MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
im sooo sorryyy
sweetyyy wo bhi kaan pakr ke im too late to comment on ur ff ss nd a biggg wala tight hug love ya dear n thanks for ur all pms whitout any cmplain thats so sweet of u
all the very best for ur exams nd concentrate on ur studies :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww so emotnal ss sobi i wiil read all parts in one go
i just stretching my head ye 1st part ne mujhe pura pagal bana dala ye soch ke ki geet ko hua kiya hai ager geet ko kuch kiya na tune tho mein na chadd tujhe kya kar sakte kuch kiya tho update kun dega
over all aweasme ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
geet restless not finding maan...hope maan reaches on time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous update
liked a lot
very well written
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry people my IF id was experiencing some problem ...😡😡
settled now only so ..😃

😳😳... UPDATING IN AN HOUR ...😳😳


any one thr ..???
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Posted: 12 years ago
me update soon ;) else 'll sleep off!
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi all,
late hugayi na ..

i know but told u all already Exams are on my head so updates will be delayed ..😕
n this IF was not allowing me to post anything since last 2 days ..😡😡

any ways ..updating next now ..😃

hope u all will enjoy this ..😳😳

thank u all for the likes n comments ..n for all the appreciation ..sorry couldn't reply to any 1 ..
but have read each n every comment ..n really happy u know u all are liking this ..
thank u soo much

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enjoy reading do leave ur likes n comments

n me going to open thread 2 for Dark Angel of Fate with story till now
read that DA readers n clear ur doubts regarding the flashback ..

luv ya all
sobia
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
MG SS
Dastaan -E- Wafa



PART 4

its been almost 20 min since she was running n finally tripped due to fatigue ..tears rolled down her eyes …n her eyes closed in defeat ..it was dark n slight drizzling was thr in few areas of the city …she was sitting on her knees in a dark isolated area ..the thought horrified her looking at the place what would happen next with those goons chasing her …n next she found a headlight of a car flashing from the main street .. some how getting up her feet she reached half but those goons chased her by then …grabbing her arm they were taking her away from the main street when she screamed

Geet : Help …help ..plss somebody help me …

They ushered her to a closed shop breaking its locks …It was as if the whole situation went against her ..the goons were looking at her with nasty lustful eyes …another tear trail rolled out of her eye ..n she closed her eyes fearing the worst ..the last thing came to her mind was just HIM …his gesture that hidden smile .. his arrogant smirk ..n those deep dark concealed eyes ..be4 they could close the shutter ..she screamed on top of her voice ..

Geet : MAAN …

One of the goon closed her mouth tight with his palm …while she was still struggling …



Goon : ek minute ..iss ke saath mauj manane se ziada acha hai iss ko beech (sell) ke paise kamayein …lala iss ke achi raqam dega ..

Goon : baat tou sahi hai …par itni qatil cheez dekh kar rook bhi tou kaise ...🤢🤢🤢

Be4 the filthy convo could proceed the shutter of the shop opened n thr stood her savoir .. with eyes spitting fire ..



she struggled to get of the the goons grip who was holding her while a tear trail skipped her eyes … all of them for a moment paralyzed with an intruders presence who looked too much enraged …next geet hit the leg of the goon holding her n ran to maan's arm while he cocooned her in his embrace tight …she was trembling with fear ..her tears never stopped for even a second …while he stood thr spitting fire ..his hold on her was soo tight …his heart beating so fiercely ..eye turned into lava red …



