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Posted: 12 years ago

Love this pic 😳😳
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Part 25

Morning, Maan n Geet rushed to hospital after getting call from Dev that Dadi had come back in conscious. Their happiness had no bound though had worry also that what if, Dadi doesn't approve Geet as daughter in law and this marriage!! ..

With jumping heart Maan runs to Dadi who was laying pale there on bed. She did not show any happiness nor did talk a word. Geet stopped on door only had not courage to go inside and face her. Maan was sitting on bed was holding Dadi hand, pouring his all sorrow in that little time. Dadi looked him. Her smile was to sculpt on lips when her eyes travelled to Geet who was looking her with feeble doe shaped eyes. Her smile vanished and she turned her face other side. "Maan aap jaaiye yaha se!!'' with difficulties she spoke.

Maan was shocked. Never Dadi had showed her dispute in him like she done now. He looked her amazed. "Dadi!!'' he tried to speak..

"No Maan! Don't say a word; I had never thought that you can cheat me like this. You knew how I had been dreaming for your marriage it was my biggest wish but per aapne..'' her voice chocked. She started coughing breathing fast due to weakness.

"Dadi you don't speak.. take rest please !!'' Maan somehow made her calm and sleep and came out where Geet was still, looking them with hope though she knew it was quite impossible now when Dadi didn't accept her yet she was praying to Babaji. She did not notice that Maan was stood behind her looking her with worried face. When Geet didn't notice for long he kept hand on her shoulder "Geet!!''

She turned back looked Maan, was sadden was very dishearten and had a shade of failure on face. She didn't like him looking so disappointed. "aapko office nahi jana!! You have important meeting today'' she said with smile.

"Geet wo.. I'm sorr..''


"Shh!!! You don't need to say anything. And you don't know one thing but I know that everything will be alright..hm!! '' She corrected his collar his tie and caressed his face with gleaming face of her. Her happy face made Maan light and he smiled back. "Bye.. '' he kissed her forehead and left for office.

They didn't know that Dadi was looking them with dozy eyes. Through glass door her yellow pale eyes were witnessing them when saw Geet was entering in. she turned her face other side ignored her. Geet came and sat on chair next to bed. She caressed Dadi head and said "Dadimaa I know you didn't like what happened. But trust me Maan never wanted to hide this from you. You know Dadi, the day marriage happened Maan was so impatient to tell you first. We were coming to here also but then had been told about your illness. Doctor said not to give any worry tension to you and so Maan decided not to tell you anything now. Believe me Dadi Maan is very nice. He never can even think of giving any trouble to you. Aap unse naraz mat hoiye ..Please!!'' she was waiting to Dadi for any reply when nurse came for medication. Geet had to stood up and leave. Once again she turned back holding opened door, hoped for Dadi response but failed and left out with heavy heart..

Evening, Dev was with Dadi in hospital when had a call. It was from his men who informed that Brij has already come and they made him stay in farmhouse. "Hmm alright!! Mai aata hu '' Making excuse to Dadi that his some friends are coming from abroad he left to meet him.

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In Farmhouse,

Dev reached and saw, Brij was roaming around in house with amused eyes. Everything kept in house would show thickness of its owner pocket which was making him famished more than ever before. He had been told that Mr. Khurana wants to do business deal with him and thus Brij was more than happier to meet him. Dev gave him more time to see what he had possessed and after almost thirty minutes, he entered.

"Hello Mr. Brij Handa!!'' Dev pronounced. Brij turned back and looked Dev.

"Mr. Khurana?'' he replied then frowned "have we met before?''

He was not sure what was thinking can be right or wrong. He was not sure that Dev was same whom he had kidnapped.

"You're thinking absolutely right Brij. I'm the same man who you had selected for your sister's marriage'' Dev smirked.

"Why you called me here?'' Brij tone changed.

"Don't be afraid hmm!! I'm not going to complain in police for what you did but I have a business for you where you can get good return in your favor only and that also, without any invest!!'' Dev stated to the point which increased Brij curiosity to the most. He was not getting what business Dev wanted to do with him whereas he had no any extended business himself. "What deal?'' he replied confused.

"The deal where you can have net profit without investing a penny'' Dev turned his back to him

"Dev don't talk in riddles. We are not that broaden businessman that you ,,, Khurana's can do deal with us!''

"I know who you're and what; you can give me. I know every little thing about your family and also know that what.. I can get from you!!''

"I think we should come on the point Dev''

"Yes of course!! I too don't like puzzles you know!'' he sniggered. "And the deal is I want to marry your sister Geet and in return, you can get the amount you want!!!!'' Dev spoke with a hidden smirk


Precap :Brij Meets Dev continues


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update

Dadi is angry on Maan for hiding the truth

Geet try to clear MU from Dadi mind

Dev hidden agenda in meeting Brij is not a shocked at all because Dev is lusting on Geet beauty he has no feeling at all n Brij lust is for money

is brij in lust of money going to declare Maan tht Geet had not married to him n is all fake????
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww aj bhut senty update di lovu...mujhe accha laga in sabke badh v maan geet ki bare mein socha how wud she feel? aur geet ko console karne aaya but geet also maturely handle d situation ...wo toh thik hai buttt wht d hell is this?...who d hell dev think of himself?...😡...usne assa kaise deal ki veerji ke sath...geet already married with maan then how with dev...grrr😡
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

haila ye kya update tha???

so dev ki nazar geet pe hai

he wants to marry her!!!!!!!!!!

kutta kamina!!!!!!!!!!!!

hope maan got to know soon about his ill intension towards geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Ugh .. Hate dev
Doesn't he knows that geet is already married
Do continue Plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Iss dev ki toh
How dare he wants to marry geet
Hope dadi accepts geet
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eww , i need now tow naintara's pistol , one for Dev , another for Brij 😡😡😡

Ohh , actuallly i don't need two pistol , i need two bullets 😆😆😆

Aaa , less MAANEET moments .. 😕😕

Kanjuss , u know na I am greedy
Give me MAANEET moments , i don't want to miss MAHI MAHI tune 😳😳

aab jaldi se update bhi de de

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Posted: 12 years ago
********** dev🤬
opps angry dadi😡
hope she forgives maaneet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god yeh kya dev too much horrible ,he is lusting geet ..plz i want dadi to accept maan geet marriage...
maan geet ko burre dev se bachao..

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