears n smiled at her) : don't be ..kyun k agar tum mere saath rehne ki zidd mien yeh sab nahi karti tou shayad ...shayad mien apni life k kuch sab se beautiful lamhe khu deta .. u brought the life back to me in those 3 months geet .. u actually did made me feel alive again ..

Geet (looked down sniffing) : aap yeh sab sirf mera dil rakhne ko bol rahe hu na ..

Maan (shook his head) : nahi ..coz i know agar tum woh jhoot na bolti tou mien phir tum se door bhagne ki planning start kar deta ...aur shayad hum aaj yahan hote hi nahi ...

Aniee ( asked out of curiosity ) : bhai u trusted her so easily ...I mean she said she doesn't have the USB n u believed ...??

Arjun (mockingly) : abb aniee har koi tumhari tarha james bond nahi hota ..

N suddenly the intense air was cleared with fit of laughters seeing aniee throw a cushion in arjun's direction which he tackled ...but maan's smirk didn't go un-noticed by any1 ..

Meera (more of a statement) : u didn't jij ...u didn't trusted her at once right ..??

Maan (smiling) : arjun ..i guess tht james bond thing ..thts a khurana heritage ...

Geet (confused n with a authortive tone) : iss ka kiya matlab hai ..u checked my house again ...

Maan (smirking) : not just ur house ..

Geet was left with a O-shaped face when maan started telling how he checked her college locker ..her house ..

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Back to PAST ..

It was probably the first day ever when geet was late ...well it had to be ..thnxx to the extra sweet dreams she had all night long ...n the blissful sight when she woke up in the mid of the nite ...maan sleeping on the couch by the window ...he looked so innocent ..just like a child ..all those roughness ..n attitude kept aside in that moment. A sight that will remain in her heart till the last heart beat ..

But then drooling ovr him from then onwards had her super late ... but she loved it all ...after all having MSK working in her kitchen was shocker but a pleasant one ..n then his words ..

Maan : agar hugaya tumhara fashion show finish tou will u mind taking care of this toast so I can also get ready ..

Geet twisted her lips ...for a sec she almost forgot that its morning again n he is no more sleeping ..she looked at him annoyed n stepped ahead n jerked her wet hair back ...which eventually fell on his face .. that one contact with her silky long hair made him stop in his track ...while unaware to all the havoc she caused him ..geet kept walking ahead .. n here maan just turned to see her glad in a scurt n short shirt ...her hair wet n long covering her whole back ..a second lost in her feminine aura ...

Khubsoorat hai who itna saha nahi jata ..

Kaise hum khud ko ruk lien raha nahi jata ..

His trance broke with she turned n taunted him ..

Geet : ab aapko late nahi hu raha ...??

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 11 years ago

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

PART 15

His trance broke with she turned n taunted him ..

Geet : ab aapko late nahi hu raha ...??

Maan looked away annoyed with himself n then went to freshen up ..just as he returned he saw geet setting the small table she had by the couch with thr breakfast ...he was famished n her quick service did made him feel great ...but she was in a hurry he could see her glancing her watch after every 2 min ..

Maan (sat on the couch n said sarcastically) : itna hi time ka khayaal hai tou time par kyun nahi uthi ..?

Geet : aapki galti hai ...

Maan : yeh acha hai tumhari life mien kuch bhi galat hu ...who meri galati hoti hai ...

Geet : yes ..(in a lighter mode getting his coffee) ..kyun jab se aap meri life mien aaye hu ...mera brain n heart out of order hugaya hai ...

But abhi k liye plss hum b.f kar len ..late huraha hai ..

Maan smiled uncomfortably n looked at the b.f ...n the shocker toast was half burned ..poor guy was so hungry n now this ...he sighed looking at the omelet n coffee making him calm this isn't so bad ...he looked at geet who was starting her serial ..he took a deep breath n started ..the first bite n he was about to spit it out as geet forgot to add salt in omelet .. but from the corner of his eyes he saw geet who was looking at him with her eyes fixed on him ...probably she saw his facial expression ..n he remembered the moment when Neha had cooked for him 1st time ...this was the exact expectant expression she had then ...but than he recalled his rude words then ..

Maan : what the hell is this ...kis ne banaya hai yeh bekaar khana .. dadi maa what has happened to our servant ..aisa khana koi banata hai ...koi taste hi nahi hai ..yukk ..

