DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
what a shocking n sad start...
waiting to read more...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new story
nice start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Awesome update Richu..
Nice start...
Maan loves his sister sssooo much...
He was ssooo happy to meet her after a long time...
But Shreya ne apne bhai se milne se pehle hi suicide kar li...
OMG..she was pregnant...
Kahi Shreya ko kisi ne pyar ke naam pe dhokha toh nahi de diya???
Waiting for nxt Richu..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Sady sady start 😭.. quite captivating .. wanting to know more :D 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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❤️DIVINE LOVE❤️
PART - 2

The truth Maan hear on phone right now spin his whole world. His all sences shaken badly. How it could b possible,only this que is swimmed in his puzzled mind. He straight went to Shreya's room and hunt up her room. He threw all things on floor in search of clue. He messed up her wardrobe nd found 1 hidden file. He open it nd,d written words broked him mor. These papers clearly tell him that she is 2 months preg. He shattred more 4 few sec,bt then his mind moved 2 d culprit who is behind all this? He wants 2 know now who is d 1,who forced Shreya to end her life. Was her sister forced by som1 or betrayed? This 1 revealation violate his mind. He clenched his messed hiars and falls on floor. If soon he doesnt found d ans of que,he definately gone mad. He wants to gave justice 2 his sister. He again strt searching may he got som clue bt found nothing which is helpful. Suddnly Shreya's phone rang again. He ans d call. It ws from her frnd Priya. She ws unaware of her death. Maan told her and she went to shocked. In evng she came with 2 mor frnds to console him. Maan enquired from them. He told them about her condition.

'bhaiya hume zada to nai pata,par itna zarur keh skti hu ki kisi ne uske sath zabardast to nai ki hai.coz wo to kafi khush thi.agar aisa kuch hota to kam se kam wo mujhe zarur btati.infact death k 5 dinn pehle main usse mili thi to sab normal tha.',she clear his 1 doubt atlest.

'uska boyfrnd kon tha?kon tha uski life me?',Maan clenched his fists and asked in remorced filled voice as he failed 2 save her.

'bhaiya hume nai pta.kai bar pucha pr wo kabi nai btati thi.kehti thi bhaiya or hum sabko 1 sath surprize degi. Hum me se kisi ne aaj tak use nai dekha infact hume to uska naam b nai malum hai.',now situation again com 2 starting point,Maan hv no clue about d culprit. All 3 was stood 2 move from dere. Suddnly Nisha,her another frnd stopped.

'bhaiya aap Shreya ka mobile check karo i m sure us ladke ka no usme hoga.shayad apko kuch mill jaye',she suggest him and show a way 2 find him. He checkd her mobile and asked frm her frnd. Dey recognised all no.nd no num.is of dat mystery person. Den Maan head striked. He chekd her dialled list on d day she died. D no she dialled last ws unknown 2 her all friends. Maan have strong feeling dis is of his culprit's no. All 3 went away. Maan wants 2 make sure. So he called in co.nd asked 4 a customised bill of Shreya's no. With in 1 day he got and his doubt coverted in2 a certainity. Sherya used 2 call sevral times in a day, on that particular no. Maan dialled bt it was not in use now. His fists tighten and muscles get stiffed. His eyes turn red. He just want 2 found that person and end his life like his sister do. He hired a priv.dectative and he assured him dat he will send him full detail of that person. Two days passed and Maan's restless increased with every passing sec. The very thought that a person who spoil his sis.'s life is still breathing made him insane. He wants 2 kill d culprit at any cost. Just he got 2 know who is the one. He is drinking his drink in frustration when he recieved a parcel. It was from the dectative he hired. He hurridly open it nd recieved 1 file from him. In this file dectative send full detail of d person who owned that no. His name is Viraj Handa. Age-25. Lived at xyz...with his only sister Geet handa. He is reading about him when dectative called him.

'sir i hope apko apki file mill gai hogi?',he enquired.

'r u sure ye no ye khud hi use karta tha,kisi or ko to nahi?...',Maan wants to sure about him.

'sir maine puri enquiry ki hai 10dinn pehle tak ye no yahi shaks use kr raha tha.or maine iska email id ko b hack kiya hai.yahi hai apki behan ka wo mystery man. Lekin 1 prob hai ye achanak kahi gayab ho gaya hai or kisis ko b nai pata ye is waqt kaha hai. I hope sir ab apko sare jwab mill gaye honge.',dectative assured him that Viraj is d real culprit he is searching for.

Maan's nostrils fluffred. He wants 2 kill him but how as he is not in India. Maan cant sit now as he got about him,but still Viraj is far away from his reach. No 1 had any clue about him. Whole day Maan spend in thinking how he can take revange from him and finaly he know what he had to do now.

'wo khud bill me chup gaya hai na koi baat nai.ab main b uski behan k sath wahi karunga jo usne meri behan k sath kiya hai. Geet handa u will gonna pay for ur brother's sins.',he said determindly 2 himself while sipping his last drink before he left his house.


PRECAP:-
He hovered over her and she trying her level best to save herself from him...

Scary precap haaa...😲
dont threw ur chapples on me...
Heheheh have some patience guys and pls share your views...


WANNA SAY THANX TO ALL WHO COMMENT AND LIKE AND SUPPORT ME 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:-


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Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Lvd the part,but scary precap.
Waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
so maan finally came to knew who has done this to his sister
precap is really scary
dekh if u make maan do anything in this story also then mein boling ki mein age nahi padhungi soch le atleast i dont want it to be like RL ok 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aa gayi line pe
phir se maan ban jayega shetaan😈
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wat a update
shreya had a boyfriend nd that none other then geet's brother
wat will maan do with geet
u always give scary precap😲
eagerly waiting and thanks 4 pm
update soon😊

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