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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

ln this day of love just now read two OS on d adorable couple Maaneet

lt was beautifully written...loved d description of Geet

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

A very Happy VALENTINE'S DAY...😊

Beautiful, amazing, lovely...

all in all... FANTABULOUS...👏

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

such a lovely OS...loved reading it...

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

definitely one of the best OS s i've come across...

it's wonderful 👏

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

sweet yet measured enough to not give me diabetes... ah the land of love...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awww!!! That was so sweet and adorable! :) Loved it, Minu!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awww who would have thought she misunderstood him for so long
but now they are back with each other
and have sealed it with a kiss
so cute and adorable for sure

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

OMG! This OS is definitely my favourite Valentinesday OS I have read, and I read a lot. It just so perfect. They way everything fits so well, and nothing seems to be rushed. How you brought evrything in such a way that it wasn't confusing and dosing the information in such a way that in the end, not only have you written about them solving the problem, you worte about how the problem started. The feelings you described, it only added the depth and told how it must have been those years they had been growing apart. Especially for Maan, since he didn't even know the reason of their break. It is beautiful. I love how you made their thoughts so flowly. It just seemed like how I would remember things if I saw photos from my childhood. It wan't forced, just simple direct reactions. Love the covering up of Geet, well her attempt of covering up. It is so real, on the spot trying to change the subject because you are the reason of breaking something and being mad at someone else cause you think he did it. It is so well thought about. The concept is awesome, but you wrote it so damn well, even if the concept wasn't awesome the OS would have been just as perfect. You really need to PM me whenever you write more.