edited after epilogue
uff i am actually blinking my eyes with my red flushed face ..lolthe 1st part was the bestest starting i have ever read for any OS ..👏👏
loved all the teasing words my Dr.Khurana ...😆
ehehehe ...Dr.Khurana drooling over his wifey ...😉
after all she is angel ..
loved that one a bit too much ..
the way geet scrunched her nose n went away giving a complete equal attitude ...⭐️
work hard Dr. Khurana ..😆
he is such a player ...god what word games he was playing with his MIL in in front of geet ..
that was the perfect moment in a family gathering ...😳 😉😉
haayee geet giving in his hot n handsome hubby ...lol
its too hard to resist such a sexy Dr. *winks*
but loved the way she teased him ...😳 😆😆
bechara ...will be having a hard time till next 4 hours ..rolf
i was actually laughing like a maniac with that S**object dialogues of maaneet ...🤣
that part was too good ...👏👏
uhh .. u were so right that that point of Mrs. Sharma's comment ...people in such gathering really dont bother be4 speaking n saying things about anyone n everyone regardless of the fact that this could hurt the other one to bits ...🤢
i soo much hate such gossip queens ...😡😡
that was actually a surprising moment for me coz with the way u started i never expected that mis-carriage thing coming ...
though i loved this little twist here ..👏👏
n yes defo will really want to give an applaud here for bringing up all the emotions so well n most importantly in such a brief manner ..👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️
loved the blend of sadness n love ..passion fun n romance here
too well to be described equally ...⭐️
n yes mrs. Sharma actually got the well deserved treatment by Dr. Khurana
it was soo beautiful to see that silent understanding b/w them
the way he supported her after that mishap was awestrucking ...😊
uff by the end of part 2 i was lost with the way u showed thr love ..n the fact that maan desired her nt just for her but him ...😳 👏 ⭐️ 😳
i loved it ...actually the best part of this OS for me was this thing that he was supporting her for his own self ...
that poem ..uff qatil thi
added a complete new side to this OS ...loved it to bits ...👏👏
perfect ending to this mindblowing OS ..⭐️
finally they r blessed with the most precious gift of Almighty Allah ..
that cute fighting scene was cherry on top ...😃
***well ur last words were really appreciable ..lol
can i get an appointment with this ever so handsome Doctor pluueejjj writer ji ...
epilogue ..
hayee ..tou maaneet's family is back to them ...😊
yrr woh kuch proverb tha na ..
asal se ziada sood pyaara hota hai ...aur bete se ziada bete ke bache pyaare hote hain ...😳
lagta hai same is here ...😃
but loved this whole idea of night out without mansi ...😳 😉😉
BTW MSK ki beti hai ...bossiness tou hugi hi na ....😉😉
rolf pregnancy harmones se pareshan patiyoon ...🤣🤣
god i dont even getting should i say him bechara ya fir lucky ...😳😳 😆
awesom epilogue dear ..
loved it ...👏👏
that teasing element here is just soo good ...⭐️⭐️
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thanks for sharing such a beautiful OS ..🤗
n for all ur efforts in this ...loved it
keep writing n plzz do pm me for ur future OS plzzz ...
n thnc for the pm of epi ..😊
luv ya
sobia
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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