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PART - 26

Geet is getting very irritated due to her condition. Most worst part is she is totally dependend on her enemy. She cant able to do her small small work even and looked to others for help. Which gave her feeling of being use less. Today she again struggling with her hairs. As today is sunday and her nurse is still not came. her all hairs are in a messier state and irritates by coming on her face. She is fuming on herself. Maan is also not in a rooom as he stayed in study mostly,coz he dont wants to make her uncomfortable with his presence around her. After doing his morning job,like from her wakening to her brush,washroom,feeding her fruis and medicine,he left the room. Geet's hand had a plaster so cant move properly. She is trying harder but not so easy,sply when your bone is broken. Luckily Maan came on time and saw her fight with her hairs. He trying to keep him away from her but unwantedly his feet took him to her after short intervals of time. He couldnt stop himself for thinking about her and automatically pulled to her. Seeing her miserable condition he ran to her.

''hold on Geet. Dont forced urself. Asie to tum khud ko or hurt kar logi.'',he screamed worridely.

''so what shall i do? Ye baal aankho me aa rae hai?'',Maan again lost in adoring her even in her most messiaer state and the way she cribbing made him insane. scared by his conti.gazing she drew back and demanded raggedly,''why r u looking me like that? I know you felt mockry on my position?'',She taken his gazing as his teasing. Her words broke his trance and he relaxed his stiffed body.

''relax Geet.y i mock when you are looking so beautiful even in messy hairs.'',Unknowingly he confessed his feelings. She stare him shockingly and Maan realized that he hda made a big mistake.''i mean u r naturaly beautiful,to itna pareshan mat ho. Main baal pichhe kar deta hu firr aankho me nai aayenge.''

His simple confession made her completly blank. She looked at him through her almond eyes. She try to read his face,assessing the truth of his words before asking,''r u ok? R u sure u r talking about me?'',she couldnt believe on her ears.

''yes i m ok and i m talking about you only.though i never admit,but you are beautiful beyound any one's imagination.'',he confirmed in silky voice and muddled her mind more. The way he behaved these days is going out of her head. Maan stands,pick her comb and come near to her. She again mistaken him.

''Maan humari dushmani apni jagah hai,but it doesnt mean that you make me bald for that. Pls dont target my hairs.'',she scared,dont trust him yet. Her voice is trembling dont know what he is going to do with her hairs.

''i told u ki mujhe ab tumse koi ladai nai ladni. I know what i had done is not reversable and mere sorry is also not enough for my sin.'',his voice reflecting his repenting. Geet getting shock after one another. She turn mute,while Maan combed her hairs gently making sure not to hurt her. He removed all the clogs very carefully,she dont even realise about them.

Maan came forward and show her she look herself and sighed. ''Geet i m ready for my punishment. Tumhare theek hote hi tum mere liye jo b decision logi wo mujhe manjoor hogi.geet i know i had spoiled ur whole life.mujhe aisa krne ka koi haq nai tha.i m sorry.'',he glance her. ''I m ready for Jail also.'',Regreatfully he added.while saying his eyes having a repent and pain filled mixed emotions. His voice is broken and throat blocked badly. She glance in his dark eyes which are heavy like he drop tear anytime,but being a man he wont let it easily. Geet felt as her heart turn heavy too,and the reason was yet to be known.

There was a silence for a while,then come out of it she said suddnly,''tum baal bahut achhe banate ho,pehle kabi part time job ki thi kya?'',the abrupt change of topic,though a surprize,was a welcom one.

He saw her amusingly and she giggled seeing his shocking face. '' sorry i m just jocking.'', the day they met it was the first time he saw her as much happy and laughing like a crefree baby. Seeing er laughing fortuiously a smile crept on his perfect m shaped lips too.

''chalo kam se kam main kisi kaam me to achha nikla. Wrna dad to mujhe use less hi samjhte hai.''he sarcasm on himself,but the pain which he hiding behind his words is conveyd to her. Again silence closed both. Meanwhile her nurse came and he lefts from there.