the goons were actually shivering seeing him ..😳
me jumping in joy ..😆

Next clutching her hand tight he made her stand sideways …n went ahead taking deadly slow steps n punched the goon who was holding geet a minute be4 so hard that he fainted right thr …the other two stepped back in fear seeing him turned nothing less than a beast .. while geet gasped seeing him so much furious …she held her mouth tight trying to stop her scream seeing the blood oozing out of that man's mouth …next she found her view getting blur with maan beating the 2 goons black n blue as if determined to kill them bare handed ..n she fainted in maan's embrace ..n he went away lifting her in his arms handing over the goons to his guards ...



~~~~~~~**********~~~~~~~~~~~

She was sitting in a car when she stirred opening her heavy lids with excruciating pain in her head ..adjusting to the dim lights ..she looked around herself panicked sweating n then realized she was covered with a coat …n next she heard some faint sounds …she can never be wrong in recognizing the source ..it was HIM ..but he was worried …she stepped out of the car n saw him standing at few steps of distance talking over the mobile ..

Maan : han woh meeting thori extend hugayi thi
Dadi : ….
Maan : gi medicine mil gayi ..plss mere aane tak khayal rakhna aap dadi maa ..
Dadi : ….
Maan : aap meri chinta mat kareye ..ill be back in an hour ..
Dadi : ….
Maan : plzz dadi enough now I am fine aajaonga ghar ..bye

She standing with the support of the car n that's when he turned around …the moment felt paused for her to see him till her hearts gets enough of him ..



tears slipped out of her already red eyes .. while he stood thr still with the way she was looking at him .. thr was so much happiness glowing in her hazel eyes he just couldn't understand what she got that made her this much happy …least he knew from the moment she last saw him since than her heart was yearning for one glimpse of him … that restlessness was for him .. that fear was not coz she was dreading for self but it was for HIM … his disappearance made her fear for him …restless to see him …

Waqt tham gaya ..
Bas uss ke liye
Mano kudrat bhi meherbaan hu ..
Jaise poori kainaat keh rahi hoo
Ke jee bhar ke dekh le woh iss ko ..
Kya kehta wohh bhi ..
Iss ki ankhon mien khoya khara raha ..
Lamha koi itna khubsorat na huwa huga kabhi ..
Ke jis ki chahat thi woh mil gaya tou ..
Zindagi se aur kya mangti wohh deewani ..
Jis sakoon ki talaash thi itne waqt se ..
Jab wohh mil gaya tou aur kis cheez ki chah karti ..
Abb tou har saans ek hi dua kar rahi thi is ski
Ke yeh lamha tham jaye aur zindagi yoon hi guzar jaye ..
(😳... poem by me...😳)


Geet smiled removing her tears ..n looked up worried seeing his eyes swollen red with dark circles …he was having fever she could tell with his pale yellowish face .. her heart cried seeing him like that n a part of her heart screamed ..she thr was something wrong ..
She inched forward n placed her hand on his forehead thr was a slight wound mark a tear slipped from her hazel while she caressed his cheeks ..caressing the burning skin ..n tears flooded down her eyes ..n she said looking at his eyes straight ..as if trying to assure her heart he is here .. like making every single breath of hers sure that its HIM ..



Geet : kahan chale gaye thay aap … mujhe akela chor kar .. kyun chale gaye thay .. (looked down dropping her hand on his shoulder feeling so week with her emotions).. aap pata bhi hai 3 din ..3 din se aapke intezaar mien mien soo nahi payi ..jab ankh band hoti tou iss darr se uth jati ke kahin aap aakar chale tou nahi gaye .. har ahat par aapke aane ki aas hoti aur fir aap nahi aate tou apne mann ko samjha leti …
(looked at him with anger n clutched his shirt) ..Kyun kiya aisa …kyun …

Maan was confused seeing her in soo much pain …he never expected her to behave like this … least he expected that she might not even notice his absence ..but here she is in such a devastating state ..pain clutched his heart so strong as if his heart stopped beating …out of this feeling of suffocation …just couldn't take the intensity of her emotion ..her eyes were soo pure ..transparent like a mirror ..saying every bit of her heart making him loose himself fearing it ..he snapped her hold on his shirt n held her harshly from her shoulder ..



