MG FF-DREAMS OR LOVE?re-edited pt9 pg33 (13-5-13)

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing emotional update! Poor Geet! Nobosy listens to her! Maan comes n asks her y she is sad bt Pallavi comes n he leaves! Update soon! Well written

thanks dear 😉

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88
superb
fabulous update
liked a lot dear
very well written
continue soon
waiting for next
waiting

thanks dear 😉

will try to update as soon as possible

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maaneet.dewani

@maaneet.dewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Awesooomeee yaar love it love it kya lekhti hu yaar n yeah friends r the only one who can make u smile in the worrest suituation n i read here something bak bak machin ohhh i love u yaar n pray karo kabi mein roh lo geet jesi magar dekhne pe dekho ke wo hi hu mere samne samjh rahi hu na😉 love it but yaar intezar nahi hota jaldi jaldi update de na pleaseee love u waiting for next

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: maaneet.dewani
Awesooomeee yaar love it love it kya lekhti hu yaar n yeah friends r the only one who can make u smile in the worrest suituation n i read here something bak bak machin ohhh i love u yaar n pray karo kabi mein roh lo geet jesi magar dekhne pe dekho ke wo hi hu mere samne samjh rahi hu na😉 love it but yaar intezar nahi hota jaldi jaldi update de na pleaseee love u waiting for next

hehehehehe mitra aap bilkul pagal ho lolzzz

n ya i used bak bak machine..beoz when i was writing it aapki yaad aa gae soo daal dia 😃

n aache se samjh rahi hu .😉.aap bas jaldi wapash aao

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

here maan was waiting for next day to start fressh ..to know her pain

maan- mai aapni ROSE ki aankho me kabhi aasu nahi dekh sakta ...they are precious rose u cant waste them...i never liked to see my ROSE fafded n pale..it should be always fresh n beautful..n i will do everything to make my ROSE happy...n i will know the reason of her saddnes cahe kuch v ho jae meri ROSE kabhi sad nahi hogii...

he promised to himself that he will know the reason of her saddnes...n took a box from bed n started

caressing it ..i wanna to give u today only ROSE but i hurted u sorry ROSE but tomm. i will shortout everything

n give this beautiful gift to u my ROSE ...m waiting for tomm. for u my ROSE

will update shorty guys

till then enjoy teaser n socho maan kya gift dega geet ko 😉

on their 1st date 😛

love prachi

Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

nice teaser...

like is not working..

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

superb

fantastic update

liked a lot

very nicely written

continue soon

waiting for next

waiting

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88
superb
fantastic update
liked a lot
very nicely written
continue soon
waiting for next
waiting

thanks dear 😃

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

this ff is now on hold

i ca'n't write more ... i m ot in situtaion to think any thing..i know all must want to know reason i can say ony that

i lost my dreams ..in short myself need to fix my life otherwise everything will be runied in my life hope u all will understand n i promise the day i will make everything good will return wid this ff

sorry hope u will understand my prob.