MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 7
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so geet plans to become independent and complete her education

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~~PYAAR~~


PART 8

Its been two days geet was in delhi..jay had made sure that geet was safe in delhi.. although he tried to convince to stay at the his flat but she denied.. though after much arguing .. jay made geet to stay in the college hostel though he double checked each and every thing… their were security arrangements for the hostel and he made sure that there were no boys lurking around the hostel.. well in the beginning geet was all annoyed she was highly irritated that her friend cum brother was making her go all mad..she wanted to pull his hair and give him a long lecture not because he was doing all this but because … the main reason.. the care he was showing to her she didn't want to get addicted …she wont be able to take if something happens to him or he will turn around from her…

Jay looked at geet..after two hours he will go..she will be here all alone.. he took her outside made her familiar with her surroundings and gave her all the visible gyan that made her to cry out loud…

Jay had ordered their lunch ..they were sitting in a well known restaurant..

Jay: GEET IDAR UDAR MAT JAANA..KOI PROBLEM HO TOH CALL ME IMMEDIATELY.. AND IF YOU WANT ANY HELP IN STUDIES THEN ASK YOUR WARDEN SHE WILL GIVE YOU THE BEST TUTORS ..AND HAAN LOOK AT THEIR BEHAVIOUR BEFORE YOU TOOK ANY DECISION..MERI BAAT SUN RAHI HAI GEET..

Jay asked her when he asked her not reacting..

Geet nodded in a YES and gestured to continue….

GEET: AUR KUCH BHAIYYA…

Jay frowned and continued with his gyan…

JAY: AND HAAN DON'T SULK LISTENING TO ME .. AGAR YOU NEED MONEY TOH DON'T HESITATE.. PROMISE ME GEET..

Jay with a purpose took her promise else he know that what kind of his sister is… geet smiled a little and promised him but she took a silent pledge not to make herself weak infront of everyone….

Maan took care of priya she was the only sibling he had and that too so dear to him.. being with priya made him to forget geet… it was night when maan came to priya's room she was trying to get up.. though she was unable to do so..

Priya hold the rim of the bed to get water … this is usually she does at night she cant sleep early but the girl always sent her take care away as she don't want any one to get disturb because of her but every time she forget that the care taker was for her… somewhere she is hurt and guilty for herself but she didn't let herself show…

She was about to fall when maan catch her on time..he made her sip water he himself let her drink and was about to go when priya mummered…

Priya: sorry and good night bhaiyya..

Maan was all restless in his room.. he still couldn't get was that any coincidence that geet and geetanjali were too much alike… or she trapped him…

Maan saw himself standing infront of him and accused his own self…

MAAN: TUM THE JISNE TUMHARE PAAS AANE KE LIYE MAJBOOR KIYA THA MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA WO NAHI THI AND YOU LEFT HER ..DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW IS SHE… ZINDA BHI HAI YA…

MAAN closed his ears…

MAAN: shut up just shut up….

He immediately dialed her number but no one picked it up… his heart beat was raising he just wanted to hear her voice he just wanted to know that she is fine… he know that he was wrong and now he cant go to her knowing what he did….

But to his bad luck she didn't picked up…

MAAN: wo theek toh hai.. kahin use kuch…

MAAN: TUMHE KYA FARAK PADTA HAI YOU ARE JUST RUTHLESS AND ARROGANT MAAN WHOM SHE MET TUM USKE MAAN TOH KABHI THE HI NAHI NA GEET KE AUR GEETANJALI USE TOH TUM BHOOL HI JAO MAAN.. YOU DON'T DESERVE ANY ONE OF THEM…

Shailja looked at a frame with garland ..she wiped her tear and looked at her husband…

Shailja: yash hume maan ko sab kuch bata dena chaiye… kahin bahut der na ho jaye…



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Posted: 12 years ago
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What truth is Shailja talking about.
And maan is finally thinking about what he did with Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan got time 2 think about geet..
n want to know she is alive..
loved jays care for geet..
what is shailaja talking about..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update

what truth shalija talking about

maan worrying for geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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which truth maan's mother talking abt????
nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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truth
nice update lov it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! JAy is s good friend! Maan thinking abt Geet! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kisike dil todna toh maan khurana koi tumse sikhe...pehle saath nibhan ka vaada karte ho phir todke chale jaate ho...abb pastanese kya faida...tumhe kya koi mare ya jiye...tum toh sirf apne baare mein socho...pity u maan...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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