Maan (raged) : Kyun kiya …mene jo kiya wohh meri marzi thi ..tum mujh se yeh sawaal kar rahi hu ..kis haq se geet ..kis HAQ se ??🤢🤢 kya soch kar han …kya soch kar yahan aayi tum just what the hell were u doing over here in this dark deserted street ..kya soch rahi thi yahan aane se pehle tum …tumhara ghar kitna peeche reh gaya andaza bhi hai ?? …socha tum ne ek second ko bhi ke agar abhi mien nahi aata tou yahan kya hugata … geet for heaven sake speak up …pata hai tumhari cheekh (scream) sun kar kitna ghabra gaya tha mien …how could u be so careless.. (n left her jerking away)


Kya kehti who …kaise kehti ..
uss ke sawaal ne jaise uss baqi har lafz ko be-mayne kar diya tha ..
ek sawaal ...bas ek sawaal ne usski dunya hi ruk di hu mano ..
sach hi tou tha .. kyun kar rahi thi usska intezaar ..
kya HAQ tha jo itna sab keh gayi ..
yeh kya ehsaas tha jo dil iss shaqs se jorta jaa raha tha ..
siham si gayi woh ..darr si gayi woh ..
apne hi badalte jazbaat se ghabra si gayi woh
kuch kehna chaha par sharam ke maare lafz hi kho gaye shayad
nazrien jhukaye .. jheel si aankhoon mien ansoon liye woh khari rahi ..
uss ek pal mien jaise zindagi ka maqsad hi kho diya tha usne ..
( 😳...poem by me...😳 )



Geet (stood looking down n stepped back said looking up to his eyes with her tear filled eyes with so much of hurt n confusion in them for after that one question every word of his fell on deaf ears) :koi haq nahi hai .. koi bhi haq nahi hai …



Usski ankhien kitna kuch bol gayi
Shayad wohh bhi jo uske lab kabhi na keh pate
Aur who bhi jo uss ke dil par beet rahi thi ,..
Ek lamhe mien sab khatam hota nazar aaraha tha ..
Maan ka dil jaise andheroon mien dopta jaa raha tha
Uss ka Har peeche jata huya kadam
iss ko andheroon mien dhakelta jaa raha tha
Kya keh gaya yeh …kaise keh gaya woh … kuch samajh nahi aaya
Par abb lafz wapis le bhi tou kaise
Jis masoom dil ko tora hai uss ko jore bhi tou kaise
Kuch kehna tou chaha ..par usski dard se bhare nighahen
Kadam ruk gaye dil bhi tham sa gaya
Har ansoon usska iss ko zakhm dega
Abb kis moh se maafi mange ..
Kya kehta .. kuch samajh naa aya ..
Bas khara raha dil mien baat liye ..
Hontoon par aas liye ..
Ankhoon mien maafi ki faryaad liye ….
( 😳...poem by me...😳 )


Maan tried saying something n took one step in her direction but she stopped him in his track showing him her hand out …while her eyes full of tears …n he ran away saying a quick SORRY …
While he stood thr in grief … n then followed her in his car searching for her n then followed her till she went in her house … he closed his eyes his head was bursting with pain but heart was feeling 100 times more than that ..n next his mbl buzzed with the call of his guards ..

Guard : sir wohh 3 admiyoon ka kya karna hai ..??

Maan (blood red eyes spitting fire remembering all what happened) : cut off thr hands n than KILL THEM ..
people happy with the punishment na ..

Guard : but sir police ..
me wondering dumb BG msk kyun police ki parwah karega ..😛

Maan : riot hurahe thay na ..just kill them n throw them at some corner … n han make sure it isn't an easy one .. I am leaving to KM ..they are waiting for me thr ..

Guard : should I send some men with u ..

Maan : no need of it …but do what have I said word to word ..i don't wanna see them alive ..

Maan followed geet by walk while she ran in her best speed in that state reaching her house in that drizzling night her eyes pouring tears n heart pounding as if some volcano is making it burst out with pain … the moment she entered her house maan came out from behind the pillar n watched her shaking figure standing thr banging the door forgetting about the bell for a moment his steps went ahead to steady her comfort her but then stopped remembering his own words ..n finally a worried meera opened the door cocooning geet in her embrace ..n went in taking her …

PRECAP :-
me wondering MSK bol payega sorry ...??
let alone him ..itna sab kehne ke baad Geet uski baat sunegi bhi ...

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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WOW LOVELY EMOTIONAL UPDATE.. TE WAY GEET IS SCREAM FOR HELP BUT MY MAAN HIS GEET KI SAVIOUR CAME AND HIT TAT GOONS WAS SO LOVELY.. TE WAY GEET IS HAPPY TO SEE MY MAAN AFTER 3 DAYS AND POURED HER FRUSTRATION ON HIM WAS SO LOVELY CUTE EMOTIONAL.. TE WAY MY MAAN HURTING HER IN FRUSTRATION WAS LOVELY.. HE TOO WORRIED ABT HER BUT DIDT KNOW TO EXPRESS HIM PROPERLY AND HURTS HIS GEET...TE WAY CRYING AND WENT OFF WAS SO EMOTIONAL, BUDDHU MAAN NOW GO AND MANOFLY UR GEET... TE WAY MY MAAN GAVE PUNISHMENT TO TAT GOONS WAS LOVELY..I LOVE TE UPDATE
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet ..first attach by goon and latter by maan...want to see how maan mnfy geet..what is his feeling toward geet..geet already fall in love with him..pls cont soon..

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