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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

awesome update...loved it

waiting for next..continue soon

thank u for pm

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nihatri

@nihatri

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

without even words they understand each other so perfectly

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome
So beautiful
Likes that sweet togetherness

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anjali

@anjucool

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

awesome & beautiful update

loved it

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

beautiful update...

loving geets bubbliness..

waiting fr dere engagement...

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Every piece of music,and every song that you choose is just amazing

Rahat Fateh Ali Khan and O Re Piya. My favorite singer and one of my favorite songs.

And it suited the whole situation beautifully.

My heart was pounding as I was waiting for Maan to get a glimpse of her on the stage. Mast likha hain tumne woh pura scene.

And I never expected that stick to be a flute. Like Maan, I too thought it was just a stick she played with. or perhaps that it was a ganna(sugarcane)😆

Aur jo banda shaadi ke liye bilkul raazi nahi tha woh Geet ka naam sunke, "a sudden excitement filled his heart"

Totally reminded me of Maan's reaction in the serial, when Dadi says she has seen a girl for him and then takes Geet's name. and Maan goes, " Geet se". One of my most favorite Maan- Dadi scenes.😳

That flute music is so gentle and soothing.

If I close my eyes i can almost imagine it like a moving film. Maan standing there behind her, the evening closing in on them and the flute at her mouth playing that soothing music. Enchanted evening, isi ko kehte hai shayad.

Ahh!! But Maan hasn't looked at her yet.

And Geet knows about him?😲

Beautifully narrated chapter Ash. Tumhare shabdon mein jadu hain. I just love how your words draw clear pictures.

Ok, off to read the next chapter😃

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Beautiful update Ash...

I felt the lovely emotions flowing through both Maan and Geet though even I felt bad...poor Maan...yaar kam se kam shakal to dikha de...sapne mein bhi flute, baal aur dupatte se kaam chala padhta hoga...

loved the idea of masquerade ball and even more the mmusic. The way you changed the tempo and narrated the events as empo of music changed was amazing...

a very beautiful, lovely and aweosme update...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Mind blowing Update 👏
Every scene was So Cute 😃
From Geet ko Naughtiness to Maan ko Restlessness 😳
Last dance was superb 😳 😉
Beautifully Written 👏
Hatts Off to You 😃

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet thinking abt Maan. N Maan can't keep
her off from his mind. I loved d way how u
used the words to elegantly describe the
update especially Geet's part. It felt out of
world feeling. It was like she was a
naughty chulbuli princess.

Playing aankh me choli wid Maan. Maan
upset that he hasn't talked n saw to her till
now n uski engagement bhi aa
Gayi. Everyone teasing him for his restlessness.

The party was fabulous. Maan hate to wear
mask. Geet dressed to kill. The song n how
u used it was awesome. I really don't have
words with this update.

Geet n Maan matching steps with each
other. He is not leaving her seeing her
mischievous eyes n smile. Maan ka kya
hoga kitna seedha ladka hai.
Want to see more of Geet playfulness.

Continue soon.

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

very beautiful update loved the way its going ...u gave pain thru parineeta but this story heals tht pain...both stories r wonderful...doing magic in our lives tooo.

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