If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 31

Originally posted by: Susegad

</div><div>I just knew it. "Or... Is he?" These words and Geet's blank look in that last line, mujhe pata hai,tum pin marke hawa zaroor nikalogi.😡

Originally posted by: mayyo13

This is fun. Inflating hopes. Pin maarke deflating them aur phir... You never know! 😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ruk tu.😈

Revenge is a dish best served cold. Soch samajh ke thap thapake jawab doongi😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Oops. Did I hit the wrong nerves? Never mind! Bring it on! 😈

Originally posted by: Susegad

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By the way, did you read Mannu's OS. She mentioned your name somewhere, but wasn't sure if you read it.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Oh yes, I've read it. It's such a sweet story! 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm sorry that it wasn't clear enough for you to know I've updated. If you want, I can send you a PM next time. 😊

The bold part is something important to the story which you've caught on. Or at least I plan to make it an important one! 😃

Thanks for being here Onir! 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Thank you so much! I'm glad you took out time to read and leave your feedback. 😊

The bus stop scene you're referring to is written by Avi and hence the credit for that beautiful part goes to her. 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

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You've been working on this?! I thought you were joking when you said the anthem was missing lekin aap ne toh kar dikhaya!! 😆

I was trying to sing it in my head with the rhythm of hum hain raahi pyaar ke but then I started laughing and down went the rhyme! 🤣

Hats off Apa!! 😆