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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys i am back with part 40

thanks all for your support







PART 40






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AROHI :

Assi Gaj Ka Ghagra Meri Resham Waali Choli
Mujhe Agar Paana Hai To Ghar Aaja Leke Doli

Arohi danced..while the lyrics changed and arjun covered her..she giggled when she ducked him..everyone was enjoying this…

ARJUN:

Saari Raat Na Sone De Teri Chudi Ka Lashkara
Le Jaau Mai Tujhe Uthake Karde Zara Ishaara
Zid Pe Apni Aa Jaaye To
Zid Pe Apni Aa Jaaye To Maane Na Punjabi

He scooped arohi in his arms… while maan looked at geet she immediately looked down sensing him looking at her…

BOYS :

Mehbooba Ke Dil Ke Baato Ko Jaane Punjabi
Maine Suna Hai Ke Hote Hai Dilwale Punjabi
Masti Mein Dube Rehte Hain Matwaale Punjabi
Chhede Jo Koi Zarabhi Karde Dhamal Punjabi
Ladki Jo Dekhe Gulabi Karde Dhamal Punjabi
Ishq Ishq Mein Pyar Pyar Mein No.1 Punjabi
Dil Lene Mein Dil Dene Mein No.1 Punjabi


The two hearts were dying to see each other.. though having each other ..they were standing very close to each other ..maan was looking at his would be wife…somewhere he wanted to meet her .. .. they haven't even spoken aword with each other just the only encounter he knew was on arjun' s engagement and he knew that she was so beautiful ..but the main thing that needs a commitment and the devotion was the nature and the pure heart …..

Maan looked at the couples there..his arjun bhai was too engrossed in his would be wife..his friend was trying to get to know his luck through disha ..he looked at his mom she was looking happy ..with nidhi ( remember maan's sister ) … and when his gaze went to her she like sensed his piercing eyes.immediately looked down..she was shying blushing …… a small smile crept on his lips … his wife was indeed so shy ….

He too averted his gaze she was trying to avoid his eyes that were following her ..maan would have been enjoying the cute luka chupi if nidhi wouldn't have been interrupted his staring session ….

Nidhi poked her finger on his shoulder ….

Nidhi: bhai kise dekh rahe ho…muhe bhi bata do….

Maan looked at her with baffled expression he was caught ….

Maan tried to let it go but nidhi was nidhi , how can her brother be left without any teasing she had missed this golden opportunity on arjun's engagement and this time no..she will make sure that she will all that fun that will make this memorable for maan ….

Maan : what are you saying… tu toh mom ke saath thi phir yahan ….

Nidhi : kyun bhai aapka bhabhi ke saath staring session interrupt ho gaya don't worry main kisi ko nahin bataungi you can continue bhai …. She winked at him..

Maan showed him his big big eyes …..nidhi made a sad face….

Nidhi : kya bhai kabhi toh apni in aankhon ko aaram do… you continue your session main nani ke paas ja rahi hun .. " aankon hi aankhon me ishara ho gaya …" she sing and maan was embarrassed this was the all the things that he wont actually miss in his life … withing his tough demeanor that soft hearted maan was still there …he was caring protective obsessive for his dear ones and now geet will be amongst them…

Arohi snapped arjun's hands she was having tears in her eyes..he lied to her … she was feeling outdated ..she was not feeling right at that moment ….

Arjun grabbed her hands by force and cupped her face …..

Arjun: arohi look at me… meri taraf dekho aru …. You know why I didn't tell you …

Arohi cryingly snapped ….

Arohi : why you didn't tell me arjun… mom meri kuch nahi lagti kya you , maan veerji , mom all went through all the pain alone mujhe bataya tak nahi … why didn't you ..arjun..kya mera itna bhi haq nahi tha …. And … she started crying bitterly she was getting emotional ..she had got to know about naina's illness and the surgery through

nidhi who had unknowingly blurted out infront of her and arjun ….

Arjun: arohi listen to me baby … please mere ye intensions nahi the I didn't wanted you to dekho kitna ro rahi ho ..and even mom didn't wanted her daughter in law to feel bad na jaan …..

Arohi : still you know how I felt that you have to go all this alone when I was enjoying …then something snapped in her mind….

Arohi: maan veerji you told me that he is very close to mom so ky ahe is marrying for mom please tell me arjun …..

Arjun nodded … arohi was worried sick..that means this was a marriage of compromise …..

Arohi: matlab… he is marrying geetu because family wants him..he doesn't want.. haina arjun ….

Arjun nodded In a NO , and narrated all the events that happened ..arohi smiled …

Arohi: sachhi me arjun. Arjun nodded

Arohi: mom theek ho jayengi na …..

Arjun: maine aur maan ne mom ko ultimatum diya that she will have to listen to us ..warna shaadi postponed …

Arohi giggled….

Arohi: aur mom maan gayi arjun….

Arjun: mom ka beta hai na…

*****

Someone was listening to their talks … geet was searching for arohi when she saw her jeeju and di in the lawn they were looking cozy ..so geet was about to go when she heard them talking about maan and a curiousity rose in her to listen to them about her would be hubby …..

Her eyes glistened listening to all and she smiled a little ….

Geet smiled a sudden pride and honour was there in her heart for him.. she looked at him..he was standing with his mother..she smiled a bit … knowing her decision is correct… she has choosen a correct life partner for her….

The little appreciation in her was also washed away…. She knew that her would be husband was a gem … though she always gets shy looking towards him but still she knew that she will never regret her decision …

( sorry no meeting for maaneet…)

It was haldi day ….

