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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow...the start was very beautiful...the way you described about the winter's chillness...and all the intricacies of a normal morning in a household was very nice...

Tho geet lost her parents and now rano and mohinder are looking after her like their own child...

Waiting for the nextpart eagerly...continue soon...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: keerthi90
Wow...the start was very beautiful...the way you described about the winter's chillness...and all the intricacies of a normal morning in a household was very nice...
Tho geet lost her parents and now rano and mohinder are looking after her like their own child...
Waiting for the nextpart eagerly...continue soon...

very glad to have a comment from you after a really long time...😊

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice dear

would wait for these like ur other stories

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome concept ...you will do gr8 like always

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shonameet
Congrats for the new story pallu!
"chidi"...geets nikname! Sad that her real parents are no more but she still has her parents..rano & her husband..& their luv with her.
Liked the detailing! Geet likes shah rukh khan so much! She was crying for that news paper!
It seems that her taya ji and other's are good with them..i hope so.
Luvd the concept! And it has ur special palin touch!
Egar to see how u will take it further.
Waiting for more!

Thank you sho much shona...

You would come to know in next chapter why did she need that "news paper" so badly...There is one more reason apart from shah rukh khan...😃

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surbhijn106

@surbhijn106

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Liked the part very beautifully described geets place in everyones heart

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prema_ks

@prema_ks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Amazing start Palin.😃

By the way i am not liking your PPS😭

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prema_ks

@prema_ks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank you sho much shona...
You would come to know in next chapter why did she need that "news paper" so badly...There is one more reason apart from shah rukh khan...😃

That means Maan Sing Kurana is a Bollywood superstar😲