If Only You Saw Me (4) - Page 66

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Don't you know? Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai!

Originally posted by: mayyo13

😆
Khud hi toh mujhe ye story likhne ko kaha. Ab bughto. 😆

Originally posted by: sweetkj

par yahan toh

intehaa ho gai intazaar ki!!🥱

Originally posted by: sweetkj

story likhne ke liye bola tha~!!! badalne ke liye nahi!!🤔

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Abhi kahan Intehaa hui?! Abhi jo promised day bhi nahin aaya! 😳

Originally posted by: mayyo13

You mean to say main badal gayi hoon. Tell me how I was before I started the story taa ke main waapas waise hone ki koshish karun. 🤔

Originally posted by: sweetkj

pehel hi itna door ka day bolti hai!!😳

Originally posted by: sweetkj

you were 'sweeter' and not a taunt queen!!

A chapter of illusions and revelations , of self realizations and discoveries.

It was about leading us down false garden paths along with Maan; can i say the letter. That was a tense, suspenseful, oh no! what's going to happen now, kind of moment without any villians involved, though for a moment I was ready to believe her parents to be the villians. Bloody brilliant Mayyo.👏

He finally reached a logical answer for Ayush, through deduction(which according to the dictionary is the drawing of a conclusion by reasoning)

And I'm glad the stalker finally became the walker. I mean I'm glad he walked straight into the restaurant instead of lurking around.😆

His worry for Geet was so sweet I almost thought, he was going to pull a Shahrukh Khan on us and start singing, Gumshuda, Gumshuda, Koi Hua, Kaha Hua.🤣

And I find it endearing and funny how Maan's friend Anaya, suddeny became such a good friend of Geet's, that Maan has to go get Geet's number from her. But we girls are like that aren't we. Ek pal mein zindagi bhar ke dost bana lete hain.

I loved the bond you showed between Maan and Ayush. It reminds me of a quote,
"You are going to be my friend for life, you know too much."
They do know each other so very well as only best friends do, don't they?😆

He went from a stalker to a walker to a talker. I'm shocked. 😲He went and told Geet upfront that he came to see her. Aww, he is growing from a boy into a man right before my eyes and I love this character growth you've shown in him.😳

Finally, the mystery of the letter was solved. Phew!! I think we all collectively breathed a sigh of relief on that one, you sadist.

In my own little imaginary world, built around this Maan and Geet, she showed him that letter because she didn't want him to misunderstand the whole marriage thing. coz of course she doesn't want the guy she's fallen for, to think that she's marrying somebody else. And nothing you say to me is going to dissuade me from thinking this😳.

I can totally relate to Geet about missing her family. I have been missing my mom so badly for this whole 10 day's I've been sick. Husbands are fine, but you want your mother's nurturing care when you are sick.

Every girl who's going to marry goes through that concern about her parents. But in her case, her protective feelings towards her parents are completely understandable. You know why, on a personal level I understand her feelings totally.

Favorite places shared with favorite people, makes for favorite memories, dont they? They shared some pretty profound stuff about each other. Geet is now seeing Maan in a totally new light. Yes goodlooks and physical attractions are nice, but if there is not substantial character under those toned muscles, you cannot build a life together.

I can almost picture Maan and Geet reminiscing years down the road about this place and moment as being their first date.😳

Sapne mein milta hain ho, munda mera sapne mein milta hain.

Aisa sapna kyu aata hain mujhko aisa sapna kyu aata hain.

Don't worry Geet. This is exactly how you think about "profound friends" There is nothing more to it I'm sure.😈

I loved everything about this chapter. The character growth, the look into Geet's past, her thought process, the friendships, everything.
This was an chapter that had everyhing including a NPM.

Love you Mayyo, Mayyo.🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uska toh main kuch khaas kar nahin sakti.