Geet and arohi were in their bed ..arohi was snuggling close to her teddy and geet was looking at her ma papa's photo she was early in the morning looking ..it was only five and she wasfeeling nervous something was churing inside her stomach..jittery feelings..she was nervous just two days more today was the haldi and the next day will be sangeet and then finally wedding …

She looked at arohi she was having her dupatta in her fingers twisting and turning ….

Geet looked above…

Geet: babaji ..ye kya ho raha hai..i know that this will happen but itni jaldi babaji ..darr lag raha hai …. Kuch galat toh nahi hoga na….

Arohi peeped oustside from her comfy blanket she too get up and looked at geet her eyes closed she too did the same…

Arohi: geet ke babaji please joy eh keh rahi hai wo meri taraf se bhi meri behen bhul gayi hai ki meri bhi shaddi hai …

Geet immediately opened her eyes and hug arohi…

Geet : aru darr lag raha hai …. Mujhe mama aur papaji ko chdkar nahi jaana..and the next minute she burst out crying ……

The newly found confusions and relations were making geet to cry …. Rano who had came to wake them she saw geet crying she looked at arohi who was also on the verge of crying both of them .. were crying..and when geet saw rano her sobs got louder ….

That listening to those her masi and her bhabhi priya came… rano was having no clue why they were crying ..when geet with a pout said…

Geet: mumma mujhe shaadi nahi karni main aapko aur bhaiyya aur papaji ko chodkar nahi jayungi …. How can I live without you … mumma ..she sobbed..and arohi who was wiping her tears came to her bhabhi's embrace…

Priya teasingly ….

Priya: teri bhi shaadi cancel aru ….

Arohi with a chocking voice said…

Arohi : bhabhi …..

She hide in her embrace ……

They were not calming doen when nitika started singing for them….

Nitika : Yeh Betiyan To Babul Ki Raniya Hai

Yeh Betiyan To Babul Ki Raniya Hai

Priya who was having arohi in her embrace keft her and started singing too…


priya :

Mitti Mitti Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaniya Hai
Yeh Shisthiyan Gudiya Rab Jaane Ki Yeh Kudiyaan
Kina Jamilya Naale Jaaniya Hai


rano kissed her baby's forhead who smiled a little and hug her mum…

rano : Yeh Betiyan To Babul Ki Raniya Hai
Mitti Mitti Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaniya Hai

listening to all the commotion rajveer , tej and her papaji also came… they saw the ladies teasing the brides ….


papaji :

Yeh Ladkiya To Maaon Ki Raniya Hai
Yeh Ladkiya To Maaon Ki Raniya Hai

Tej teased his both the sisters ..he tickled arohi who giggled….

Tej:

Mitti Mitti Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaniya Hai
In Ka Ram Hai Rakhwaala Inka Bachpan Bhola Bhaala
Bholi Bhali Si In Jawaniya Hai


Raj :

Yeh Ladkiya To Maaon Ki Raniya Hai
Mitti Mitti Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaniya Hai


nitika came around geet who was in her papaji and her ma's embrace she showered her all the love to her neice …..

Nitika:

Sab Ke Dil Ki Saare Ghar Ki Yeh Raaniya Hai
Sab Ke Dil Ki Saare Ghar Ki Yeh Raaniya Hai

Raj and priya and tej came around them..they were teasing both of them …..

Raj , priya and tej : Yeh Chidiya Ek Din Pur Se Udjaaniya Hai
Koi Inka Haath Na Chhode Koi Inka Dil Na Tode
Tey Saache Rab Diyan Meherbaaniya Hai

All :

Yeh Betiyan To Babul Ki Raniya Hai
Mitti Mitti Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaniya Hai
Kahaniya Hai Kahaniya Hai

Next : haldi , sangeet ….

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
Loved it
Maaneet are happy with their decision of marrying
Nd Geet is proud of maan
Geet crying because she don't want to lea've her house

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meettu

Awsome update

Loved it
Maaneet are happy with their decision of marrying
Nd Geet is proud of maan
Geet crying because she don't want to lea've her house



yup , thanks for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan is staring at geet nd caught by her sister
nd unkowingly nidhi blurted out the illness of arjun's mother
maaneet are liking eachother
geet getting emotional with the thought that she has to left her parents house
i think this is the most difficult moment for every daighter nd their parents
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...eagerly waiting for sangeet and maneet meeting...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
love maaneet hide and seek game..lovely couple..geet is missing her family before marriage ...sooo sweet..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maan was drooling his would be..
nidhi caught him drooling n teased him..
arohi was worried thinking about her mil
geet was proud marrying maan..
he chose family first..
both are crying becoz they dont want to leave their mom..
rofl..
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part maan was dying to talk geet and geet also came to knew about maan and was proud of him aur geet and arohi was more emotional to leave their house and the family singing for them was fabulous
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Posted: 12 years ago
arrey waah annkhon hi aankhon mein ishare ho rahe hain
kya baat hai maneet
chori chori sab kuch ho raha hai
hahaha poor maan he got caught out didnt he
bless that sure was fun when nidhi teased him
well dude yeh toh hona hi tha
parr lagta hai maneet will only know each other more after their wedding
koi nahin as long as they are together dont matter do it
aru was right to be mad at jun man
how could he not tell her about ma man
chalo good he told all about what happened
awww our girls dont wanna get married and leave their family behind so cute naa
cheers for pm

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