Originally posted by: had2bu
The restlessness to find her was so endearing... as the time went so his anxieties kept rising.
That happens a with all of us, doesn't it? The passing time increases our anxieties for the people we care for...
Ayush observing everything and confronting him like a true friend. Maan confronting him back also like a true friend. The way you described this was so perfect Mari. Women tend to speak and speak and speak whereas here two males passed their concerns and opinions on their life decisions in just a few lines.
Exactly. Mostly, women tend to speak out their concerns in a lot of words while men just declare their decisions in a few words.
I was shocked at the first page of the letter and then when the second part was revealed I let out my breath like Maan. Very tantalising and naughty of you to do that, but I liked it.
You and Apa were the ones who said I'm naughty, so I'm just trying to be some! 😆
How true to self he is when he enlists his mothers help to find out about Geet via Geeta. There is an innocence in him that is so endearing and charming. Geet down with a fever and sore throat and you could feel his concern.
He indeed is one of those people who are innocent and at the same time, very mature and sensible.
The best part was his taking her to his favorite place. Such a first step when you are in love. Everything endearing to you, you want to share and highlight. I love how for a quiet boy he spoke so much and revealed himself to her. For a quiet girl, she also gave him a lot of herself here.
Absolutely! You share your favourites as well as what bothers you. The level of comfort between them is such that they can trust each other and share what they can't talk about with others. 😊
The dream sequence for us was ... sigh ... so dreamy. Let's see how this will affect her around him.
Of course it was for you guys! Demand jo thi! Bas difference maine ye kiya ke you all were thinking Maan could dream this and actually, Geet did. 😳
Hmm... Affecting her... Will it affect her? Or will she shirk it off thinking it's just a wayward dream...?
She finally got the thing about his eyes and not to forget the slight smile.
Who wouldn't? 😳
All in all a splendid update. 1st request fulfilled... more to come.
My sigh of relief got stuck in my throat when I read the second half of this sentence. 'More to come'? It was so, erm, hard to write this dream and you're already asking for more?!
Thanks for updating Mari.
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