MG FF-DREAMS OR LOVE?re-edited pt9 pg33 (13-5-13)

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet
Sorry 4 the late comment yet again ...not able to like don't knw Y I am through mbl ...nt understanding it ...://

But but but ...the lover boy maan is really cute ...ehehe
Poor soul ..smitten by the love cupid at 1st sight ...

Hayeee ..pampering his sister ...obeying his father ..accompanying his friend a perfect DREAM BOY ...y nt MSK is nvr less than perfect ...
Loved the update prachi ...
N u described geet's character really well n in a brief manner ...
Really liked ur sinple narration style ...

Really going to be a exciting journey here I suppose ..
Update soon dearo ...

Luv ya
Sobia

oye soory ku bola 😡

nd thanks dear

bas aap sab se hi inspire hui ho

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

teaser

maan-hii but drooling over geet who was looking very beautiful in her red gown

once again he wispered ROSE but this tym someone heard it

it is non other than maan's best buddy sam..he just dragged maan from there

which is irritating him to the hell

maan- whts dis sam y u r dragging me

sam-pahle yeh bata waha pe kya ho raha tha

maan-kya😲

sam-dont try to behave over smart wid me m ur childhood frnd knows everthing abt u

maan-teri bakwash band ho gae toh chale andar cake cutting bhi hona h

said nd walked inside

sam- maan babu tujhe pyar ho toh gaya par tu manege nahi

lekin mai v tera dost hu jaan ke rahuga woh lucky gal kaun...😆

"mission meri dost ki dulhan ka pata lagao"😃

abhi tak pura write nahi kia h soo till then enjoy teaser 😃

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

superb

fabulous update

very well written

liked a lot dear

continue soon

waiting for more

waiting

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88
superb
fabulous update
very well written
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting

thanks a lot dear

will update today 😃

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

read it in one go
awesome ff
continue soon😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

What a dhamaka update dear...U r really going in great pace...Every update has class...And must say ur picture section is really awesome...I think I said this previously too...I m waiting for next one dear...Plz try to update soon

Lov

Sonia