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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Sparrow = chorui in Bengali.

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

updated my bak bak on pg. 1😆

Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: palindrome

aaj hi yeh nickname mujhe pardan kiya gaya hai shika k dwara...🤣
however i like pilladu too..😊
you know pilli means cat in telugu...
ab aap mujhe aur bhi jyada pyar karoge na...😳

Pilli Pilli Pilli meri Billi Billi Billi.🤣

I love it.

I love you

I love cats.

Therefore, I love the catty you.😆

Meaow Meaow.

As I said I can't call you Pallu, so Pilli it is.😃

Thanks Bratty😉

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Ok I am commenting here, since the reserved one is full of me venting on you.😆

I am so very glad you started this new Kahani.

Loved how you drew a clear picture of a pastoral life on a cold winter morning, from the shivering doodhwala to the sparrows waming themselves near the 'Chullah'. That is what I love about your stories, the details. I feel as if I am right there, shivering with the cold, and waiting to warm myself along with the sparrows. Another example of your detailing is how you have linked Geet's age to the movie KKHHand the year it was released.😊

So, Mohinder and Rano are surrogate parents to Geet. Though Rano's childless past is sad, I am glad she is blessed with the ability to love her friend's child. Not everybody can do that, but those who can like Rano, ae truly blessed with happiness. For no ties, but love binds them😳

Love Chidi. Typical teenager, and a major bhakt of King Khan and when I too say his name I think it sounds like Sharook Khan.😆

I love the 14 year old Geet chirping all over the house. She is adorable and can't wait to see how you develop her.😃

Teri har kahaani is like a dropof nostalgia for me.

My father used to have a Rajdoot when I was very young. I remember me and my sister pushing it from behind every morning wit our Baba, because the darn thing just wouldn't start with a kick. Lathon se nahi manti thi, dhakke dene padte the usey😆

Then my bbaba would sit first, then me with my arms barely able to wrap around his round tummy, and then my sister behind me. If we were going long distanc, baba would tell us stories and keep asking us questions, so that we would not fall asleep behind.

And guess what, he sold it to a Punjabi guy after a few years. So I wonder if the doodwala in your story has humara Rjadoot.😆

Love this new Chidi ki kahani Pilli😆

Though I'm still wonering about the title, 'The Parent'😃

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awesome Start Drome 😃
Its Chidiya in Urdu 😉

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Rajdoot Bike, Masterni, Chidi, Ajeet Punjabi newspaper, Sharook Khan, and many such words or scenes that made this update special. It smells of Punjab or rather say any Indian rural family. Nahi laga tha ki koi IF pe aise bhi likhega! Amazing and dil ko touching :D.
Thand si padh gayi :-).