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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Aaahaannn


updatewa on tuesdaywa

i likeyyy


And I likey you updatewa on wednesdaywa! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
diii Palin posted a new story. Bhagooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
btw mayya mayya me will un rejerb my coment after 3rd of feb. Theek hain?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

btw mayya mayya me will un rejerb my coment after 3rd of feb. Theek hain?


That's okay, Shika! Take your time. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update

y he is so scared to talk in front of her

jab bhi geet samne aati hai Maan Khurana ka mind kaam krna band kr deta hai😉😉



Of course! Jab bhi wo saamne aati hai toh Maan ka mind kaam karna band kar deta hai isi liye toh he's afraid he'll say something wrong agar uske saamne baat kareyga! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

maan babu found out where to find her..
nice..



Yep! 😉

Thanks Mannu! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

me thud.!!


yaar mariyum.. i am in awe..!!

what a turn in starting..

they being partner in event.. was something which we were able to guess!! :P

loving it more and more.




I thought everybody would guess ke he wasnt actually caught!😆They being partner wasn't planned. Idea mila tha kahin se! 😆

I'm glad you're liking it. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

I am sat here with the biggest grin on my face, this is so sweet and romantic! The song 'Pehla Nasha' immediately comes to my mind as I read this, I love how you write from both of their POVs - it's so refreshing to see Geet acting more calm and collected whereas poor Maan turns into a pool of love filled drool whenever he sees her.


Please do continue soon, I genuinely can't get enough of this so I'm heading back to re read the previous chapters and let my heart swell with this beautifully romantic story.



This is actually the song going around in my mind when I wrote this. 😃
I'm so glad to have you here and above all praising this little experiment of mine with such beautiful words! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu


😊Tuesday!


I promised, didn't I?😊

Reading your story is like having a chasni mein dooba hua rasgulla. Sweet!

Reading your comment is like having a sweet gulab jaamun (my favourite!)😃

The first meeting, his quietness, his hmmm... uncertainity on both ends. The pace of their thoughts almost even in their steps toward each other. Must say it is nice to have a hero jiski bolti band ho jaati ho😆.

Voila! I'm enjoying this part as well!😆

If he is such a gone case already from far away what will happen to him when he has to start working with her.
Looking forward to their project together.

Now this is making me nervous! I don't know what I'm going to do!😳

Bhooton ki fan --- appreciating the wonderful story... Subtle, sweet and totally addictive.

Bhoot here taking a bow!😊

Thanks for updating Mariam!

Thanks for being here Avi!😊

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