yaariya part 7 updated @page 11 23rd Jan - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
maan armaan n prem loved it..
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Part 2

All three had become fast friends. Maan has taken a part time job in a coaching centre as biology teacher. In college there was so much of fun. There were two girls- Ridhima and Heer. Ridhima was from Armaan's city Bhopal and Heer was from Prem's.

Oye dekh Ridhima aa rahi hai.. or wo bhi Heer ke sath...

Armaan was little angry.

HI RIDHIMAA, HI HEER.

Hi maan.

Hey ridhimaa can u give me ur notebook of first class. I was absent and u know that these nalayaks never write any notes.

Armaan glared at him.

Ridhimaa smiled and gave her notebook and went towards canteen with Heer. Armaan and prem luked in their direction.

Then armaan stood up and came face to face with maan.

Fine listen me now. I know u know that i like ridhimaa. That's why u always comment on her. Stop this warna it won't be gud for u.

Aahaa aahaa lover boy getting angry. Ab jara love story bhi suna de.

Kya sunau yaar. My bad luck. Usually in a love story girl getting irritated with a boy but here it's girl's father. Ridimaa's father is a Docter, a very famous one in Bhopal. He is on good terms with Bhaiyaa. But once i was ill 5 years back. When he came at home, i was shouting on bhabhi. Actually i was irritated at something else and bhabhi became my punching bag. I really regretted it later but for ridimaa's father, i became a rich spoilt brat. I tried to improve my image many a times but none worked out. Last thing i did was to become a docter. But he still doesn't like me. Meri love story ka villain bana hua hai mera honewala Sasur.

What about ridhimaa??

I don't know. Maine socha tha ki medical college me admission ke baad sayad impress ho jaaye par yaha to koi farak hi nahi pad raha.

Ek gayi par dusri baaki hai.

What???

Heer.. ridhima nahi to heer sahi.. maan said dramatically

Prem glared at Maan

Fine. I will tell u. I like her from my early school days. She lives in my city.

Thoda aur. Isme maja nahi aaya. I know u don't have guts to tell her. Par phir bhi? Thoda or masala chahiye..

Bhaad me ja saale. I'm not going to tell u anything.

Abe itna kyu ro raha hai. Chal teri khushi ke liye mai use rakhi bandwa lunga. Ab to khush ho ja.

****************************************************************.

Hey Heer why this golgappa face??? Kya hua.

Kya batau yaar. This idiot is really getting on my nerves.

Kaun sa idiot.

Prem

WHAT???

Or nahi to kya.

Tujhe pata hai ab teen saal ho gaye mujhe proposal ka wait karte. But this guy. He is too shy to say anything.

What's the story girl.

Arey koi story nahi hai yaar.

We were in same school and same section. He was a very cute guy. Usse impress karne ke liye mai sati-savitri bani phirti hu. U know mere sath ulta case hai. Ladkiya ghar par sati savitri or bahar chudail banke ghumati hai or mai ghar ki gundi bahar sati savitri banke ghumati hu. Mere ghar pe pata chalega ki mai bahar jaake itni bholi or nadaan ban jati hu to halla mach jayega ki ghar ki gundi bahar itni bholi ye kaise..

Ridhimaa was amused.

Or nahi to kya. Wo itna bhola or shy hai. Usse to bholi or shy ladkiya hi pasand ayengi na. Wohi banke mai ghumati hu. Phir bhi ye ladka kuch bolta hi nahi...

Common Heer. Jaruri to nahi ki usse tujhse pyaar ho..

Babes, yadi aisa nahi hota na to mai yaha nahi hoti.

Kya matlab???

U know...

No i don't know.

Then shut up and listen.

On entrance exam day, i was alone at the centre. It was still 20 minutes before exam. I was so nervous that i started crying silently.

After few minutes i found a letter and a water bottle near me. Letter was all about how intelligent and talented i am. And surely i'll clear it. it gave me imense strength.

