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Pihu

@Parimishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

awesome ud..

Sooo sry 4 cmntng sooo late...exms the...

Cmng to ud...

It was emotional...
at some point even i felt chocked...u hv written it sooo beautifully...
Maan and His dad's moment made Geet remember her parents...her childhood..all those beautiful memories...

Loved the way Maan defended Geet...and appreciated her work...I agree wid Maan...Geet is sooo perfect in her wrk dat her rough designs are also sooo clear...

"I was surely blind in rage to not see her innocence.. hell with me.. I didn't let her prove her point too.. I am really Maan's father" lol...this line made me chuckle...

Awww Yash gifted Geetu choclate box...

Geetu dnt wry...very soon u'll be hvng a family...n u'll hv ur empire back...

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Nice teaser but why they attack on tia ???? if they behind Geet...

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Geet, she is very smart.. knowing little Tia is blaming herself, she quickly made a story to make Tia understand that she isn't at fault.

Maan teasing Geet, I'm really impressed..

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#774

part 7 n 8
awesome updates

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

missing u and update yaar...pls cont soon..

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kannalaga

@kannalaga

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

chapter 1 is not readable...though logged in with member id.

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#777

👏Jst read all parts of dis ff. Loved it.

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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#778

lovely prologue

poor geet

her family is so cruel and money minded

thank god she was informed before hand by the advocate about the ill intention of her family

poor girl struggling all alone to survive

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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#779

lovely update

so maan has full control on family and business

but does not have any control on tia his little sis

geet trying to start a fresh and want toi work so that she can get some experience to take care of her empire good going

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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#780

lovely update geet trying to adjust with her new life

pinky trying to prepare her for the interview

every one is attracted towards geet's beauty

MSK in is bossy avatar was awesome and his office atmosphere and look you described it superbly 👏

all man eyed geet ufff she was so uncomfortable in all this but she have to
shasa in jealousy rejected geet not fair
maaneet first meeting was fantasty