But this incident bring major changes in their lives and attitude. Maan admitt his deed and apolozise for that. He felt ashamed and guity which is senced by her.Geet stop saying bad,tesing and taunting words to him. She trying her level best not to get harsh with him. Somwhere he grabbed a soft corner in her heart. Both getting normal with each other. It bcom their daily routine. Maan daily wake up early to do her morning works. In start,she start trembling,when he swung her up into his arms,but now she get use to of it.

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..
Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Maan was all prepared,how to carry her. But every time her slim yet curvaceous body coming against his set his heart beating faster. For her part,Geet felt distinctivly awkward earlier. After one month the awkwardness passed. He bore her weight with such ease that by the time she need to go to washroom. Now she start feeling safe,protected and feminine,and to quite like the novel experience. It was their daily routine. He placed her on bed and placed cusion under her foot to gave her comfortable position. Maan do his office work from home at take care of her needs which quite enjoyed by her. She felt spl when he stands bowed in front of her all wishes.

Kehna hi kya, mera dhakal naa koi,
Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,
Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,
yu Bukhaar hai, kyu beqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Pyaar hai shayad

sun dawn in one of a peacful mrng. Maan awaked her. She glance him with her droozy eyes and found him in his office attire. She sat quickly.

''aaj itni subah 2 ready ho gaye?'',she get curious about him. Althouh they not bcom friends yet but still getting alarmed about each other's actions.

''commn Geet jaldi se brush kar lo mujhe aaj office jana hai.'',he commands sharply and she staring him,raisng her brows.''aaj meri first presentation hai isliye office jaldi ja raha hu taki meeting se pehle thodi prepration kar lo. Itna nerveous to main first class k baad aaj ho ra hu.''he cleared her all doubts quickly and she hiding her smiling seeing his restlessness.

After brushing he leave her in washroom. When she came out and realizing with a sinking heart that he alone making preprations for her bed,she bite her lips. With a curiousity in her voice,she asked,''why u changed the covers?nurse ka kaam hai ye to.''

''i have done it coz i dont have enogh time so jo kaam ho jaye utna achha.'',he placed her on a bed and feed fruits.

''tum jao,i' ll manage.'',she said in alow voice.

''nai pehle tum kha lo,nurse aa jaye firr main jaunga.'',he assured her.

As nurse came Maan leave instantly. Somya trying to stop him fr atleast breakfast but he ignore her offred and vanished like a fast wind.

''le ladka kabi kisi ki sunta kyu nahi hai.'',Somya cribbed at his annoying attitude and Geet smile weakly.

Whole day paas with a gr8 boredom for Geet. No one is for her today. Casually Somya and Arpita spend sevral hours with her,but today they also dont come to see her as both have to go a cultural event. Nurse is also vanished before time. Samarth and Piyush came to aske for her health but they are also in their office and the person whom she is hell angry is Maan. Who didnt leave her for a sec,today ignore her completely. Calling her is far away,he dont even ans her calls. Geet felt like a lefted toy which is threw away in a dark corner. She fuming badly.

Maan arrived at home and found killing silence. He reached to kitchen first. Cook is preparing soup for Geet.

''Geet ne abi tak soup nai piya?'',he check his watch.

''bas sir abi la raha hu.'',he calming his raging tone.

''do it fast.'',he commands and ran to her room where she half laying on a bed. Hearing a knob sound she glance in excitement. As he entred she turn her gaze. Maan came and sit near her. He approach her sweetly,wanna share experience of his first presentation. He is very excited but all his happiness vanished when Geet glared him with her fire emitting eyes. He get numb coz he saw her like that after a whole month. He swallowed hard.

''what happnd?bhook lagi hai?'',he stat with a casual. But instead of answering she glared him again.''Geet cook bas soup la ra hai.howz ur day geet?'',he asked softly.

''bahut hi ghatia or boring.'',she burst atlast.

''kyu sab log kaha hai or waise nurse kaha hai?abi uski khabar leta hu.mere aane se pehle wo kyu gai.'',he showing fake anger to calm her.