So letter was from Prem???

Yup i recognised his writing. Class me itni baar uski copy churayi thi maine wo writing kaise na pahchanti. Or waise bhi after exams i saw him looking for me at the centre. I so much enjoyed it. He followed me till my home. He didn't know that i know he is following me. Haaye uss din ki yaadein lekar ji rahi hu. Par issne to sharmaane me Bride ko bhi piche chod diya. Dekhna ab jab bahar jayenge to ek eye lock me kaise lal pilla ho hayega. I'll give u a Demo.

Ridhimaa was smiling at her new crazy friend. Of course she also thought that Heer is very shy girl. Par reality really amused her. Then she got distracted by Armaan. Uff. Kya kare iss bande ka. She is struck with him since tenth class farewell when he sang a song for his invisible love (that's her)

Pyaar ke is khel mei, do dilon ke mel mei
Tera peecha na mai chodunga soniye
Peecha na mai chodunga soniye
Bhej de chahe jail mei, pyaar ke is khel mei

And he is doing the same. Yaha bhi wohi sab. Looking at her, singing a song, glaring at the boys looking at her, or phir shyaam ko piche piche hostel tak jaana. But she doesn't mind it. Her mother also likes him. But the problem is with Papa. Armaan has always been in bad books. She doesn't know the reason. She sighed.

Well of course as told by heer, Prem actually blushed when he saw Heer looking at Heer. Ridhima was having difficult time with prem blushing and heer cursing. She could hear Maan whisteling. Of course she knew the reason. He must be teasing both of his buddies. Oh man! College is fun.



Well guys it was a filler update. Geet will enter in next update.

I know thoda stupid hai

par phir ur one like can make my story's life..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye kisne kha its filler its toogud par haan eagerly wating geet's entry
chalo chalo u cont sun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunima.

oye kisne kha its filler its toogud par haan eagerly wating geet's entry

chalo chalo u cont sun


muhe laga ki maaneet ko na dekh kar log bhaag jayenge...
thanks forliking..😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story,but very exited to know whats going on in maaneets life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fandeep

Nice story,but very exited to know whats going on in maaneets life


thanks for the comment...

next part me hoga thoda sa maneet.. actually mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya hoga..
dar bhi laga raha hai ki pata nahi kisi ko acha lagega ki nahi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mannu tune nayi kahani shuru ki aur mujhe pata bhi nahi yaar.
At least keh to deti ya pm karti.
But i am excited to read it.
Will read and comment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

Mannu tune nayi kahani shuru ki aur mujhe pata bhi nahi yaar.

At least keh to deti ya pm karti.
But i am excited to read it.
Will read and comment😃



lazy bum.. no pm..

abhi kar rahi hu...
mujhe lagta hai aadhe logo se gaali padegi for no pm and adho se for pm..😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...da da friendship...sooo sweet...armaan n prem sooo adorable...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue padhke me is thinking, this Maan is like, Yaari hain Imaan, Mera, Yaar Meri Zindagi.
And as far as Geet is concerned he is, Teri Duniya se Hoke Mazboor Main Chala, Main Bohot Door, Bohot Door Chala.
Part 1 - Dil Chahta hain kabhie na bite rangile din...hum na rahe kabhie yaaron ke bin.😃
Part 2- Loved Maan's trick to ugalwaofy Armaaan and Prem's love story.😉
Heer toh badi fulto nikli yaar😆
Aap ghar pe kuch aur, bahar kuch aur nazar aati hain, bakhuda Prem ka toh band bajaate nazar aati hain😆
So Ridhima Armaan, Prem Heer ka booking ho chuka hain.
Ab baaki hain humare Hero, Heroine and how come it ended up as the situation in the prologue.
Chalo ab aise intruiging prologue dogi, toh updates bhi fata fat dene padenge.😉
Congratualtions Mannu for starting a new story.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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