For Dr. Khurana, with love, MG SS, pg 177,178

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

Originally posted by: sweetkj
*thud*

Shaking Sweety! Chidking water... Sweety kuch toh bolo...

thud good, thud bad😕 m confused now...

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

thanx 4 d epi

it was a wonderful OS

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

thank u for writing this story Avi...would love to read that ss which you are planning to write...pls start it asap...

i seriously never expected such a hooot hooot story from your side...what more will i comment after reading such a hot update...where did u hide this writer in you for soo long...anyways coming to the update...

i can picturize cute lil maansi bossing around ...

as far as maan forgiving his dad, dont know why, i dint like that decision of his...they shouldnt have let him stay with them atleast...itna punishment toh banta hai boss... but as u said geet with her magnanimous heart wouldnt let maan do that🤔 but at the end its good to see the whole family together...😊

love this Dr.Khurana for being such a loving and caring and understanding hubby bee😳😊

loved maans bahaana, low sugar😆 but i dint expect geet to believe this act of his...after being with him sooo long how could she belive that..

"Main complaint karoonga, dekho yeh sab galat hai, meri bhi kuch izzat honi chahiye", his hands crossed over himself as if to protect himself.

"Tum mujhe aise use nahi kar sakti, meri complaint har ghar tak pohuchegi".

She chased after him with a pillow in hand while he ran for his life around the sofa.

"'Main pregnancy hormones se pidhit patiyon' ka morcha laga doonga, hum Prime minister se milenge Geet", they were playfully running around the sofa now.

"Agar kissi ne na suni, toh mein Parliament mein yeh issue uthvaooga".

She was laughing her heart out tears running down her face as she chased after him.

"Geet, Geet, Geet...mujhe bhagwan ke liye chod do", he was laughing hard with her antics now.

"Tumhe bhagwan ke liye chod doon, toh mere kya hoga Maan, mere pregnancy hormones ka kya hoga...", she pretended to look at him lecherously laughing along with him

this entire part, i found it soo soo cute ...maan being so filmy...😆

altogethr the update was tooo good and very well written and narrated...thanx a ton for sharing this wonderful story with us...

PS: btw must say aashu di ke saath dosti kar ke , u have become totally like her...sachhii...😆

PS: omg !!! this is the longest post i have made in IF...

PS: just realised its already feb 14, toh

❤️❤️HAPPY VALENTINES DAY❤️❤️

Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

Originally posted by: had2bu

Shaking Sweety! Chidking water... Sweety kuch toh bolo...

thud good, thud bad😕 m confused now...

*slowly opening eyes!!*

*remembers epilogue*

*in lala land again*

☺️

Edited by sweetkj - 12 years ago

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

"Main complaint karoonga, dekho yeh sab galat hai, meri bhi kuch izzat honi chahiye", his hands crossed over himself as if to protect himself.

"Tum mujhe aise use nahi kar sakti, meri complaint har ghar tak pohuchegi".

She chased after him with a pillow in hand while he ran for his life around the sofa.

"'Main pregnancy hormones se pidhit patiyon' ka morcha laga doonga, hum Prime minister se milenge Geet", they were playfully running around the sofa now.

"Agar kissi ne na suni, toh mein Parliament mein yeh issue uthvaooga".

She was laughing her heart out tears running down her face as she chased after him.

"Geet, Geet, Geet...mujhe bhagwan ke liye chod do", he was laughing hard with her antics now.

"Tumhe bhagwan ke liye chod doon, toh mere kya hoga Maan, mere pregnancy hormones ka kya hoga...", she pretended to look at him lecherously laughing along with him.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

OMG it was too gud..

please please write the SS..me waiting for ur ss.

thanks for writing this beautiful story and also for future story...

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shruthiR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

I loved the last chapter and the epilogue. Awesome!⭐️ The ending of the prologue where Maan said that he will write a complaint to the Prime Minister and the Parliament about the attyachars husbands have to go through because of their wives during pregnancy was hilarious🤣 Absolutely loved this SS👏

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

OMG... Avi... hayee too blushy blushy at the moment...☺️☺️

Loved the epilogue... In M-G land at present ... will comment once I recover from this... ( rest assured about the length... can't help...😉) But loved it...😊

All waiting for the new SS ... an extension of their earlier courtship days...🤗

Happy Valentines' day to you dear... Thanks for such a LOVE ly update...🤗

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1088

hay... fida upon Dr. Khurana :)

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1089

Hay loved the maan teasing ..poor hubby lol

Amazing epilogue

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1090

hey dear..happy vday! Awesum epilogue! Loved it! superbly written! cld nt wait 4 pm! Mansi is the apple of everyone's eyes! Maan n his family nw reunited! Geet expecting!