''wo to 5 baje hi chali gai thi.'',she told him stiffly.

''kyu?aise kaise ja skti hai? Uski duty hai tumhare sath rehna?'',he blamed her.

''usko jana pada coz uska beta beemar hai.'',she clered.

''oh!or bhabhi or mom wo b nai hai kya?''

''no unko ek cultural event ki wajhse jana pada.''

''y u not stopped one of them?or Nurse kam se kam mujhe ek phone to kar deti jane se pehle',he cursing everyone

''phone? Usko na utha k dustbin me daal do agr ans nai karna hai to.she made u call more than 10 times,but you are the most busiest person on earth.no need to ans hai na?'',she cribbed furiously.

''aaj to kuchh zada hi bure mood me hai.pls god save me.'',Maan checked his phone and found her missed calls.'sorry wo meeting me bahut time lag gaya or phone silent pe tha isliye pta hi nahi chala.'he said mildly. Now he know how alone,uncared and lonely she felt. Meanwhile cook brought her soup. Maan took and signled him to leave.

Holding her patience of not burstuing on him,she trying to snatch bowl of soup from him. She denied taking his any help as she was angry on him. Maan know that she is not fit and her hands still aching so he also tightned his grip and insisting her to take meal from his hands. But being a born stubborn Geet never heared anyone. She grab bowl from his right hand which is her weaker side as she is left handed,and poured whole bowl of hot soup on her. Maan alarmed quickly and drenched her with cold water. He wants to save her from burn injuries and he succeded but in this,her all clothes turn wet and messy. Both looking at each other miserably. Maan first place her on couch and change all bed covers. But she also need change coz staying in wet cloths for long caused her another health issues. The que which is banging both's head was who? Who will change her clothes? Somya and Arpita is not at home. Nurse is alredy on a leave and due to strike of docs it is very difficult to arrange another nurse on a such a short notice. Maan's body shivred from many bad thoughts. He striken by an idea and called her parents. RP ans his phone. He pretend very calm and asked for Avantika and Ayesha bhabhi? RP dissappoints him by telling that both her mother and bhabhi were out of town to attend some family ocassion. He cuts the call and gave her a shattred look. A stroam of emotions is running in both.

''Maan gave my clothes i 'll try to change at my own'',she suggested.

Maan gave fresh clothes to her and went outside. Almost 15mins passed. He gave a knock sound with his knuckles and com inside. Geet was still in her wet outfits as her injurd arm not allowed her to do any of her work at her own. Maan pace turn pale. Many lines occured on his face,showing his helplessnes. He swallowd hard and clenched his eyes and fists tightly.''soch kya raha hai Maan tujhe ye krna hi hoga. Par wo kya sochegi? What if i hurt her again. Lekin iske alawa or koi option b to nahi hai.aise use geele kapdo me b to nai rehne de skta. What if she catch cold?'',he is arguing with himself. Partiialy dived in two thoughts,he is getting more tensed and blank. He opend his eyes and glance at her weak and wretched face. His shoulder and jaws stiffned and he moved to her. Sitting opposite to her,he pulled her slowly in his embrace against a broad chest. Their faces were so near and he whispered repently.''i m sorry Geet,pls forgive but i dont have any other option,excet this.'',while apolozing he unzipped her nighty from back,slipped his hands inside and removed it,taking his time,coz without seeing and avoid hurting her it was a work of patience. Such close contact sent her a shiver,made breathing difficult and set her heart beat faster. He sucessfully stripped off her nighty but more difficulties was waiting for both. Now its turn for her inners. Although these days she avoid uppar inner as par doc's instructions but still her lower needs change. Maan try his lvl best not to touch anywhere except the fabric portion. He closed his eyes and tored from both side. She was so close to him so he clearly senced the thumping of her heart. He quickly grab her fresh nighty and made her wear as quick as he can,taking very care of her arms. When she finally slipped in her outfit,Maan parted and leaned her back to bed. He quickly pick up her all wet clothes and escape from the room. When he came back after couple of mins, and found her sobbing his heart bleeds dreadfully...

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