OS ~PAAP~ EPILOGUE pg/18 feb 21st!!!

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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

i love this .we cant go against our parents if we love 1 person.society cant except that.geet love maan nd maan too.but geet do that for her father nd dost.not true friend .jisne usko dhoka dia😕..maan finally come nd take geet ..😛

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Aaradhya

@01aaradhya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesummm update...loved it...😛😛😛

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesome OS.. finally Maan & Geet r together.. will they marry?

update soon..thnx for pm😊

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

pls give long epi..cant wait..

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

lol

after typing half of my comment now i know who blame for all this mess ..

1stly meera n dev to be so damn selfish if they loved each other so much they should have fight foe it rather than making geet suffer ..

n Geet's father ...a daughter is considered to be the most precious possession of a parent's life yet he handed over his daughter to a person about whom he didn't even care to know much about ...

i feel maan was right at his place ...think about it logically

she herself has made him go away 1stly than her values she would never have left dev to be with maan ...

n the thing that he wanted her to believe in thr love's purity ...

so loved it ur whole concept ...

actually a very different approach yet again my u

definitely i want part 2 of this ...

n for sure very very very soon

thank u for this lovely piece of writing

keep rocking

update soon

luv ya

sobia

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Guzara Waqt

@Mango_Melody

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OMG!!! This is really remarkable OS, everything so balance b'coz its very difficult to plot proper foundation for making good story as like SS and FF...!!!

I think, i should parmanently add this word in Dev's name...KAMINA😡, Meera is big stain in the name of friendship😔

Wow!!! Maan was secret stalker in Geet's life and saved her...!!!

Waiting for next part

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

fab os budddy👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏
but y cnt dev gv her div nd y cnt she marry maan
u hv gvn a logical info bout rh incompetence but its treatment is to gv an antibody within 72 hrs of childbirth but good xplanation
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm😃😃😃😃