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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome

fabulous update

liked a lot dear

continue soon

waiting for more

waiting⭐️

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Niharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

With no mistake of her, geet's life is getting spoiled...

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shalinisaran89

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg...watz gonna hapn nw..???

btw awesome upd...

lov it...

bechara maan

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Mayamaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb one love it so much

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mardej

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one
update soon
waiting eagerly
update soon
waiting eagerly
nice one
update soon
waiting eagerly
update soon
waiting eagerly
nice one
update soon
waiting eagerly
update soon
waiting eagerly
nice one
update soon
waiting eagerly
update soon
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MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ohhh...poor Maan .. 😭

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pretty disastrous SR.But in the situation which they got married,it was bound to happen.

Its sad that what will happen next,after this kind of repulsion fm Geet's side.And Maan,after getting rejected at his SR,it may take a long time to settle things.

Gr8, Gr8 update.

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saro

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Posted: 12 years ago

Plz give the next update coz lost in ur FF

Thinking wht u have planned for geet ... Poor girl.

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update

Loved the way written

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

me here with my first offical comment for you

here me try to show

both sides emotion

hope i justify both

if you like it please tell me

by PM

me waiting for your reply😉

murado waali ghadi aayi thi

besabri se jiska intezaar kiya

woh haseen raat aayi thi

par kuch alag sa ,

na ho kabhi kissi ke saath jaisa

vaisa woh kuch apne saath layi thi

ek masoom si kali

o khilne se pahle hi

murjhaane si thi lagi

uske liye tho woh tufaan layi thi

is bechaari ne

thik se aasmaan na dekha tha

arre usne tho abhi osse ki thandak bhi na paayi thi

aur yeh raat ,

uske liye tufaani barsaat le aayi thi

yeh akeli hi nahi thi

is par yeh maayusi chaai thi

kyoki ,

sapno ke sach hone ki aas toh

iss bhavree ne bhi lagaayi thi

dekh kar iss kali ko

iske mann ne li angdaai thi

ek din yeh kali sirf hogi meri

pahli nazar mein hi yeh aas lagaayi thi

kya kasoor tha ,yeh iss bhavree ka

kee

isse pyaar hua is kali se ,

jo abhi phool bhi na ban paayi thi

NAHIII

NAHI

yeh kasoor toh hai uss maali ka

jisne sabse khubsurat kali ,

usske baag mein sajaai thi

tut gaye sab sapne inke

kyoki aaj ki raat sitaaro ki jhilmil hi nahi

apne ander chupa kar tufaan bhi laayi thi

ab dekhna hai ,

key kya sach tha pyaar bhavree ka

jisse hamne ,

kali ko sawaare ga woh ,yeh aas lagaayi thi

ok dear

me done with my few lines

please tell me

did you like them

me waiting for reply

please pm me soon😊

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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