If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 61

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

The story is getting pretty interesting.Tho less but Maaneet are talking.But really yaar,jake ko aaj ka hi din mila tha to talk with Maan.

Anyways loved d update.

Originally posted by: Onir

How sweet & romantic. The best thing about your writing is that it emphasis on minutest details & subtely makes you feel the emotions felt by the leads here. The whole update leaves a sweet tingle within me ... which makes me want to just smile & appreciate all in it. 😊

It's very humbling to be on the receiving end of such praise. I really think it's you guys that's making the story worth being read!😊

Bechara Maan everything & everyone conspires against him to make a good impression on her. It was real -the way you showed their interactions... the uncertainity with the nervousness well potrayed. Usually it's the bad or untrue image that is perceived following which good impression is formed but here it was totally reverse... Her good & somewhat comfort level she was expecting & presuming to be felt with him & all thatshe regarded about him was blown away by his apprehensions & jittery feeling of not ruining it... But somehow even after all difficulties in actually establishing a good friendly rapport with her, he has at the end of the day made some progress in knowing about her & also having had near normal conversation without much awkwardness.

Yup! Bechara Maan! But do you know Paulo Coelho's words:
"And, when you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it."
So maybe everything separating them will have the opposite effect!😉

Thanks for the PM... please continue soon. Want to see how this duo put together their whole act inspite the initial goof-ups, nervousness & hesitations... & overcome their own prejudices & assumptions about the other... 😉

I'm glad you like it Onir! Will try to update sooner!😊

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Can't believe MSK has prob to talk 😆
😃 geet caught him while he was drooling at her
Lovely update 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

superb part maryam👏

loved it😛

Originally posted by: april12

Awesome update!

When Maan messes up his 1st opportunity...my reaction🤢.

I was like common at least a smile will do.

But its ok. He better make it up with the coming ones.

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply brilliant..loved it..l

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
awesome...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: shabnam22

poor maan...ku6 bol hi nhi paya...lovely update...

Originally posted by: Susegad

I just called to say I love you.😆

So you are replying to comments. Me is doing the same. Though what I actually want to do is post my update.