The parent, NEW THREAD-PAGE 1,MAY 1,2013 - Page 89

Awesome update dear
Loved maan teasing dadimaa almost making himself a gay ::)))
But suta hates maan hope everything will be fine between them
Maan ko pehli nazar mai geet aachi lagi hope they meet soon
Continue soon dear

Awsome update n tooo emotional dear...

That spoke so many things
Maans love for suta from childhood
An unknowing attraction towards geet
The bond between geet & suta
Not to miss sutas hatred towards maan
Especially being a teenager it will be even more difficult
But wonder why Ashok failed to make his daughter feel special
Was it only his responsiblilty types or he feared his own mistake!!
But still feel bad for her

WAW!!!i think by far the parent is the most complicated story written by you!the story is soo much unique with different complicated relations.i was not able to reply in the earlier updates as i used to b soo much gloomy reading the updates,in fact the part where there was the scene with geet's being frightened and wetting her trouser is like imprinted in my mind.the scene u wrote was soo much poignant to express a little girl's horror for her abuser tht i cudn't stop my tears to pour continuously and today also whenever i read an update of this story it reminds me of tht scene.
u're writing this story with soo much pragmatism and emotions tht it reflects through each and every update.
geet was being abused at a tender age without any kind of fault of her and she, we don't know wheather is aware bout an offspring was given birth by her.suta her daughter was unnecessarily a victim of destiny and was deprived of the love of both her parents and the person who loves her immensely,maan's going2b an object of her hate without any fault of him jst bcos all the love which was meant for suta by her father was showered on maan as his student.here maan is going to taste the same feeling,which his mother has tasted,always being deprived of his or her own child's love.
in all this i'm eagerly waiting to see the change in our awn lil chidi due to the dirty game,destiny has played on her,how an innocent,sweet,lil,adorable chidi has transformed in2a young woman and how she's coping up with the life which was plain&simply unfair to her.
i think geet's gonna give tution to suta as she's week in hindi.the entangled relations are going to b unentangled 1by1 with the effort of our own chidi and maan.
this's gonna b1hell of a journey&i'm anxiously waiting for it's unwrapping&...truly speaking u're a magician of words:)

This is how they will come together by holdin maan's hand.

Hey Palin:
I feel so incompetent writing any kinda comment for this story. Seems like my emotions get the better of me. But then again how can you separate out emotions from this story?

My heart goes out to Suta just like it did for Chidi though for different reasons. Seems like she has never had a mother figure and a namesake father figure growing up. Atleast Maan had his Dadi and found a father figure in Ashok. She has turned out to be a strong girl with good "upbringing" nonetheless. I do not blame Suta for her dislike of Maan, I probably would have felt the same way had I been in her shoes. She needs the love and affection of a parent and hope Maan will fill that gap in her life. Its not going to be easy though!! I can understand a father may find it hard raising a girl alone but why the lack of love? or is it?...She has found a true friend in Abhi though, that makes me happy.

So Maan "found" Geet, I hope its to not only go against his Mom. I also like the fact that Maan's " being Suta's guardian is not a bone of contention among the members of his family. Maan shares a wonderful relationship with his Dadi...a true joy!!...sigh your story always touches my heart👏. Thanx for the story.

heart touching update...maan had developed fatherly feelings for suta evn b4 ashoki given him resposiblity ..oh i realy felt so bad 4 suta poor child we cant evn blame her for hatred 2wrds maan as she is right at her place she felt neglected n thought maan had taken her place...it wont gonna easy 4 maan ..maan married bacteria 😆 ...loved it