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tichPM

@tichPM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

1st of all change the date its FEB dear
and 2nd awesome os
different aspect of society
i will say everyone was at fault
Meera n dev Not because they love each other
but the selfishness made them evil
meera was like a mother to geet how could she do that
geet's father who without knowing anything blindly gave his daughter to a person hearing other girl
Geet was also at fault,,
she placed her father above all and where was maan's love,
doesn't she felt responsible towards him and her love
and maan if he knew everything and he was so powerful he should have tried to say all truth to her father..

and the society who still blvs in cast n all...

very beautiful os
waiting for epi,
1st time commented o ur fics 😳

Luv
Tich

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome...
poor Geet...
but the sinner will always be Meera...
how could she?
disgusting...
well i want another update too...
Meera should suffer for her deeds...

PS - tum phir Jan likhi? yaar we are in the Feb month...this is the second time am telling u Harika dear...looks like madam is so much attached to Jan...kya hua tha?😉

Edited by spvd - 12 years ago

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meettu

@meettu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I loved it
Geet should listened to herself
Marry someone widout knowing biggest fault of anyone life
Loved dis os
Will be waiting for epilogue
Update soon

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harika

@dreamyharika

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sdlife19
superb dear

meera.. she is such a cheap girl

though i know caste and all as i believe in as i myself come from a much higher caste but doing such thing would be the death for someone..

how could meera just use geet. was it love

no it was lust

you give us the next part but i want you to show how maan and mostly geet punishes dev and meera.. geet's father should also know abt this..

if you show this than i would be the happy as the best justice for the story harika.. and i know you will show it

omg di i feel so happy reading ur lamba sa comment on my story for the first time and me crying sachi mein the warmth that i get from you its something i cant explain and you have taken time to comment on fb wall so that i reply this is a day i will remember hamesha well i would say aapne advice di hai toh epi mein wahi hoga di can you pm me on fb and tell me how you want me to punish dev and meera?? i have something in my mind that i decided it for epi bt aapka advice would be a cherry on top lub you so much i was really scared kal night to post this story bt the comments i got shayad aaj raat ko khushi ke maare so nahi paongi 😳

hugs di🤗

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: GurtiArti
OMG!!! This is really remarkable OS, everything so balance b'coz its very difficult to plot proper foundation for making good story as like SS and FF...!!!

I think, i should parmanently add this word in Dev's name...KAMINA😡, Meera is big stain in the name of friendship😔

Wow!!! Maan was secret stalker in Geet's life and saved her...!!!

Waiting for next part

aarti tune yeh kya kiya?? inna special comment?? main kaise so jaon?? lub you yaar i am so so happy sachi mein 😳

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: pixelflower620
fab os budddy👏
but y cnt dev gv her div nd y cnt she marry maan
u hv gvn a logical info bout rh incompetence but its treatment is to gv an antibody within 72 hrs of childbirth but good xplanation
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm😃

ahh thanks so much for telling this really apna naam batado yaar peej and ya epi mein ill quote your name😳

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: mounacuty
epilogue😡

dongi baba gussa mat karo😆

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sona-rai
omg harika loved it a lot yar...
i think biggest sinner is MEERA,god she used geet's friendship,mohinders trust for her own PAAP...grrr hate her a lot,is she a woman grrr.

this is what i believe too sona thanks for this special comment and ya for leaving your view muahhh hugs🤗

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: spvd
awesome...
poor Geet...
but the sinner will always be Meera...
how could she?
disgusting...
well i want another update too...
Meera should suffer for her deeds...

PS - tum phir Jan likhi? yaar we are in the Feb month...this is the second time am telling u Harika dear...looks like madam is so much attached to Jan...kya hua tha?😉

uff silly me😆 kya karon deepa itna busy rehti hoon ki time ka kuch pata hi nahi hota feb mein aagaye na month of lovers🤣 aur mera independence month haye kaash kuch special hua hota jan mein 😳

well abt the comment i agree you said wat was in my mind yaar lub you😳

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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harika

@dreamyharika

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: PristineSoul
Wow.. Enjoyed reading this.

I have also started reading another FF of yours.. I like the way you write. Please send me a pm whenever you update any of your FFs

added you and thanks for this special comment another ff?? which one did you start??😳

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