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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

awesome

when maan was there she will get irritate nd jab woh nahi tha she was feeling restless

maan gayab kaha ho gaya

maan will come to save his geet

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

poor get struck with those goons save her maan

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

WHERE IS MAAN WHEN HE IS NEEDED

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
great going dear

woh saath tha uske saaye ki tarah
woh paas tha uske hum saans ki tarah
yeh baat aur thi
ki woh anjaan thi uss khushi se
jo aa basi thi usme
ban ke uska sahas
ek humsaaya saath hona hi toh tha uski wajah

ab jab woh aaya nahi
usko khud ke paas paaya nahi
dekhta hai har pal khuda mera mujhe
uske na dekhne se yah ahsaas bhi
ab mujhe mein aaya nahi

kyu hai yeh bechaani
kyu hai yeh betaabi
sab saath hai mere
sab sapne ho rahe hai pure
par kyu ek uske saath na chalne se
mr dil ko inme bhi chain aaya nahi

hi dar
its my first official commnt or you
my ew line comment
hop you like it

oh my god

i loved it ..dearo

u sum-ed up the emotions attached to the whole update so beautifully

awe ..thank u for giving this awesom piece poetry ..

really happy u liked my update

luv ya

sobia

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

oh my god
i loved it ..dearo
u sum-ed up the emotions attached to the whole update so beautifully
awe ..thank u for giving this awesom piece poetry ..
really happy u liked my update

luv ya
sobia

thanxxx dear or liking my comment

hey yoou know i read your this os

way back

and lost it

but glad i ind it today

so here is my treat for you

your new reader

good kya😉

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

thanxxx dear or liking my comment

hey yoou know i read your this os
way back
and lost it
but glad i ind it today
so here is my treat for you
your new reader

good kya😉

awee ..glad to have u here

i really love ur poetries ..

the one on Kashmakash's thread is also one of my fav.

n this one .i am tongue tied seriously

u sum-ed up the emotions so well ...

😃

hopefully aage bhi story pasand ayegi aapko ...😊

waise may i knw ur name ..

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

yes dear

me nishu

and sorry or late entry

and did you really read my poem

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
yes dear
me nishu
and sorry or late entry

and did you really read my poem

no need to be sorry ... i am happy u liked n appreciated my work ..😊

well i had read some of urs on IF (like on few FF)

if u have any separate thread plss give me the link would love to read ur poetry

😃

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

no need to be sorry ... i am happy u liked n appreciated my work ..😊

well i had read some of urs on IF (like on few FF)
if u have any separate thread plss give me the link would love to read ur poetry

😃

yes dear

i have one thread

where i post my all most all poem

with the name of ff

for which i write