He didn't knew Neha has made this for him ...n he said it all making her cry ...it was years back n till this date he regrets his each word ...

Not wanting to see those very tears in geet's eyes he swallowed the morsel with a sip of coffee ...n saw geet sighing with relief ...

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Just as geet left the house ..maan entered again ..n just as he thought Gaurav had arranged another key to open the door ..though it would have opened with just a hard push of his but he didn't wanted geet to know about his suspicion ..if she was at the right side ...his wrong thinking will hurt her tremendously ..but trusting some1 so easily wasn't him anymore ..n he had to check if she really didn't had the USB ...

Getting the keys of a student's locker wasn't any issue for MSK ..wasn't it just a healthy amount to be paid to the peon n he will lead u to the lockers rooms after the college was closed ...but the real fun was when the peon didn't even knew who was in front of him ..

He was checking her college locker ...somewhere he didn't wanted geet to be proven wrong ...her truthfulness was all that made her different from her generation ..the strong values n rules she had set for herself .. but he had to make sure she isn't lying coz having the USB was a need for him to save geet n to insure his family honour isn't in danger ..

He opened the locker n found nothing that shouldn't be thr ..all the girly stuff ..few notes ...n a bag ..he thought probably she'll be having something private in thr ...a part of him was satisfied ..convinced that she was saying the truth ... n now just to know her ...know the things she probably would never share with him ..know the side of her she has hidden from the world ..he opened the small bag kept safely in her locker ..

He emptied the bag ..a few ppr fell n what he saw next blew him off the ground ...he wasn't expecting this ...he didn't wanted her to do all this ..

Thr were lots of newspaper cuttings ..pictures ..quotations ..headlines ..magzine covers ..cutt outs ...and what not ..some broken pieces of glass .. a scarf which was dirty mud stains on the corner were visible n he instantly knew when she wore it ..how he will ever forget that night when she almost fell prey to those perverts ..and then things he didn't recognise ..a v.small bangle may be of some lil girl ..a few roses ..friendship day cards ..result sheets ..and her scholarship letter of mumbai college ...

Maan closed his eyes in guilt ..n sat down on the floor ..he will never be able to forgive himself for all the miseries of geet's life ...but then his opened his eyes n saw all the papers scattered around him ...he picked up everything to put it in the bag n read through each praise those newspapers had written for him ..his pictures from the magazines ...his words in different columns ...she was all along collecting it ...this wasn't good .. he didn't wanted her so involved with him ..coz he knew no matter what he will never be able to get involved with her ...surely geet is a reminder of his beautiful past but she can neither be his present nor she can never be a part of his future ...yet the ironic life Almighty has bestowed upon him he cannot leave her alone to move on .. but today he did saw the level geet was going mad ..for a teenager it was probably a very normal thing to collect pics n cutting of the person they have a crush on ...n it should not worry him that much but he knew feared the strange madness geet carries with herself ..so powerful that it always consumes him n takes away his rationality totally which he could get a solution for this endless shakles of life or may be its only time that can help him now .. but yet at this moment there are so many questions standing in front of him un-answered ...will geet ever get over him ..?? what will happen when this minister fiasco will be over he will defo leave her but will she ever get out of his mind ..?? thr are already so many strings tying her to him tht its seems so difficult today ...what will happen afterwards ...?? standing in that locker room all he had in his mind were questions n uncertainty ...but since when he got accustomed to being certain of his life ...?? n when it was last that life was merciful enough for him to be at peace ...guess these things are not for him .. putting all her things back as it was he made his way out of her college .. since it was evening n the whole college was empty ..he got lucky to walk in silence which for now he needed the most ... life has been a mystery n guess he will find a way to get himself away from geet's life without doing any harm to her ...for now her safety is his top priority ...

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pheww its done ..sorry for the delay power cutt hugaya tha ...🤢

n now i really do want some comments coz i am no longer sure how the story is going ...if thr is anything missing or if the story is boring u let me know so i can do something of it ..😃

n now bad news ...its my last month of 1st semester so ill be v.busy ..well i am already don't expect me updating any story soon but i will try n drop an update once a week ...that is if i got any time or energy left to type ..

rest its upto u people to motivate me ...😉 😆

n plsss hit the like button if u liked the update a tiniest bit ..n comment even if its something u want to criticize ..😊