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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
wht maan did is totally wrong...but maan n his ego...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
part 6
nice part...
poor Geet...
Maan will regret so much later...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
awesum updates,...pls pm me! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
awesome work dear
can u please add me to ur pm list
pm me too when u update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
hi thanks 4 da pm...fab sad update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
i read all the parts dear
they are lovely
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~PYAAR~~

PART 7

first off all i big wala thanks to all the readers and especially commenters..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

hehehee girls u wanna kill maan .. and i can guarantee u that if u want u can personally kill him..but phir geet kya karegi i had to think🤔

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It was after one week geet was with jay..she has decided that she will never let maan know intervene in her life..geet has tried to learn from her past experience and she knew she won't live here any more she cant be a burden on jay… he has already done enough..

Geet went to jay he had just came from hospital..he warmly smiled looking at geet..geet gave him his tea…

Geet: BHAIYYA IMAIN YAHAN SE JANA CHAHTI HUN.. AAPNE JO KUCH BHI KIYA HAI MERE LIYE MAIN USKA EHSAAN KABHI BHI NAHI UTAAR SAKTI .. MAIN KAL HI JAANA CHAHTI HUN.. YE JAGAH SAB KUCH MUJHE USS INSAAN KI YAAD DILATA HAI JISNE EK BESAHARA LADKI KO SAHARA DEKAR WO SAHARA CHEEN LIYA.. MAIN BILKUL THEEK RAHUNGI PLEASE I NEED TO GO…

Jay smiled a little he cant be mean to her if she wants to then she will…

He handed her with some papers… geet looked at him with questioning gaze …

Jay: AISE MAT DEKH GEET .. KHOL KE DEKH…

Geet opened the envelope it had some cash a cheque book credit card and the keys … geet didn't knew what to say but definitely she cant take it.. she wont be able to..she needs to stand for her but not with jay's help…

Geet: BHAIYYA I CANT TAKE ALL THIS.. YE SAB..NAHI YE THEEK NAHI HOGA.. I WANT TO STAND ON MY FEET..MAIN YE SAB NAHI LE SAKTI..she very silently gave him all the things.. jay just took all the things except the bank cheque book and cash…

Jay: YE SAB TOH TERA HAI GEET… ORPHANGE ME MOTHER NE MUHJE DIYA THA… YE TOH TERA HI HAI..ISE LENE SE MANA MAT KAR.. AUR I WONT PRESURRIZE YOU FOR ANYTHING..TERE ADMISSION KI BAAT MAINE KAR LI HAI.. AND WE NEED TO GO THERE TOMORROW ITSELF…

GEET: BUT AAP … YOUR WORK EVERYTHING ..I WILL MANAGE MYSELF…

Geet was reluctant she never want anyone to be at any discomfort due to her and here jay was saying that he will accompany her as a guardian.. that was more than she expected…

JAY: I WILL NOT LISTEN TO YOU..AND MERI BEHEN KAHAN RAHEGI KAISE RAHEGI COLLEGE ATMOSPHERE SAB PATA KARNA HAI… I CANT LET YOU GO ALONE NA CHOTI… AFTER ALL PATA NAHI KITNE GHAYAL HONGE MERI BEHEN KO DEKH KAR…

Jay tried to lighten the mood but nothing came on its place…

GEET: BHAIYYA KOI NAHI DEKHEGA…. MAINE TOH SAB KUCH KHO DIYA HAI…

instead geet went all gloomy..maan had done a huge mistake by not listening to her and he himself was suffering in this… he was ignoring his family and all ..just his business and this was starting to affect his health ..he was becoming rude and arrogant now he usually shouts at his staff he needs a calm..that was her.which he had been paying since then..its been three weeks..which were no less than any hell for him…

Maan was sitting for breakfast..when he noticed that someone is missing.. he asked …

Maan:MOM PRIYA KAHAN HAI..WO NAHI AAYI… IS SHE FINE …

Shailja maan's mother answered..

Shaija: MAAN USE FEVER HAI … SO WO SO RAHI HAI… AND ABHI USKE EXAMS BHI HAI SO SHAYAD STRESSED HAI WO…

Maan didn't had anything he just immediately went to priya's room..there he saw her sleeping..his sixteen year old sister sleeping..she was looking pale..he sat near her and caressed her face..priya stirred in her sleep.. though the fever was lowered but she was weak….

Maan: WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME..

Priya just made a baby face…

Priya: I AM SORRY BHAIYA.. HOW ARE YOU… AAPKE PAAS TOH TIME HI NAHI HAI APKI PIYU KE LIYE..MY BROTHER IS EXTREMELY BUSY NOW..

She complaint in her feeble weak tone.. and turned her face away from maan..

Maan made a sorry face….

MAAN: SORRY PIYU…

Priya: ITS OK MAANU..

Maan looked at her with wide eyes..

MAAN: KYA KAHA..

Priya just tried to back a little but it hurt her..maan glared at her… and took her in his embrace…

Maan: YOU COULD HAVE HURT YOURSELF PIYU.. DON'T YOY DARE TO DO THIS AGAIN..HE WARNED PIYU…

Priya: SORRY BHAIYYA…..

Yes priya was physically challenged her lower part was paralyzed and she was like this from birth and maan was very protective ..say over protective for her..a little hurt to her and he will just create a scene… but he didn't even find that he had knowingly or unknowingly hurted her also…


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
geet is trying to move away from maan aur maan is also becoming rude towards others
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shri12

Awesome
geet is trying to move away from maan aur maan is also becoming rude towards others



thanks dear yup

waqt ki maar hai..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Geet resolves to forhet n focus on her future! Jay is very supportive! Maan rude, grumpy! Maan worried abt Priya..well written, update soon

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