As The Tide Turns - a MG SS - part 4, pg 12, 26/2 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mmm, so what do I write?

For me the story ended with part 4...the tragedy that is life...you love, you lose, you move forwards. Is that not the norm?

Do you ever go back? Should you ever go back? Especially if you find the "ONE" true love/ your soul mate, even if under the wrong circumstances?

Then Avi, you wrote an epilogue!!!
Was this moving forwards for them or moving back? Time had passed, Dev had moved on, but neither Maan nor Geet could- they were too connected, like 2 magnets. They had to be together- neither would be whole without the other. You craftily used Daadi to trick both into acknowledging their need to be together- Ying and Yang, not just a desire or physical attraction.

So Avi, I expect the unexpected with you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the alternate ending the both made a mistake so they should move on everyone else has life is about making mistakes and learning from it and they did awesome alternate ending i am a sucker for happy endings thanks for the pm
Drashtii Dhami & Gurmeet Choudhary as maan & geet in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ had2bu

that was amazing...n soo sync with real story...gr8 job
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭heart touching update
beautiful
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg tat was fabulous. Outstanding epilogue 👏 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update..
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet leave both of them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
humans and their values sometimes i just don't understand them...setting Maan free was her decision that she made based on her morals...but then again love doesn't know right and wrong...he loved her and she loved him...leaving him wont make her happy and neither him...love is not a crime...and we can't do anything for the circumstance...
i know what she did to Dev was wrong but still she loves Maan...

p.s sry i am also a hardcore Maaneet fan and seeing them separate hurts me always...but i loved this ss and respect your decision with a heavy heart
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...sucker for happy endings
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved to the core
Very beautifully written fozia
I did not like the end you made
But Avi corrected it they lived happily ever after
Loved dadima who tricked them into plan and united them forever
Beautiful ending Avi

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